26: The Fall of Blood Mountain
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| (er) | The Story So Far [x2], Kai Name, Kai Weapon: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | armies of evil. Following the [paragraph break between these sentences] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x2]: | Plain of Darkness -> Plane of Darkness |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | supreme Disciplines -> Supreme Master Disciplines |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | treeline -> tree-line |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | the Monastery -> the monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Kai lords -> Kai Lords |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | milleniums -> millenniums [ik: millennia, as everywhere else] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | agarashi -> Agarashi |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x2]: | Sun-Crystal -> Sun-crystal |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | says Lone Wolf. 'Yes [New paragraph for new speaker] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | I will' -> I will,' |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Dwarven allies -> dwarven allies [ik: as everywhere else in this and other books] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Darklord armies -> Darkland armies [jb: Agreed] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | There he will be able muster his agents, -> There he will be able to muster his agents, [jc] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | First Order of the Kai were -> First Order of the Kai was |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | be able muster his -> be able to muster his |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | after all; it had -> after all: it had |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | 1,000-year-war -> 1,000-year war [JDu: Agreed.] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | my Lords -> my lords [lm: cf. three paragraphs down][<<]][jb: Agreed. Scanning all of the books for occurrences of "my lord" reveals that uncapitalized is used most often which actually is in contradiction of our Manual of Style. I'd suggest we change our MoS and standardize on lowercase "lord" except when next to a person's name. The exception would be "Kai Lord".] |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x2]: | my Lord -> my lord [jb: Agreed. Scanning all of the books for occurrences of "my lord" reveals that uncapitalized is used most often which actually is in contradiction of our Manual of Style. I'd suggest we change our MoS and standardize on lowercase "lord" except when next to a person's name. The exception would be "Kai Lord".] |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x3], 58, 82, 109 [x2], 129 [x2], 135, 170 [x2], 178 [x2], 207, 218, 226, 236, 242, 250 [x3], 254, 280 [x2], 315 [x2], 323 [x2], 346: | throne chamber -> Throne Chamber [jb: I'm tempted to go the other way. It doesn't seem to be used as a proper noun in most cases, except when it's named "the Throne Chamber of Andarin". In the cases where "Throne Room" by itself is capitalized, maybe we should add the "of Andarin". I'd also capitalize cases of "Throne Chamber of Bor".] [so: Fixed tssf: "throne chamber of Bor -> Throne Chamber of Bor"; and 41/294: "Throne Chamber -> Throne Chamber of Andarin" only.] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | War Thane(s) -> War-thanes |
| (er) | The Story So Far[x3]: | dates include a space [PGS: In the book, MS5063 is used, while you use MS 5063. Is this a general thing? Problem is, in paragraph 4 the date then breaks across two lines. I suggest, if a space is to be used, it should always be a non-breaking space.] [jb: Good thought. Fixed in XML.] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | that you will find at the front of this book. For ease of use and further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | on the last page of the book [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules [x2]: | ie -> i.e. |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | normal weapons and -> normal weapons, and |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Kai Name: | You can record your personal Kai name on the bookplate which appear on the inside cover of this book. [remove] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | symbols and -> symbols, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | their COMBAT SKILL is reduced -> their ENDURANCE is reduced |
| (er) | Disciplines: | battle wounds -> battle-wounds |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Magi-Magic -> Magi-magic [heading] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Old Kingdom battle magic -> Old Kingdom battle-magic |
| (er) | Disciplines: | magi-magic spells -> Old Kingdom Spells |
| (er) | Disciplines: | individual (or combinations of) elements that are available, -> individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof, |
| (er) | Disciplines: | remove or accelerate -> remove, or accelerate |
| (er) | Disciplines: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Disciplines: | dialect and -> dialect, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Kai Weapon and any -> Kai Weapon, and any |
| (er) | Disciplines: | venoms and -> venoms, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | Disciplines: | 1 to 3 -> one to three |
| (er) | Disciplines: | guild of magicians -> Guild of Magicians |
| (er) | Disciplines: | earth, air, fire, and water -> Earth, Air, Fire, and Water |
