| |
25: Trail of the Wolf
| Pending |
| (er) | All occurrences of sky-craft -> skycraft |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Darklord armies -> Darkland armies |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | Combat Record -> Combat Record [orig. is underlined] |
| (er) | 6: | shadowy alcove. And, to the left [SD: Problem: starting a sentence with “and”. Could remove “And” without disturbing the flow of the text]
[SO: Other sections with sentences starting with And: 75, 106] |
| (er) | 8: | Clunk!. -> Clunk! [onomatopoeia: ne] |
| (er) | 11, 39, 219, 256: | change “turn to the section of this book” to something reflecting online edition. [SD] |
| (er) | 12: | this bacteria -> these bacteria (or: this bacterium) [SD: Not sure. Bacteria = plural of bacterium. I can see what JD is trying to say, inviting the player to take portions of one type of bacterium.] |
| (er) | 22, 206: | its swirling black form -> his swirling black form [SD: In sections 59, 88, 191, 196: Zorkaan is referred to as a character: he, his, him, etc. Also, GM knows full well what/who this swirling black form is] |
| (er) | 32: | coast is still clear and so you leave -> coast is still clear, so you leave [SD: Sounds better, and to make it consistent with section 118] |
| (er) | 37, 283: | stone and mortar crumbles -> stone and mortar crumble |
| (er) | 38: | This section is currently orphaned. |
| (er) | 40: | [B]lack [A]mulet. But as soon [SD: Problem: starting a sentence with “but”. I propose replacing the full stop with a comma. This is endemic throughout the book)!]
[SO: Other sections with sentences starting with But: 56, 78, 81, 90, 92, 94, 96, 110, 145, 191, 211, 221, 231, 248, 275, 279, 283, 307, 310, 343, 347] |
| (er) | 61, 106, 129, 232, 251, 282: | petrified forest of Helkona -> petrified Forest of Helkona [??] |
| (er) | 66, 339: | in your Backpack [remove] |
| (er) | 85, 103, 133, 139, 176, 181, 194, 230, 273: | backpack -> Backpack |
| (er) | 85: | fecal decay -> faecal decay [SD] |
| (er) | 103, 194: | stone and mortar is very dry -> stone and mortar are very dry [SD] |
| (er) | 105: | - Sommerswerd - -> Sommerswerd [also: remove Itals] |
| (er) | 123, 313: | spared me my -> saved my |
| (er) | 129, 251, 340: | there is no flora or fauna -> there are no flora or fauna [SD] |
| (er) | 139: | If you possess Bardsmanship -> If you possess Bardsmanship, and have attained the rank of Kai Grand Master Superior [SO: You can only obtain the Kraan Pipe if you have Bardsmanship (cf. Section 90] |
| (er) | 155: | polearm -> pole-arm |
| (er) | 220: | Drakkarim Assault Trooper -> Drakkarim assault trooper [SD: not capitalized anywhere else in book. Does PA have a standard for this?] |
| (er) | 228, 320: | If you possess Grand Huntmastery, add 1 … possess Assimilance, add 2. -> If you possess Assimilance, add 2 … possess Grand Huntmastery, add 1. [SD: for consistency with all other books, the discipline adding more to the random number total should come first in the sentence.] |
| (er) | 265: | points that you lose (in the first round of combat only). [SD: remove brackets; not necessary] |
| (er) | 282: | Darklord fortress of Kaag -> Darkland fortress of Kaag [SD] |
| (er) | 293: | With weapon poised, -> With your weapon poised, [SD: OR: Weapon poised,] |
| (er) | 294, 300, 348: | [SD: Remove references to book and edit to reflect online edition.] |
| (er) | 320: | nadziranim -> Nadziranim |
| (er) | 337: | You draw back the rod and then -> You draw back the rod, and then [SD: to avoid a long sentence] |
| (er) | 350: | next exciting Lone Wolf adventure -> next exciting New Order adventure [SD: or words to that effect. Remember, we’re not LW any more!] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (??) | Disciplines: | [Use Magnakai heading illustrations from later books?] |
| (ft) | 35: | Can you reclaim your Dargorse Buds? |
| (ft) | 79: | The Jar of Obhanthor takes up one slot in your Backpack. |
| (ft) | 93, 273: | Erase the Iron Key from your Action Chart. |
| (ft) | 130: | The Jar of Tortwich takes up one slot in your Backpack. |
| (ft) | 163, 234: | Each jar takes up only one slot in your Backpack. |
| (ft) | 176 338: | Erase the Copper Key from your Action Chart. |
| Illustration Placements |
| small 1 | Wolfhound | [so: 91, 141, 200] |
| small 2 | Mouldy skeleton | [so: 11, 204] |
| small 3 | Kraan Pipe | [so: 9, 259] |
