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06: The Kingdoms of Terror
| Fixed |
| All occurrences (or just some?) of on to -> onto |
| (er) | 12, 20, 23, 26, 56 [x2], 75, 95, 155, 170, 178, 209, 236, 264, 265, 292, 296, 301, 303 [x2]: | arrow -> Arrow |
| (er) | 13 [x2], 47, 74, 85 [x2], 95, 141 [x2], 153, 159, 162 [x2], 164, 170, 178, 196, 201, 209, 219 [x2], 224, 227, 234, 243, 268, 278 [x2], 283, 296, 330, 334, 340: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | disciplines: | mastery of this skill -> that mastery of this skill |
| (er) | disciplines: | weapons list -> Weapons List [link to Action Chart] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | add only 2 extra points to your COMBAT SKILL. -> add only 2 extra points to your COMBAT SKILL. (Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.) |
| (er) | Disciplines: | your list -> your Weaponmastery Checklist [SO: and link to the Action Chart][Dewi Morgan, August 2008] |
| (er) | Equipment | Kai monastery -> Kai Monastery |
| (er) | Equipment [x9]: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | Equipment [x7]: | arrow -> Arrow |
| (er) | Equipment: | combat, therefore it is strongly -> combat; therefore it is strongly [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Equipment: | Weaponmastery with a bow -> Weaponmastery with Bow |
| (er) | Equipment [x2]: | two weapons -> two Weapons [so: Does this affect the xml of the other Magnakai books?] |
| (er) | Equipment: | number of weapons -> number of Weapons [so: Does this affect the xml of the other Magnakai books?] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | 1: | Fryelund forest -> Fryelund Forest |
| (er) | 3: | Durncrag mountains -> Durncrag Mountains |
| (er) | 5: | Salony and -> Salony, and |
| (er) | 10: | river boat -> riverboat |
| (er) | 13: | spreadeagled -> spread-eagled |
| (er) | 18: | split nor -> split, nor |
| (er) | 19: | houses and -> houses, and |
| (er) | 19: | powders and -> powders, and |
| (er) | 21: | vanished: the -> vanished; the [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 26: | toa-wood -> toa wood |
| (er) | 39: | Varettian hills -> Varettian Hills |
| (er) | 40: | these men have used -> these men used |
| (er) | 40: | Wine and -> Wine, and |
| (er) | 44, 150: | head first -> head-first |
| (er) | 45: | silver bow -> Silver Bow |
| (er) | 68, 118: | forest of Eula -> Forest of Eula |
| (er) | 76: | (but only these) Items -> (but only these) items |
| (er) | 78: | back-handed -> backhanded [jb: Fix it] |
| (er) | 121: | toa-trees -> toa trees |
| (er) | 121: | ledge and -> ledge, and |
| (er) | 124: | east and -> east, and |
| (er) | 127: | Lone Wolf [itals] |
| (er) | 127: | corridor and -> corridor, and |
| (er) | 127: | star charts and -> star charts, and |
| (er) | 127: | maps and engrossed -> maps, engrossed [so: or, maps, and are engrossed; maps while engrossed] |
| (er) | 135: | boasting or -> boasting, or |
| (er) | 138: | on to the street -> onto the street [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 141: | dancers and -> dancers, and |
| (er) | 144, 202: | equipment and -> equipment, and |
| (er) | 146: | north-west -> northwest |
| (er) | 156: | resistance -> Resistance [so: in second choice] |
| (er) | 156: | resistance -> RESISTANCE [so: We have already altered it in the Errata from resistance -> Resistance] |
| (er) | 158 [x3]: | Items -> items |
| (er) | 158: | Silver Key [Dewi Morgan: You might already have the Silver Key from Kalte in your possession, August 2008]
[SO: To disambiguate: Silver Key -> Small Silver Key] |
| (er) | 161: | belt pouch -> Belt Pouch |
| (er) | 165: | guild of city criers -> Guild of City Criers |
| (er) | 168: | glasses and -> glasses, and |
| (er) | 170, 178, 243, 268, 340: | with a Bow -> with Bow |
| (er) | 202: | shabby and -> shabby, and |
| (er) | 209: | discard your bow -> shoulder your bow [Dewi Morgan, August 2008] |
| (er) | 211: | Prince Janveal of Helm -> Prince Janveal of Helin [tw: The maps in both this book and in 16tlov show the name of the Lyrisian town as "Helin". OCR error?] |
| (er) | 216: | Brass street -> Brass Street |
| (er) | 219: | makes ceremonious display -> makes a ceremonious display |
| (er) | 219: | seat and hurls -> seat, and hurls |
| (er) | 253: | A Meal of -> A meal of [so: It is not a possession in this instance] |
| (er) | 257: | on to -> onto [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 267: | Varettian plain -> Varettian Plain |