| (er) | Disciplines: | For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. -> For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. [IK][SO: This also affects Books 22-28.] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | strength and capacity of these fortresses increases -> strength and capacity of these fortresses increase [LM] [jb: Agreed] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his in animate body, increases -> Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his inanimate body increase [LM] [jb: Agreed] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | number and accuracy of these predictions increases -> number and accuracy of these predictions increase [LM] [jb: Agreed] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Lone Wolf (New Order) series -> Lone Wolf New Order series [jb: <cite>Lone Wolf New Order</cite> series] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | These bonus points, together with your extra Grand Master Discipline(s), your original four Grand Master Disciplines, your Kai Weapon, 5 and any other Special Items that you have found and been able to keep during your adventures, may then be carried over [lm: literally read, this implies that you lose your backpack] [so: "any other Special Items and Backpack Items that".] |
| (er) | Equipment: | (see the inside front cover of this book) [remove] |
| (er) | Equipment: | [so: Add 'How to Use Gold Crowns section. The currency of Bor is the Ain.] |
| (er) | Equipment [x8]: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) |
| (er) | Equipment [x8]: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | Equipment: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | Equipment: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Equipment: | a sword or an axe -> a Sword or an Axe [LM / jb] |
| (er) | Equipment: | magical axe, sword, or broadsword -> magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword |
| (er) | Equipment: | the axe ‘Alema’. -> the Axe ‘Alema’. |
| (er) | Equipment: | weapon -> Weapon |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | on the inside back cover of this book [remove] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | A summary of Combat Rules appears on the page after the Random Number Table. [remove] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | Only you may [you: bold; under Evasion of combat] [original is in italics] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | sumary -> summary |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | at the front of the book [remove] |
| (er) | Levels: | (You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery) -> - You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery [also: itals (ne)] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | [so: Add the Improved Disciplines text from Books 22-25.] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | eg -> i.e. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Spear, etc) -> Spear) |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | ie -> i.e. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | ie -> e.g. [second occurrence only] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | bolts, etc) -> bolts) |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | 'Improved Grand Master Disciplines' [remove quote marks] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | (eg, Broadsword, Quarterstaff, Spear, etc) -> (i.e. Broadsword, Quarterstaff, and Spear) [PH] [so: Also (ne) in Books 27 and 28] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | 3 yards -> three yards [PH: as per the GM books] [so: Also (ne) in Books 27 and 28] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Increases -> increases [PH] [so: Also (ne) in Books 27 and 28] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | range and numbers of insects so affected increases -> range and number of insects so affected increase [PH] [so: Also (ne) in Books 27 and 28] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | mastery of -> Mastery of [PH] [so: Also (ne) in Books 27 and 28] |
| (er) | Kai Wisdom: | gods -> Gods |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Lone Wolf [itals] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Brotherhood spells -> Brotherhood Spells |
| (er) | 1: | 14 hours -> fourteen hours |
| (er) | 1 [x4], 74 [x3], 121, 154, 190, 209, 240, 272, 322, 331 [x2]: | Sun-Crystal -> Sun-crystal |
| (er) | 1, 330: | Artifact(s) -> Artefact(s) |
| (er) | 2 [x2], 55, 109, 110, 112, 127, 163, 167, 174, 258, 285, 292: | weapon -> Weapon [jb: Although I now question the utility of this rule, following our Manual of Style which says, "The words 'weapon', 'backpack', etc. will only be capitalized when it refers directly to the Action Chart or to items owned by the character, not in the general sense of those words. (e.g. 'Record this Weapon on your Action Chart', but 'The Giak has no weapon'.)" we should not do this in 2 or 110, but make the changes in 127, 163, 174, 258, and 285.] [so: Also made changes to 55, 109, 112, 167, and 292.] |
| (er) | 3, 114, 232, 310: | Crack!, -> Crack! |
| (er) | 4, 162, 248: | wheatfields -> wheat fields [ik: as in 04tcod and 09tcof] |
| (er) | 5: | Mindblend [spell] |
| (er) | 7, 34, 61, 64, 76, 96, 101, 184, 203, 207, 215, 264, 268, 284, 303, 310, 335, 339, 341, 344: | Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell |
| (er) | 7, 203, 207, 310, 335, 339: | - Lightning Hand - -> Lightning Hand [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 7, 19, 79, 99, 106, 159, 325: | halfway though -> halfway through |
| (er) | 8: | knocked the -> knocked to the |
| (er) | 8, 31, 183, 244: | the first wave of the Shom'zaa horde reach -> the first wave of the Shom'zaa horde reaches [tp: Agreed <collective> of <collective> = singular (e.g. "the first wave of the horde comes") ] |