| small 4 | Observatory | [so: 126, 160, 227, 315, 320, 323] |
| small 5 | Equipment (Quiver, Bow, etc.) | [so: 30] |
| small 6 | Spider & Sun Circle | [so: 120] |
| small 7 | Buried crown | [so: 51] |
| small 8 | Xaol | [so: 74] |
| small 9 | Drakkar equipment (helmet, serrated sword, etc.) | [so: 330, 333] |
| small 10 | Sealed jars | [so: 130, 234, 262] |
| small 11 | Black Amulet | [so: 109, 122] |
| small 12 | Fiery bomb | [so: 33, 121, 210, 236, 274] |
| Large Illustrations |
| Ensure the dimensions in the xml match the size of the illustration. |
| Fixed |
| (er) | The "XYZ, then you" problem: (For example: section 13: hands on his chest, then you)
can resolve by -> and then you
OR: replacing comma with semicolon
(Project Aon's call - would need to review every case to ensure the text flows smoothly)
Occurrences thus far: 13, 30, 78, 80, 90, 95, 102, 105, 110, 155, 161, 182, 191, 196, 198, 221, 225, 226, 280, 280, 316, 320
[SO: All fixed except Kai Weapon and Rules For Combat] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | MS5075 -> MS5070 |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Kai monastery -> Kai Monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x3]: | Plain of Darkness -> Plane of Darkness |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | anxiously. 'He [new paragraph for new speaker] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Supreme Disciplines -> Supreme Master Disciplines |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | that you will find at the front of this book. For ease of use and further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | on the last page of the book [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules [x2]: | ie -> i.e. |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | your number of -> your total of |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | normal weapons and -> normal weapons, and |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Kai Name: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | Kai Name: | You can record your personal Kai name on the bookplate which appear on the inside cover of this book. [remove] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | symbols and -> symbols, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | Disciplines: | their COMBAT SKILL is reduced -> their ENDURANCE is reduced |
| (er) | Disciplines: | battle wounds -> battle-wounds |
| (er) | Disciplines: | 1 to 3 -> one to three |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Magi-Magic -> Magi-magic [heading] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Old Kingdom battle magic -> Old Kingdom battle-magic |
| (er) | Disciplines: | magi-magic spells -> Old Kingdom Spells |
| (er) | Disciplines: | guild of magicians -> Guild of Magicians |
| (er) | Disciplines: | individual (or combinations of) elements that are available, -> individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof, |
| (er) | Disciplines: | remove or accelerate -> remove, or accelerate |
| (er) | Disciplines: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Disciplines: | dialect and -> dialect, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Kai Weapon and any -> Kai Weapon, and any |
| (er) | Disciplines: | For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. -> For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. [IK][SO: This also affects Books 22-28.] |
| (er) | Equipment: | (see the inside front cover of this book) [remove] |
| (er) | Equipment: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) [x8] |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | at the front of the book [remove] |
| (er) | Equipment: | bow -> Bow [x8] |
| (er) | Equipment: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | Equipment: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | on the inside back cover of this book [remove] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | A summary of Combat Rules appears on the page after the Random Number Table. [remove] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | Only you may [you: bold; under Evasion of combat] [original is in italics] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | combat!). -> combat)! |
