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3: The Omega Zone
| Pending |
| (er) | 336: | roadmasters -> road masters [or, simply delete 'roadmasters'] |
| Small Illustrations |
| Small 1: | Sun over Pine-forest Mountains | |
| Small 2: | Moon over collapsed bridge | |
| Small 3: | Highway leading into Mountain pass | |
| Small 4: | Drive Friendly sign | |
| Small 5: | Target-sight looking at jeep | |
| Small 6: | Empty gas cannister | |
| Small 7: | 2 Bikers | |
| Small 8: | Mad Dog's car | |
| Small 9: | Wagon | |
| Small 10: | Texas CALDC1 number plate | |
| Small 11: | Leather Mask, Gloves, Chain | |
| Fixed (Errata) |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 86, 187 [hang on to]; 129 [opens on to]; 55, 117, 345 [back on to (i.e. abut)]; 135, 209 [and on to your rendezvous])
(FIXED: 176 [climb onto]; 157, 170, 213, 223, 296 [leap onto]; 37 [it onto]; 25, 161, 274, 281, 314 [back onto]; 25, 143, 293, 330 [accelerate (away) onto]; 106 [directly onto]; 156 [manhandle...onto]; 230 [drives onto]; 41 [bring the roadster back on to a straight course]) |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction [x2]: | USSR and -> USSR, and |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction: | cable and -> cable, and |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction: | Hijack, Assassination and Violent Opposition Consortium. -> Hijack, Assassination, and Violent Opposition Consortium. [LM] |
| (er) | Dateline To Destruction: | destined to be neutralized and dismantled -> slated to be neutralized and dismantled [LM: It wasn't their destiny if they were stolen] |
| (er) | Dateline To Destruction: | declare emergency -> declare an emergency [LM] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | adventure you -> adventure, you |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | on to -> onto |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | motocycles and -> motorcycles, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | shotguns and -> shotguns, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | reflexes and -> reflexes, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | education and -> education, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | tested, therefore -> tested; therefore [LM] |
| (er) | Equipment: | Canteen and -> Canteen, and |
| (er) | Equipment: | radioactivity) and -> radioactivity), and |
| (er) | Rules For Close Combat: | This procedure continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Cal Phoenix are reduced to zero, at which point the one whose score is zero is declared dead. If Cal Phoenix is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Cal Phoenix proceeds but with a reduced ENDURANCE point score. -> This procedure continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Cal Phoenix are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Cal Phoenix is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Cal Phoenix proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | 22, 335: | reply; 'bruised -> reply. 'Bruised |
| (er) | 29, 153, 166: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 30: | despatched -> dispatched [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 32, 46 [x2], 196, 222, 266, 287, 316: | spyhole -> spy-hole |
| (er) | 37: | OK men -> OK, men |
| (er) | 37: | Frankland; 'we -> Frankland. 'We |
| (er) | 42, 157, 213, 296: | shockwave -> shock wave |
| (er) | 43, 135, 175, 209: | much-needed -> much needed [IK: as per PAMoS] |
| (er) | 46: | dimly-lit -> dimly lit |
| (er) | 53: | despatch -> dispatch [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 54, 59, 80, 100, 145: | Backpack item -> Backpack Item |
| (er) | 123: | rockface -> rock-face |
| (er) | 142: | despatched -> dispatched [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 144, 215: | What the... -> What the...? |
| (er) | 150, 227, 258, 336: | blood-stained -> bloodstained |
| (er) | 172: | much-practised -> much practised [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 182: | manically -> maniacally |
| (er) | 189: | pineclad -> pine-clad |
| (er) | 259: | torchbeam -> torch's beam [or, torch-beam] [irs: went for torch's beam] |
| (er) | 300: | Cochise county -> Cochise County |
| (er) | 334: | drawbolt -> bolt |
| (er) | 336: | killed.' says -> killed,' says |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Title: | Tuscon -> Tucson |
| (ne) | Title: | Finalise text for Brian Williams fw.inc file [Brian Williams was first noticed by Joe Dever for his work in White Dwarf magazine (circa issue 50) and the Real Life Gamebooks series by Jon Sutherland and Simon Farrell. Brian Williams was Joe's first choice of illustrators to replace Gary Chalk on the Lone Wolf series. Brian also illustrated three of the four books in Joe Dever's Freeway Warrior series.] |
| (ne) | Rules For Close Combat: | CLOSE COMBAT SKILL [encode as attribute] |
| (ne) | Rules For Close Combat: | [LM: link from <close combat> leads to <numbered sections> not section 1] |
| (ne) | 119: | en route [foreign] |
| (ne) | 136: | [so: choice 1 should link to Section 235 (link broken)] |
| (ne) | 163: | 98 -> 98. |
| (ne) | 171: | [so: choice 2 should link to Section 304 (link broken)] |
| (ne) | 277: | [so: Remove superfluous links to sections 99 and 296] |
| (ne) | 278: | [so: choice 1 should link to Section 99 (link broken)] |
| (ne) | 278: | [so: choice 2 should link to Section 296 (link broken)] |
| Rejected |
| (er) | 275: | unbeknown -> unbeknownst |
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