| (er) | 8 [x2], 22, 31, 41, 57, 60, 100, 109, 116, 143, 178 [x2], 183, 200, 202, 226, 230, 244, 250, 315, 323 [x2], 328, 350: | War-Thane(s) -> War-thane(s)[so: cf. "Inquisitor-Major -> Inquisitor-major" in Book 23.] [jb: I've seen this handled in many ways, so I think we just need to establish a standard and stick to it. For example, we use "Lord-lieutenant" in 02fotw, but I've seen it "Lord Lieutenant" in real life. Other real life examples which seem fairly standardized include "Governor-General" and "Inspector General" while "Attorney General" is sometimes "Attorney-General". It seems like we're bucking the trend by uncapitalizing the second word though.] [so: In the past, we have been going with Upper-lower (e.g. Chaos-master, Inquisitor-major, Lord-lieutenant). While this may be a little idiosyncratic, I'd be inclined to continue using this standard in the remaining books as an overall style that we have adopted. (Else, we should go back and reverse all changes we have made, which sounds very un-fun.) I'd personally, therefore, go with "War-thane", but I'm open to suggestions.] [jb: Hearing no objections, let's stick to our guns then. War-thane.] |
| (er) | 10, 343: | elementalism -> Elemantalism |
| (er) | 10: | priming power -> priming powder [lm: cf.ref.150] |
| (er) | 11, 103: | steeply sloping -> steeply-sloping |
| (er) | 12, 71: | naively -> naïvely |
| (er) | 13: | Huriedly -> Hurriedly |
| (er) | 14, 261, 301: | membraneous -> membranous |
| (er) | 15, 22, 23, 25, 32, 35, 36, 41, 45, 52, 61, 63, 65, 66, 82, 96, 97, 100, 105, 109, 111, 119, 129, 167, 168, 170, 175, 185, 196, 198, 207, 208, 209, 210, 220, 221, 236, 241, 247, 250, 253, 258, 263, 267, 271, 277, 280, 289, 293, 313, 314, 320, 324, 327, 337, 342, 348: | agarashi -> Agarashi |
| (er) | 15: | If you total score -> If your total score |
| (er) | 18, 19, 25 [x2], 102, 119 [x2], 146 [+s], 146, 164 [x2], 165 [+s], 211, 237, 256 [x2], 259 [x2], 304, 337: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) |
| (er) | 21: | disc -> Bronze Disc |
| (er) | 22, 116: | cannon and -> cannon, and |
| (er) | 22, 154, 212, 273: | Bow, or -> Bow, nor |
| (er) | 23: | tinderbox -> Tinderbox |
| (er) | 23, 41, 84, 103, 145, 173, 182, 187, 221, 235, 330: | backpack -> Backpack |
| (er) | 24, 91: | Your senses are screaming DANGER! -> Your senses are screaming 'DANGER!' [Or, "DANGER! -> <strong>Danger!</strong>"] [jb: I don't like using bold or italic text, at least not in Lone Wolf. We'll eventually need to come up with a good alternative there. A changed background color?] [so: Personally, I don't like the idea of a changed background colour--that's far more distracting than bold text, IMHO.] [jb: Yeah, what was I smoking that day? I'd suggest simply this: "DANGER! -> 'Danger!' "] |
| (er) | 25, 102, 119, 146, 164, 211, 259, 304: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 25, 146: | you drop your Bow -> [lm: but you don't lose the item, right?] [jb: There's a similar situation in 146. Honestly, I don't know whether you lose it or not. Seems like you could pick it up after the combat in both sections, and it doesn't definitely say that you lose it like it often does, but maybe you're still supposed to lose it? The reader is going to have to make the call, but should we footnote it to let them know?] [so: In situations like this in other books, we've substituted 'shoulder' for 'drop' since it's usually clear that the Weapon is not discarded, and this would obviate the need for another footnote.] [jb: I'm ambivalent about changing this, but it's probably the right way to handle these.] [so: Fixed 146 this way, but 25 is problematic. Added a footnote instead: "As the wording here is rather ambiguous, it is up to you to decide whether to delete the Bow from your Action Chart in this instance."] |
| (er) | 33, 154, 201: | rockface -> rock-face |
| (er) | 33 [Cap]: | encircles your basket -> encircle your basket |
| (er) | 34, 344: | - Strength -> Strength [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 35, 52, 253, 327: | irridescent -> iridescent |
| (er) | 35: | senses, and the lights of this glowing gemstone, both -> senses and the lights of this glowing gemstone both |
| (er) | 41: | 10 Ain -> ten Ain |
| (er) | 41: | backpack; it is -> Backpack: it is |
| (er) | 48, 158, 262: | odd (1 -> odd (i.e. 1 |
| (er) | 48, 158: | even (2 -> even (i.e. 2 |
| (er) | 50, 282, 340: | [jc: If the Kai Weapon you wield is 'Magnara', you will benefit from the bonus gained due to its unique properties.] |
| (er) | 57: | The horde hits -> The horde hit |
| (er) | 59, 94: | agonising -> agonizing |
| (er) | 59, 86, 99, 173, 245, 257, 288: | body, and waxy -> body and waxy |
| (er) | 61, 284, 303: | - Counterspell -> Counterspell [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 63, 101, 204, 220: | Korlinium -> korlinium |
| (er) | 64, 101: | - Sense Evil - -> Sense Evil [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 64, 66, 74, 82, 131, 135, 205, 209, 212, 223, 225, 236, 241, 270, 273, 295, 327, 331, 345: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | 65, 75, 126, 284: | seige -> siege |
| (er) | 65, 75, 97, 126, 263, 284, 314: | snaps and you -> snaps, and you |
| (er) | 65, 75, 97, 126, 263, 284, 314: | wheels, and observe -> wheels and observe |
| (er) | 67: | 50 dwarves -> fifty dwarves |
| (er) | 73: | Vinegar and -> Vinegar, and |
| (er) | 74: | Shom'zaa hideous -> Shom'zaa's hideous |
| (er) | 74: | Kai curing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 75, 223: | Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery |
| (er) | 76: | - Levitation - -> Levitation [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 83: | Grand Defender, and -> Grand Defender or higher, and |
| (er) | 83, 250: | Grand Guardian, and -> Grand Guardian or higher, and |
| (er) | 84: | bomb -> Phosphor Bomb |
| (er) | 88: | the the -> the |
| (er) | 92, 205 [x2], 225 [x2], 300, 345 [x2]: | wheatfield -> wheat field [ik: as in 04tcod and 09tcof] |
| (er) | 95: | impassible -> impassable |
| (er) | 96: | - Net - -> Net [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 99: | half way -> halfway |
| (er) | 100, 178: | battle standard -> battle-standard |
| (er) | 109, 129, 280: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord |
| (er) | 109, 188, 195, 219, 233, 269, 337: | Old Kingdom spell -> Old Kingdom Spell |
| (er) | 109: | tip-toes -> tiptoes |
| (er) | 112, 152: | current, then -> current; then |