| (er) | Levels: | (You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery) -> - You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery [also: itals (ne)] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | infra-vision -> infravision |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | herbmastery -> Herbmastery |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | out-distance -> outdistance |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Mindblend [spell] [orig. is non-itals] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | a Grand Guardian -> a Kai Grand Guardian |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | etc, -> etc., |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | 'Improved Grand Master Disciplines' [remove quote marks] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | gods -> Gods |
| (er) | 1, 74, 156, 212, 289: | Artifact(s) -> Artefact(s) |
| (er) | 4: | Kai weapon -> Kai Weapon |
| (er) | 6: | bas reliefs -> bas-reliefs [SD] |
| (er) | 8, 27, 93, 218, 338, 343: | seemlessly -> seamlessly [SD] |
| (er) | 11, 24, 39, 51, 96, 99, 134, 135, 136, 160, 169, 174, 181, 183, 203, 219, 230, 235, 256, 293, 300, 302, 315, 331, 344, 345, 348: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | 11, 149, 345: | infra-vision -> infravision |
| (er) | 12: | meal of Gnallia -> Meal of Gnallia |
| (er) | 13: | hands on his chest, then you -> hands on his chest, and then you [SD]
[SO: Or, chest; then] |
| (er) | 13, 102: | battle tunic -> battle-tunic |
| (er) | 13: | Kai curing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 17, 56, 92, 98, 99, 158, 207, 248 [x2], 268 [x3], 272, 276 [x3], 277, 280 [x2], 284, 317: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) |
| (er) | 17, 56, 99, 161, 198, 207 [x2], 248, 268, 272, 274, 277, 280: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 17: | rib-cage -> rib cage |
| (er) | 18: | go limp, then you detach -> go limp, and then you detach [SD]
[SO: Or, limp; then] |
| (er) | 25: | gracious ease -> graceful ease |
| (er) | 26, 27, 28, 29 [x3], 30, 31, 37 [x2], 42 [x2], 71 [x2], 81 [x2], 114, 171, 175, 176, 177 [x2], 179, (+others): | [SD: Multiple cases of missing full stops after numbered section references are the end of a sentence.] |
| (er) | 26: | turn to 30 -> turn to 307 |
| (er) | 29, 133, 159 [x2]: | rope -> Rope |
| (er) | 31, 33, 44, 78, 122, 127, 146, 214, 221, 245, 278, 291, 324, 349: | Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell |
| (er) | 30: | your shoulder, then you pull open -> your shoulder, and then you pull open [SD]
[SO: Or, shoulder; then] |
| (er) | 30, 95: | clang [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 31, 33, 44, 245, 324: | - Lightning Hand - -> Lightning Hand [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 38, 65, 117, 190, 236, 274, 301, 347: | Old Kingdom spell -> Old Kingdom Spell |
| (er) | 38, 65, 301: | - Shield - -> Shield [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 40: | black amulet -> Black Amulet [SD] |
| (er) | 43, 124: | Ogshezar mountains -> Ogshezar Mountains |
| (er) | 43, 124: | Vashna -> Zagarna |
| (er) | 46, 254: | The volley...slam -> The volley...slams |
| (er) | 47: | the rank Kai Grand Superior. -> the rank of Kai Grand Master Superior. [SD] |
| (er) | 49, 67, 132, 294, 325: | Lone Wolf [itals] |
| (er) | 52: | of gully -> of the gully |
| (er) | 55, 200, 223: | semi-circular -> semicircular |
| (er) | 62, 299: | agarashi -> Agarashi |
| (er) | 62, 299: | Kai-alchemy and -> Kai-alchemy, and |
| (er) | 62, 299: | Magi-magic and -> Magi-magic, and |
| (er) | 66, 339: | bone Dice -> Bone Dice |
| (er) | 66, 339: | accordingly.) [New Paragraph] You are scanning [SD] |
| (er) | 68: | Kaistar / Raumas -> "Kaistar" / "Raumas" |
| (er) | 69, 72, 121, 311: | - Invisible Fist -> Invisible Fist [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 70, 250: | - Spawnsmite - -> "Spawnsmite" [also: remove Itals] |
| (er) | 74: | Dazgannon -> Dazganon |
| (er) | 75, 106: | Kagazitzaga range -> Kagazitzaga Range |
| (er) | 78, 127, 221, 270: | - Levitation - -> Levitation [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 84: | Spawnsmite / Valiance -> "Spawnsmite" / "Valiance" [also: remove itals (er)] |
| (er) | 87: | Determindedly -> Determinedly |
| (er) | 87, 91, 304: | Kai rank of Grand -> rank of Kai Grand |
| (er) | 90: | - Firefall - -> "Firefall" [also: remove Itals] |
| (er) | 93, 176, 338: | anti-clockwise -> anticlockwise [SD] |
| (er) | 94: | semi-circle -> semicircle |