| (er) | 289: | wineshops -> wine shops |
| (er) | 289: | rivermen -> river-men |
| (er) | 289: | a knot...tumble -> a knot...tumbles [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 289: | and set about each other -> and they set about each other [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 293: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | 297: | gleefully, 'I -> gleefully. 'I |
| (er) | 300: | gold and -> gold, and |
| (er) | 301: | shrieks, 'I -> shrieks. 'I |
| (er) | 339: | any of these Items, turn to 90. -> any of these items, turn to 90. |
| (er) | 341: | riverbank -> river bank |
| (er) | 341: | Cener mountains -> Cener Mountains |
| (er) | 341: | Huntmastery and -> Huntmastery, and |
| (er) | 342: | Welcome brave -> Welcome, brave |
| (er) | 342: | sir, welcome -> sir; welcome [or, sir. Welcome] [jb: I actually made these separate sentences.] |
| (er) | 346: | Each wear -> Each wears |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Magnakai Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | title: | Kai lords -> Kai Lords |
| (ne) | discplnz: | [KS: Wrong Weaponmastery illustration] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | anytime -> any time |
| (ne) | 10, 44, 124 [x2], 131, 231, 297, 341: | Kazonara <cite> |
| (ft) | 13: | What if you have a Bow and would still like to flee? [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 16, 144, 202, 251: | clang [onomatopoeia] |
| (ft) | 17: | What if you don't have 2 Gold Crowns to pay for a room? [Dewi Morgan, August 2008]
[SO: "If you cannot afford to pay for a room, the tavern-keeper will accept one Backpack Item or Weapon in lieu of payment for a night in the dormitory."] |
| (ft) | 20: | Remember to deduct an Arrow from your Action Chart. |
| (ne) | 26, footnotz: | melee -> mêlée |
| (ne) | 100: | Helm Way -> Helin Way |
| (ne) | 195: | &lellips; -> <ch.lellips/> |
| (ne) | 199: | merchants wife -> merchant's wife |
| (ne) | 252: | an bow -> a bow [so: footnote error] |
| (ne) | 298: | costal -> coastal |
| (ne) | 324: | oungent -> pungent [so: (Illustration XIX Caption)] |
| (ne) | 06tkot 332: | out-houses -> outhouses [so: line-break.] |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Section 2): | are thus limited to one of each potion (if you can afford to buy and have space carry them). -> may therefore purchase only one of each potion, should you decide to do so. |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Section 232): | why this is. -> why this is so. |
| (ne) | Errata: | the Pathmanship choice -> the Pathsmanship choice |
| (ne) | Errata: | intitial -> initial |
| Rejected |
| (er) | discplnz [x3]: | weapon(s) -> Weapon(s) |
| (er) | 5: | rivalries and -> rivalries, and [jb: not a serial comma in this case (split by ... rivalries and the ambitions...)] |
| (er) | 14: | come Tagazin -> come, Tagazin [jb: I don't think this is technically necessary, and it would make separate each of the first three words of the sentence with commas (not very pretty). :)] |
| (er) | 53, 104, 144, 202, 240, 251, 312 [x2]: | tavern-keeper -> tavernkeeper |
| (er) | 54: | draughty -> drafty |
| (er) | 82: | carthorses -> cart-horses |
| (er) | 87: | The town watch rush forward to avenge their sergeant's death, but in their haste -> The town watch rushes forward to avenge its sergeant's death, but in its haste [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] [jb: In this case, I think it's important to make it clear that the watch is comprised of more than one person.] |
| (er) | 186: | Free Psi-surge use [NM]
[so: Since the effect of this use of Psi-surge is described as happening 'gradually', you must decide whether to deduct 2 or 4 ENDURANCE points due to use of this Discipline.
[JB: The section which leads > to 186 mentions either Nexus or Psi-surge. I think it's likely that > Dever didn't include an endurance loss because of the Nexus.] |
| (er) | 183, 197, 252: | arrow -> Arrow [jb: 183 is Altan's arrow. 197 is not your arrow. 252 is not really an item Arrow.] |
| (er) | 233: | Chasm of Doom -> chasm of doom [so: cf. all other occurrences in this book, e.g. Section 1] [jb: This is used like a proper noun. There were only two other occurrences in this book, so I capitalized those instead. I also corrected others in 04tcod, 16tlov, and 17tdloi.] |
| (er) | 251: | equipment and -> equipment, and [jb: not a serial comma] |
Errata
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