| (er) | 112, 144, 167, 285: | weapons -> Weapons [jb: Although I now question the utility of this rule, following our Manual of Style which says, "The words 'weapon', 'backpack', etc. will only be capitalized when it refers directly to the Action Chart or to items owned by the character, not in the general sense of those words. (e.g. 'Record this Weapon on your Action Chart', but 'The Giak has no weapon'.)"] |
| (er) | 113: | (in battle frenzy) -> (in battle-frenzy) [also: itals (ne)] |
| (er) | 118: | of if -> or if |
| (er) | 123, 132, 213, 231, 312: | clang [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 125: | grievious -> grievous |
| (er) | 129, 280: | the Shom'zaa horde attempt -> the Shom'zaa horde attempts [tp: Agreed <collective> = singular (e.g. "a horde comes"), in most cases.] |
| (er) | 144: | approriate -> appropriate |
| (er) | 146: | erase 2 Arrows from your Weapons List -> erase 2 Arrows from your Action Chart [jb: Sounds good.] |
| (er) | 152, 298: | jug -> Jug of Vinegar |
| (er) | 152: | and and -> and |
| (er) | 153, 243, 267, 289: | Grand Guardian, turn -> Grand Guardian or higher, turn |
| (er) | 154: | Bow and -> Bow, and |
| (er) | 154: | Prince Leomin; it was -> Prince Leomin: it was |
| (er) | 155: | If you possess Assimilance, [lm: you must have assimilance to reach this section] [jb: Then I guess they're going to get the bonus to the RNT. ;) The best way to fix this that I can think of is to remove that entire sentence and change the choices from this: > If your total score is now 3 or lower, turn to 47. > If it is 4 or higher, turn to 162. To this: > If the number you have picked is 1, turn to 47. > If it is 2 or higher, turn to 162. > Or we could just leave it alone and let everyone who gets here get the bonus. Thoughts?] [bk: Technically 0-1 and 2-9.] [so: The following would be less invasive: "If -> As" : "As you possess Assimilance, add 2 to the number you have picked."] [jb: "If -> As" is brilliant. That gets my vote.] |
| (er) | 157: | psychic, and some magical, abilities -> psychic and some magical abilities [jb: Agreed.] |
| (er) | 161, 222: | Bow nor -> Bow, nor |
| (er) | 164, 259: | Old Kingdom battle-spell -> Old Kingdom Battle-spell |
| (er) | 164, 259: | - Flameshaft -> Flameshaft [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 164, 165, 238, 259, 337: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | 164, 259: | add 3 -> remember to add 3 |
| (er) | 164, 259: | so you -> you [jb: Agreed.] |
| (er) | 165: | [rw: How does the section know you have a Quiver?] [jb: Or two Backpack items for that matter. We could add "If you possess them," to the beginning of the sentence (or something better worded) or add a footnote.] [so: the best I can come up with is: "your Quiver and -> your Quiver (if you possess this Special Item). Also erase" and "list of Backpack Items -> list of Backpack Items (if you possess any)". Does that sufficiently cover the instance of possessing just 1 Backpack Item?] |
| (er) | 166: | whoosh [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 167: | sheath it in your belt -> sheathe it in your belt |
| (er) | 175, 289: | wooshes -> whooshes |
| (er) | 178: | horde are -> horde is [lm] [tp: <collective> = singular (e.g. "a horde comes") ] |
| (er) | 179: | your battle-cry: "For Sommerlund and the Kai!" as -> your battle-cry—"For Sommerlund and the Kai!"—as [tp] [jb: Agreed. The use of a colon here is non-standard.] |
| (er) | 182: | like charging bull -> like a charging bull |
| (er) | 184, 268: | - Lightning Hand -> Lightning Hand [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 184, 268: | attained, above -> attained above |
| (er) | 184, 268: | counter spell -> counterspell [or, "spell to counter"] [jb: Agreed. With a handful of exceptions in The Magnamund Companion and one originally in Beyond the Nightmare Gate, every other occurrence of is spelled "counterspell".] |
| (er) | 185: | steel -> steal |
| (er) | 187: | jug of vinegar -> Jug of Vinegar |
| (er) | 188, 219, 269: | - Shield -> Shield [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 190: | battle wounds -> battle-wounds |
| (er) | 190: | their armour, and the -> their armour and the |
| (er) | 195: | - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 196: | if the -> If the (Option 2) |
| (er) | 197: | battle armour -> battle-armour |
| (er) | 200: | war horn -> war-horn |
| (er) | 202: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | 205, 225, 345: | one, and then three more, explosions -> one and then three more explosions [so: "one, and then three more explosions detonate"] [ik: "as first one explosion and then three more detonate"] [so: 345 only says "...two more..."] |
| (er) | 209: | probiscus -> proboscis |
| (er) | 209: | You approach to the edge -> You approach the edge [jb: Agreed.] |
| (er) | 212: | If you not -> If you do not |
| (er) | 215: | - Net -> Net [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 215: | gluing -> glueing |
| (er) | 215: | drop your bow and [RW: You've just used a Spell NOT the Bow option to attack!] |
| (er) | 218: | Remove quote marks from thought-speech |
| (er) | 218: | arrive . . .'. -> arrive . . .' |
| (er) | 220: | back the ‘The Hub’ -> back to ‘The Hub’ |
| (er) | 222: | drawbolt -> bolt |
| (er) | 226: | scabbard, then -> scabbard; then |
| (er) | 228: | realise -> realize |
| (er) | 233: | - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 235: | Backpack Items list -> list of Backpack Items |
| (er) | 242: | If you possess Elementalism, and wish to use it, -> If you possess Magi-magic, and wish to use it, |
| (er) | 243: | If you do not possess this skill, or -> If you do not possess this Weapon, this skill, or |
| (er) | 243: | bow and -> Bow, and |
| (er) | 243 [x2]: | and [itals in first option] |
| (er) | 246: | vision, then -> vision; then |
| (er) | 247: | passage, then -> passage; then |
| (er) | 250: | ante-room -> anteroom |
| (er) | 250: | item, this -> item, or this |
| (er) | 262: | even (0, 2, 4, 6, 8 -> even (i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 0 |