| (er) | 99, 181, 331: | Crack!, -> Crack! [onomatopoeia: ne] |
| (er) | 102: | Magnakai healing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 103, 141, 292: | Backpack Items list -> list of Backpack Items |
| (er) | 104, 231: | end over end -> end-over-end |
| (er) | 106, 129, 239, 251: | treeline -> tree-line [SD] |
| (er) | 107, 149, 169, 259, 345: | Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery |
| (er) | 107, 174: | platinum amulet -> Platinum Amulet |
| (er) | 107, 174, 350: | the Monastery -> the monastery |
| (er) | 110: | [Remove quotes from thought-speech] [Also: Thought-speech in Itals (er)] |
| (er) | 111, 209: | Magnakai camouflage -> Magnakai Invisibility |
| (er) | 113, 281: | wolfhound, 'or -> wolfhound. 'Or |
| (er) | 113: | hounds' -> hound's |
| (er) | 115, 199: | crysalises -> chrysalises |
| (er) | 115, 199: | coccooned -> cocooned |
| (er) | 117: | - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 122, 278, 349: | - Counterspell - -> Counterspell [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 123, 313: | Grandmaster Banedon -> Guildmaster Banedon |
| (er) | 123, 313: | re-opens -> reopens [??] |
| (er) | 125, 305: | Backpack Item, turn -> Backpack Item, or choose not to use it, turn |
| (er) | 128 [x2], 151 [x2]: | ie -> i.e. |
| (er) | 129, 239, 251: | north-east -> northeast |
| (er) | 129, 239, 251: | 15 miles -> fifteen miles |
| (er) | 130, 234: | crystaline -> crystalline [SD] |
| (er) | 133: | lassoo -> lasso |
| (er) | 134: | 6-18 -> 6-8 |
| (er) | 135: | Aware to the danger -> Aware of the danger [SD: Or, Alert to the danger] |
| (er) | 137: | The volley...smash -> The volley...smashes |
| (er) | 139, 213: | pipe -> Kraan Pipe |
| (er) | 140, 172, 187, 222: | Alema / Valiance -> "Alema" / "Valiance" [also: remove itals (er)] |
| (er) | 141, 230, 292: | Dargorse buds -> Dargorse Buds |
| (er) | 146: | - Mind Charm - -> Mind Charm [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 150, 168: | Bow, or -> Bow, nor |
| (er) | 155: | gutteral -> guttural |
| (er) | 156: | black amulet -> Black Amulet [SD: Capital letters, since this item is about to be discarded and removed from inventory] |
| (er) | 157: | death throes -> death-throes |
| (er) | 160, 315: | jet black -> jet-black |
| (er) | 160, 315: | portcullissed -> portcullised [SD: (Webster's Revised Unabridged Dictionary, © 1996, 1998 MICRA, Inc.)] |
| (er) | 162: | this item, turn -> this item, or choose not to use it, turn |
| (er) | 166: | inlayed -> inlaid [SD] |
| (er) | 167, 220: | Bow, or neither -> Bow, nor either |
| (er) | 168: | If you possess none of these skills -> If you possess neither of these skills [SD: Only two skills usable here; also, for consistency with rest of book] |
| (er) | 171: | Turn to 320 -> Turn to 320. |
| (er) | 175: | Clang!, -> Clang! [onomatopoeia: ne] |
| (er) | 175: | Turn to 269 -> Turn to 269. |
| (er) | 176: | Turn to 200 -> Turn to 200. |
| (er) | 177: | Turn to 234 -> Turn to 234. |
| (er) | 177: | Turn to 130 -> Turn to 130. |
| (er) | 179: | Turn to 120 -> Turn to 120. |
| (er) | 183: | - Alema - -> "Alema" [also: remove Itals] |
| (er) | 190, 347: | - Power Word - -> Power Word [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 196: | then you raise you eyes -> then you raise your eyes [SD] |
| (er) | 200: | Dargorse, and wish to use it -> Dargorse Buds, and wish to use them [SD: OR: some Dargorse, and wish to use it. Former sounds better, especially if PA wants to formalise as Dargorse -> Dargorse Buds throughout. However... I flag the latter because of LW27 Vampirium: Section 117: "some Poghlam" in reference to an alchemical Backpack Item)] |
| (er) | 201, 242: | net -> Net [also: spell (er)] |
| (er) | 201: | Bow and -> Bow, and |
| (er) | 202: | knowledge of herbmastery -> knowledge of Herbmastery [SD: OR: Discipline of Herbmastery (latter seems more consistent throughout the book, as far as referring to GM disciplines as "Discipline of XYZ" is concerned)] |
| (er) | 202: | this Dargorse -> these Dargorse Buds |
| (er) | 204: | detrius -> detritus [SD] |
| (er) | 205: | - Mind Charm -> Mind Charm [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 207, 272: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | 209: | potion of Fingloss -> Potion of Fingloss |
| (er) | 212, 289: | the amulet -> the Black Amulet |