| (er) | 262: | shoulder-blade -> shoulder blade |
| (er) | 264, 341: | - Strength - -> Strength [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 272: | midstep -> mid-step |
| (er) | 277: | Grand Master Superior, turn -> Grand Master Superior, or higher, turn |
| (er) | 280: | crossbolts -> crossbow bolts |
| (er) | 280: | 2 or less -> 20 or less |
| (er) | 283: | surface and the portal -> surface, and the portal |
| (er) | 293: | senses you and it emits -> senses you, and it emits [BK: Or 'senses you and emits'] |
| (er) | 299: | Kai axe -> Kai Axe |
| (er) | 311: | fall, and bruise -> fall and bruise |
| (er) | 318: | minerals, wells -> minerals, and wells |
| (er) | 322: | evil, reviving power -> evil reviving power [BK: The reviving power is evil.] |
| (er) | 326: | backpack -> Backpack |
| (er) | 327: | curl up the -> curl up on the |
| (er) | 328: | counter-attack -> counterattack |
| (er) | 330: | COMBAT SKILL [small CAPS] |
| (er) | 330: | This Special Item can be used to store five additional Backpack Items. It is kept in your backpack where it occupies only one space. -> This Item can be used to store five additional Backpack Items. The Bag itself is kept in your Backpack, where it occupies only one space. [lm: does it take up a special item slot as well?] [jc: I think the Bag of Holding definition is unclear. Special Items cannot be kept in backpack. I suggest: "This Special Item can be used to store FOUR additional Backpack Items. It is kept attached to your backpack."] [so: See also this(approve sites) post from Snowshadow on the PA forum.] [jb: Agreed with the general idea though we may want to say it this way: "This Backpack Item can be used to store five additional Backpack Items although the Bag itself occupies only one space.". Thoughts? Also I suggest we alter the format of the item list here to match other item lists by removing the bold face and making it bulleted like this: * Korlinium Chainmail Vest (This Special Item can be worn beneath your tunic. It adds +2 to your COMBAT SKILL.) * Drodarin Bag of Holding (This Backpack Item can be used to store five additional Backpack Items although the Bag itself occupies only one space.) * Sunderer (This Drodarin battle-axe is a Special Item. In combat against any enemy it will give you a bonus of +5 to your COMBAT SKILL. You may use this magical axe as an alternative to your existing Kai Weapon.) ] |
| (er) | 334: | Despite your forewarnings, and the precautions you have taken, the creature on the platform sees you moving towards the barrels and it emits a hellish shriek. -> Despite your forewarnings and the precautions you have taken, the creature on the platform sees you moving towards the barrels and emits a hellish shriek. [BK: Or '...barrels, and it emits...'] |
| (er) | 337: | - Flameshaft - -> Flameshaft [also: encode as spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 347: | Magnakai camouflage -> Magnakai Invisibility |
| (er) | 350: | Cloud-Dancer -> Cloud-dancer [also: Itals (ne)] |
| (er) | 350: | appreciate -> appreciative |
| (er) | 350: | Lone Wolf adventure -> Lone Wolf adventure |
| (er) | Illustration VIII: | battle cry -> battle-cry |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Grand Master Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random -> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either combatant falls to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either combatant falls to 0 or below. |
| Fixed (Not Errata) | ||
| (ne) | Acknowledgements: | Add Benjamin Krefetz as an Editor |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | King's army of Sommerlund¹. / 1 - Lone Wolf 18: Dawn of the Dragons [This footnote appears in the published text.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | siege of Varetta². / 2 - Lone Wolf 24: Rune War [This footnote appears in the published text.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | clutches of Naar's agent³. / 3 - Lone Wolf 25: Trail of the Wolf [This footnote appears in the published text.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | Cloud-dancer [x4] [itals] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | . . . [encode as ellipsis, x2] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | footnote markers should not change the line spacing [PGS: In contrast to typeset books, HTML and Word both increase the space above the current line when it contains a superscripted character (such as a footnote marker). I believe this should be avoided/corrected at all costs.] [jb: Minimal as it is, we can eliminate this through CSS. On the other hand, the simple and simpler versions have a very noticeable difference in line height. The philosophy of the simple versions is to use minimal styling to make them as compatible as possible with as many HTML viewers as possible (e.g. mobile devices). For this, I think we should leave the line height etc. alone.] |
| (ne) | The Game Rules: | Colon after "Playing Tip:" should be bold [PGS: I prefer the colon at the end of a bold heading to also be bold. This seems to align with the book.] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | mastered four of [four: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | one of the weapons [one: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | EQUIPMENT [link] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Shield / Power Word / Invisible Fist / Lightning Hand / Levitation / Mind Charm [spell] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Vampirium [itals] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | map [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | Weapons List [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | carry is two [two: itals] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | This is a healing potion that can restore 4 ENDURANCE points to your total [lm: no laumspur potion is offered in the equipment section.] [so: Added (as per original text)] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Halt Missile / Strength [spell] |
| (ne) | Kai Wisdom: | discover Items -> discover items |
| (ne) | 1, 202: | Cloud-dancer [Itals] |
| (ne) | 3, 110, 114, 232, 310, 341: | Crack! [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 12: | add l -> add 1 |
| (ne) | 24, 91: | DANGER! [itals] |
| (ne) | 32 [x2], 228 [x2], 251 [x2]: | Bow, and Magi-magic, and [and: itals in first option] |
| (ne) | 55: | north.' -> north. [jb: erratum?] [so: There seems to be an italic superscript n in my copy of the book. This is fixed, but I haven't recorded it as Errata, as I'm not sure whether it should just be (ne).] [(ne)] |
| (ne) | 58, 64, 140, 218, 254: | [Ellipsis] |
| (ne) | 65, 75, 126, 284: | en masse [foreign] |
| (ne) | 67: | heat a noise -> heat and noise [RW] |
| (ne) | 68: | Iron sign -> iron sign |
| (ne) | 68: | as defaced -> was defaced |
| (ne) | 72, 87, 106, 148, 346: | Gloar! [spell] |
| (ne) | 75: | laboratory' -> laboratory [jb: erratum?] [so: No] |
| (ne) | 103: | do hot possess -> do not possess |
| (ne) | 138: | <signpost> tags for the warning |
| (ne) | 141, 279, 291: | Clunk! [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 146: | Weapons List [link] |
| (ne) | 197: | ante-chamber -> antechamber [linebreak] |
| (ne) | 218: | Thought-speech in Itals |
| (ne) | 300: | Shorn'zaa -> Shom'zaa [ik] |
| (ne) | 318: | [jc: From here on, you will be underground, so if you possess the Kai Weapon 'Illuminatus', you will benefit from its unique properties (you may add 7 to your COMBAT SKILL instead of 5).] |
| (ft) | 350: | Remember to erase the Andarin Bloodstone from your Action Chart. |
| (ne) | Map: | [Add an 'R' before the label 'Kloss' to the right of Humbold.] [so: Fixed by rescanning the map.] |
| (ne) | Errata: | in the Illustration's caption -> in the illustration's caption [lm: cf. errata for ref.127] |
| (ne) | Errata: | axe"Alema -> axe "Alema |
| (ne) | Errata: | .Replaced -> . Replaced |
| Large Illustrations | ||
| Ensure the Illustration data contains the correct dimensions of the illustration. | ||
| I | 26 | The huge arachnid gets ready to pounce. |
| II | 33 | A swarm of angry Antah wasps encircles your basket. |
| III | 50 | You unsheathe your Kai Weapon in a desperate attempt to halt the rock-creature. |
| IV | 74 | With a heart-rending scream Leomin collapses, mortally wounded. |
| V | 86 | A squat, bloated, forked-tongued creature approaches. |
| VI | 91 | Shom'zaa leaps upon you and rakes you with his terrible claws. |
| VII | 109 | Creatures attack you on all sides as you try to make your escape. |
| VIII | 127 | Giving vent to your battle cry, you run towards the archway. |
| IX | 146 | The dwarves escape from their cage. |
| X | 156 | The creature and its slavering horde come rushing towards you. |
| XI | 190 | You approach the fabled throne and see many warriors recovering around its base. |
| XII | 197 | King Ryvin sits surrounded by family and nobles. |
| XIII | 226 | Frantically you attempt to stop the crazed horde. |
| XIV | 247 | You gasp when you see hundreds of cocoons hanging from the slime-stained ceiling. |
| XV | 261 | A huge black beetle drops a thin length of thread towards you. |
| XVI | 283 | Through a small hole you can see part of the king's burial urn. |
| XVII | 300 | Six mounted Shom'zaa minions come speeding towards you. |
| XVIII | 315 | The Drodarin War-thanes cheer loudly as you reach the barricade. |
| XIX | 328 | You lead a bold charge against the Shom'zaa Agarashi horde. |
| XX | 341 | Filled with awe, you take hold of the golden warhammer and hold it aloft. |
| Illustration Placements | ||
| small 1 | Sun-crystal | [so: 1, 121, 322] |
| small 2 | Crossed axes, forge symbol | [so: 283] |
| small 3 | Dragon Cannon | [so: 51] |
| small 4 | Mushroom | [so: 290] |
| small 5 | Andarian Bloodstone | [so: 35, 131, 160] |
| small 6 | Pool, stalagmites? | [so: 209] |
| small 7 | Wolf-drawn chariot | [so: 318] |
| small 8 | Siege weapons | [so: 35] |
| small 9 | 3 sealed Jars | [so: 217] |
| small 10 | Flooding tunnel | [so: 11, 103] |
| small 11 | Medal | [so: 350] |
| small 12 | Urns | [so: 230, 283] |
| Rejected | ||
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Vorka horde were -> Vorka horde was |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Drodarin dwarves of Bor -> Drodarin Dwarves of Bor [jb: Leave as-is. "Drodarin dwarves" occurs only four times in all of the books and always capitalized thus. I think of it as analogous to "Sommlending men of Holmgard" or similar.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | chaos befell the Darkland armies -> chaos befell the Darklord armies [so: We have been correcting this to Darkland armies for consistency across the books.] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | I am proud to accept the quest.’ -> I am proud to accept this quest.’ [PGS: Original version doesn't scan as well IMHO.] [jb: Maybe, but the original is fine as-is.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | em-dashes should have a space to either side [PGS: Omitting the spaces (as indicated in the Manual of Style) is contrary to the book, and also IMO looks far worse than including the spaces. I realise most grammatical guides probably indicate no spaces either side of an em-dash, but personally I've always thought this to be a mistake, except where dialogue is being interrupted. For correct line-breaking, the preceding space should be non-breaking, while the following space should be normal.] [so: See Wikipedia for more information. As we are following the Oxford (serial) comma, we also follow the Oxford non-spaced emdash. As it happens, I find this more aesthetically pleasing than spaced endahes, anyway. Adding non-breaking spaces increases the complexity of the code unnecessarily, IMHO. Spacing also becomes a problem when typesetting justified text either online or in epub/PDF versions.] [jb: I'm with you on this one, Simon. I might like a bit of space surrounding the emdashes, but this is too much. I think we should leave this alone.