| (er) | 214: | - Invisible Shield - -> Invisible Shield [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 217: | go to 83. [SD: are we ok with “go to” vs “turn to”? First occurrence thus far in the book. For consistency’s sake, may want to change to “turn to”?] |
| (er) | 220, 276: | battle armour -> battle-armour |
| (er) | 223, 300: | torch-lit -> torchlit |
| (er) | 223: | Assimilance and -> Assimilance, and |
| (er) | 237: | three rounds, or less, -> three rounds or less, [SD: for consistency with previous LW books] |
| (er) | 237: | four rounds, or less -> four rounds or less, [SD: for consistency with previous LW books] |
| (er) | 244: | ability -> agility |
| (er) | 250: | magical force and you shiver -> magical force, and you shiver [SD: text flows better this way, but not vital] |
| (er) | 258, 304: | duststorm -> dust storm [SD] |
| (er) | 260: | your senses yet you are -> your senses, yet you are |
| (er) | 261: | score is 0–6, turn to -> score is now 6 or lower, turn to [SD: for consistency with rest of book] |
| (er) | 269: | chest a -> chest, and a |
| (er) | 270, 291: | - Net - -> Net [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 270: | right hand at large boulder -> right hand at a large boulder [SD] |
| (er) | 281: | you incompetent dolts!’ [NEW PARAGRAPH] Your bold and convincing threat [SD] |
| (er) | 282: | wind-swept -> windswept |
| (er) | 282: | south-westerly -> southwesterly |
| (er) | 282: | north-western -> northwestern |
| (er) | 282: | Durncrag mountains -> Durncrag Mountains |
| (er) | 291: | spell word -> spell-word |
| (er) | 296: | white hot -> white-hot |
| (er) | 304: | As slowly you -> As you slowly |
| (er) | 304: | you glimpse sight of -> you glimpse a sight of [SD: OR: you glimpse the sight of]
[SO: you catch sight of] |
| (er) | 319: | Bow nor any -> Bow, or any [SD] |
| (er) | 320: | nadziranim -> Nadziranim |
| (er) | 323: | Urgaroh's -> The Urgaroh's |
| (er) | 332: | battle shield -> battle-shield |
| (er) | 333: | Remove number 1 from singular weapons on this item list. [SD] |
| (er) | 339: | in your Backpack adjust -> in your Backpack, adjust [SD] |
| (er) | 350: | Kai lords -> Kai Lords |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Grand Master Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| (er) | 350 (Illustration XX Caption): | the Monastery -> the monastery |
| Large Illustrations |
| I | 2 | 'Prepare to die, raven-bait!' spits the bandit, as he unsheathes his heavy blade. |
| II | 20 | You see two Drakkarim engrossed in a game of dice. |
| III | 34 | A colossal black spider emerges from its subterranean lair. |
| IV | 60 | You hold Lone Wolf's distinctive cloak brooch. |
| V | 70 | Frantically, Xaol the Necromancer snatches up his iron staff and leaps forward. |
| VI | 84 | The fearsome reptillian lashes out with its glowing rod. |
| VII | 90 | The monstrous creature shoots forth a terrible gout of flame. |
| VIII | 105 | You see the shadowy prison-sphere that holds Lone Wolf captive. |
| IX | 119 | The loathsome Kraan swoops down in a desperate, vengeful attack. |
| X | 150 | A Drakkar rider swoops down and hurls a smoking black orb. |
| XI | 180 | The assault trooper raises his jagged black sword in readiness to strike. |
| XII | 183 | The dusty skeletons come stiffy to life, their eye sockets glowing with a baleful blue light. |
| XIII | 196 | Zorkaan is ripped asunder by the power of the Sommerswerd. |
| XIV | 232 | From the depths of the fissure there emerges a host of giant black flies. |
| XV | 250 | Two nightmarish creatures creep forwards on clawed feet. |
| XVI | 264 | Suddenly a section of the glass wall explodes into a million razor shards. |
| XVII | 299 | A leathery ape-faced creature sucks gruel through its jagged fangs. |
| XVIII | 306 | You see skeletal remains hanging from manacles in the dimly-lit room. |
| XIX | 325 | Swirling black vapours ooze through the surface of the crystal sphere. |