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | War-thanes -> War Thanes [PGS: Should either go back to the original version, or add this new version to the Manual of Style.] [jb: I vote add it to the MoS. Here's the context for why we changed it: <http://www.freelists.org/post/projectaon/Errata-Sprint-Addendum-8-Welcome-Back-Jon> ] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | Sun-crystal -> Sun-Crystal [PGS: Should either go back to the original version, or add this new version to the Manual of Style.] [jb: Also add MoS. The general principle is that only the first letter of hyphenated compound words should be capitalized (cf. what we've done with Lord-lieutenant).] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | ‘... the greed of King Ryvin’s elder son, -> ‘. . . the greed of King Ryvin’s elder son, unless we are able to overcome this creature ... and swiftly.’ -> unless we are able to overcome this creature . . . and swiftly.’ Zorkaan failed to kill Lone Wolf ... but he was able -> Zorkaan failed to kill Lone Wolf . . . but he was able [PGS: Corrections in line with both the book and style manual. Also note the extra space after the ellipsis in your version.] [so: Fixed the trailing space. Respecting the ellipsis character, we settled on this way after quite some experimentation, and I think this is the happiest compromise we could find. With three separate periods, spacing becomes a problem when typesetting justified text either online or in epub/PDF versions.] [jb: Yeah my typing teacher would shoot me, but using the single ellipsis character rather than making a composite with periods saves a lot of headaches. I've gone ahead and struck that section from the Manual of Style.] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | your number of -> your total of |
| (ne) | Grand Master Disciplines: | [Use Magnakai heading illustrations from later books?] [jb: I checked, and I don't seem to have the headings (or even the background) for the Magnakai Disciplines.] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | (under grand weaponmastery) Grand Master weapons -> Grand Weaponmastery Weapons [jb: Since there is no need to deal with the weapons on the Action Chart, I think we should leave these as they are.] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | (under grand weaponmastery) weapons -> Weapons [lm: many times] [jb: Since there is no need to deal with the weapons on the Action Chart, I think we should leave these as they are.] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | (under grand pathsmanship) ambush, or the threat of ambush, in -> ambush or the threat of ambush in [jb: Commas used to delimit a soft parenthetical. I think they're OK.] |
| (ft) | Rules for Combat: | It is not necessarily the case that the Grand Master will lose any EP during the combat. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Arrow-like missile -> arrow-like missile |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | (sun knight -- grandweaponmastery) weapons -> Weapons [so: No; not a specific weapon being referred to, rather a "class" of weapons. The uncapitalised phrase "two-handed weapon" appears in Books 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 26, 27, and 28. The capitalised phrase "two-handed Weapon" does not occur in the series.] |
| (er) | Kai Wisdom: | Completion of previous Lone Wolf adventures (Books 1–21) may be advantageous, but it is not essential for the successful completion of this New Order adventure. [jc: It doesn't have much sense... I suggest for all New Order books (except of 21) this: Completion of Lone Wolf adventures (Books 1- 20) is not essential for the successful completion of this New Order adventure. Completion of previous New Order adventures (Books 21 - 2x) may be advantageous, but it is also not essential for the successful completion of this New Order adventure] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | every turn, so be -> every turn; so be |
| (er) | 2, 110 [x2], 341 [x2]: | warhammer -> Warhammer [jb: For sure not in 2 because you cannot yet acquire it as an item. Maybe in the other sections where you can acquire it, but maybe it's better to leave it uncapitalized there because it should really be recorded as the "Andarin Warhammer". Thoughts?] [so: Probably can Reject these proposals, since the proper name for the Special Item is the Andarin Warhammer.] [jb: Hearing no further input, let's reject them.] |
| (er) | 4, 52, 92, 122, 162, 248, 307: | 50 yards -> fifty yards |
| (er) | 8, 31, 183, 226, 244: | horde are -> horde is [lm] [tp: <collective> = singular (e.g. "a horde comes") ] [bk: This one should be rejected per rule 2 ("a battle-frenzy that drives them like demons") ] |
| (er) | 9, 51, 153: | 20 yards -> twenty yards |
| (er) | 11, 103, 118, 134, 194, 221, 258: | Kai rank of -> rank of |
| (er) | 13: | a volley of deadly shafts come -> a volley of deadly shafts comes [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 15: | is now 4 or lower, turn to 266. If it is 5 or higher, turn to 113. -> is now 4 or lower, turn to 113. If it is 5 or higher, turn to 266. [so: No; see the second paragraph of this section, where you are told to deduct 1 from the number picked if you have a HIGH Endurance level.] |
| (er) | 17, 94, 297: | 60 feet -> sixty feet |
| (er) | 25, 45, 111, 119, 127, 163, 196, 208, 292, 293, 316, 342, 348: | or less -> or fewer |
| (er) | 27, 299: | You may cease attacking the lid at any time (evade), by -> You may cease attacking the lid at any time, by [surely the lid doesn't get a free round of attack as per the evading combat rule] [Do you treat this evasion of combat as normal (i.e. do you have to do a final round where only GM loses EP)? Footnote?] [jb: It seems odd, but maybe that EP loss is from the fatigue of the last fruitless attempt that makes you throw up your hands and walk away? In any case, I don't think we have enough to go on to change the rules here.] [so: Marked as Rejected, but one to keep an eye on for when Mongoose finally re-release this book.] |