| XX | 350 | Lord Rimoah emerges from the crowd to welcome your return to the Monastery. |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Story So Far [x6]: | Cloud-dancer [itals] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | fêted [encode properly] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far [x2]: | . . . [encode as ellipsis] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | mastered four of [four: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | one of the weapons [one: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | EQUIPMENT [link] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Shield / Power Word / Invisible Fist / Lightning Hand / Levitation / Mind Charm [spell] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Fire and -> Fire, and |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | The Fall of Blood Mountain [itals] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | map [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | Weapons List [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | carry is two [two: itals] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Splinter / Flameshaft [spell] |
| (ne) | 1, 5, 39, 50, 110, 256, 282, 293, 348, 350: | Cloud-dancer [Itals] |
| (ne) | 4: | (in psychic shock) [itals] |
| (ft) | 11, 39, 219, 256, 293, 300, 348: | Standard puzzle footnote. |
| (ft) | 12: | This is the correct answer to the puzzle in Section 219. |
| (ft) | 20: | This is the correct answer to the puzzle in Sections 39, 256, 293, and 348. |
| (ne) | 20: | snick [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 27, 338, 342: | click [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 70: | (with Serpent Rod) [itals] |
| (ne) | 93, 218: | Clunk! [onomatopoeia] |
| (ft) | 105: | This is the correct answer to the puzzle in Sections 11 and 300. |
| (ne) | 140, 172, 187, 222: | (possessed by Zorkaan) [itals] |
| (ne) | 190, 347: | Gloar! [spell] |
| (ne) | 195: | clang [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 305: | [SD: Remove: text in square brackets] |
| Rejected |
| (ft) | Rules For Combat: | It is not necessarily the case that the Grand Master will lose any EP during the combat. |
| (er) | 11, 29, 232: | tracking -> Tracking |
| (er) | 12, 105: | clicks [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 13, 102: | 60 feet -> sixty feet |
| (er) | 39, 256, 293, 348: | 50 miles -> fifty miles |
| (er) | 44, 248: | draught -> draft |
| (er) | 48, 58, 299: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 55: | 15 feet -> fifteen feet |
| (er) | 57, 73, 89, 108, 111, 264, 318: | or less -> or lower |
| (er) | 57, 89, 108, 111, 318: | or more -> or higher |
| (er) | 66, 339: | Lantern -> lantern [SO]
[SD: Disagree, because the text stipulates that it is a usable Backpack Item] |
| (er) | 72: | face-first [Is this OK?]
[JB: Yes] |
| (er) | 91, 100, 270: | 10 feet -> ten feet |
| (er) | 92: | thuds [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 93: | Clunk! Carefully -> Clunk!. Carefully [SD: Not the onomatopoeia, but the positioning of the full stop after it.]
[SO: Rejected. We have removed superfluous punctuation such as commas from onomatopoeia in other books (e.g. Clunk, -> Clunk!). |
| (er) | 110, 200: | 50 feet -> fifty feet |
| (er) | 120: | well guarded -> well-guarded [[SO: I think is is OK, actually. "The well-guarded gate" vs. "The gate is well guarded".] |
| (er) | 123, 138: | healing -> Healing |
| (er) | 152: | mental command and lopes off -> mental command, and lopes off [SD: Inserting comma to partition a very long sentence]
[SO: Unnecessary] |
| (er) | 160, 315: | 100 yards -> one hundred yards |
| (er) | 175: | end-over-end [SD: What to do about...? (Consistency vs section 104, 231, where it appears without the hyphens)]
[SO: end-over-end is correct] |
| (er) | 187: | thud [onomatopoeia]
[SD: "Thud" probably not onomatopoeic, (at least, not in any of the previous books in the series... unless I've missed something)] |
| (er) | 209, 253: | curing -> Curing |
| (er) | 230: | 10 yards -> ten yards [SD] |
| (er) | 237: | or less -> or fewer |
| (er) | 263: | 100 feet -> one hundred feet |
| (er) | 272: | Grand Weaponmastery with Bow -> Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow [SD: OR: Grand Weaponmastery with Bows. But I would opt for the former] |
| (er) | 299: | 20 feet -> twenty feet |
| (er) | 305: | If you possess an Iron Key, [and wish to use it,] turn to 93. -> If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 93. [SD:
OR: change second option to:
If you do not possess this Backpack Item, turn to 203. -> If you do not possess this Backpack Item, or choose not to use it, turn to 203.
[However, it is rare for GM to be offered the option of not using items. SD: "I prefer the former."]
[SO: The latter is more consistent with the books.] |
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