| (er) | 32, 228, 251: | Blasting Powder [small CAPS?] |
| (er) | 33: | a swarm of large wasp-like insects pour out of this hole and encircle -> a swarm of large wasp-like insects pours out of this hole and encircles [lm: cf. caption to illustration] [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 37, 62, 104, 168, 185, 205, 220, 251, 309, 332: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 43, 193, 274: | or less -> or lower |
| (er) | 43, 193, 274: | or more -> or higher |
| (er) | 44, 210: | head-first [Is this OK?] [JB: Yes] |
| (er) | 54, 58, 97, 254, 263, 314: | healing -> Healing |
| (er) | 58, 254: | thud [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 58, 94: | curing -> Curing |
| (er) | 72, 87, 106, 148, 346: | Old Kingdom power-word -> Old Kingdom Spell Power Word [also: Power Word - spell (er)] [lm] |
| (er) | 73: | tracking -> Tracking |
| (er) | 74: | 30 feet -> thirty feet |
| (er) | 79, 99: | clicks [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 87: | repeat the power-word -> repeat the spell |
| (er) | 98: | lose 3 ENDURANCE points. -> lose 1 ENDURANCE point. [jc: Compare with section 70, or maybe -3EP in sect 98 and -5EP in sect 70.] [jb: I see what you're getting at, but why 1 EP and not 2? This is another situation where I don't think we have the authority to fix an obviously problematic section.] [so: Marked as Rejected, but one to keep an eye on for when Mongoose finally re-release this book.] |
| (er) | 118 [x2]: | 'Magnara -> "Magnara" |
| (er) | 123, 132, 213, 231, 312: | click [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 131: | line of empty ore wagons stand -> line of empty ore wagons stands [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 139: | you find only two unbroken items: a Shovel and a Pick. [jc: Could you keep the Shovel and the Pick? If yes, maybe each of them will occupy 2 slots in the Backpack (like in book 4).] [jb: Makes sense, but it's another judgement call that I don't think we can make.] [so: Since the items are in Initial Capitals, it's implicit that they can be taken; but without Joe's saying otherwise, it would seem they are dwarf-sized, and so only take up one space each in your Backpack!] |
| (er) | 141, 279, 291: | whooshes [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 143: | The horde hit -> The horde hits [lm: cf. ref. 57] [tp: Agreed <collective> = singular (e.g. "a horde comes"), in most cases] [bk: Again, per rule 2 "the War-Thanes fight them" should make it a rejection. I'm not sure if this is what you intended, but the way I see it is basically anywhere a collective noun is referred to with a plural pronoun in the same sentence, the verb should be plural (except in very rare cases where the plural pronoun should be changed to a singular).] [tp: That's more or less how I feel about it, yes. It's interesting to note that "hit" vs. "hits" is the one and only difference between sections 57 and 143. Padding, Mr Dever? :-P] |
| (er) | 152, 261, 301: | bony -> boney |
| (er) | 154: | backhanded -> back-handed |
| (er) | 161: | near miss -> near-miss [JDu: I don't remember seeing near miss hyphenated, so I agree it doesn't seem necessary.] [bk: Technically, a "near-miss" would be a situation where you almost missed, as opposed to a "near miss", where "near" is an adjective describing the type of miss. Think of the emotional pain we'd be inflicting on Lynne Truss if we changed that!] |
| (er) | 175, 289: | wooshes -> whooshes [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 178: | horde raise their -> horde raises its [jb: Indeterminate as to number (and gender). OK as-is.] |
| (er) | 178: | the horde raise their weapons and come -> the horde raises their weapons and comes [tp: Reject. (When talking about "their weapons", I think the plural sounds better. "The horde raises their weapons" is just wrong, and "the horde raises its weapons" sounds clumsy.) ] |
| (er) | 193, 349: | Magnakai healing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 197: | more than half of his army are -> more than half of his army is [tp: Agreed <collective> = singular (e.g. "a horde comes"), in most cases.] [bk: I would say the meaning actually changes depending on whether we go with the original or the proposed change. As written, I'm imagining various members of the army independently going missing until more than half are unaccounted for. With the proposed change, I'm imagining a single regiment comprising more than half the army going missing. Which meaning do we want? (Perhaps if we want to clarify it as the first meaning, we should change it to something like "more than half the members of his army".) ] [tp: I don't see it quite that way. I do agree that the singular form implies the missing troops are aggregated in some way, but that could be lost in a single battle, deserted en masse, or just "all missing because of this Agarashi business". :-) ] [so: Let's leave this to Jon to arbitrate.] [jb: Since it could go either way with no strong bias toward one or the other, we have been leaving these as originally printed.] |
| (er) | 202: | crew of the Cloud-dancer have -> crew of the Cloud-dancer has [tp: Reject.] |
| (er) | 202: | A unit of King Ryvin's élite War-Thanes have -> A unit of King Ryvin's élite War-Thanes has [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 220: | 50 Shom'zaa -> fifty Shom'zaa |
| (er) | 275: | 20 feet -> twenty feet |
| (er) | 300: | A group of six large, two-footed creatures have -> A group of six large, two-footed creatures has [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 315 (Illustration XVIII Caption): | War-thane -> War-Thane |
| (er) | 318: | a volley of arrows whistle -> a volley of arrows whistles [tp: Reject <collective> of <plural> = plural (e.g. "a volley of arrows come") ] |
| (er) | 331: | 10 feet -> ten feet |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | combat!). -> combat)! |