| |
2: The Forbidden City
| Pending (Errata) |
| (er) | 16: | who, or what, => ? who -- or what -- |
| (er) | 17: | and have some Azawood leaves => ? and have an Azawood Leaf (you only need one) cf. 59 |
| (er) | 26: | stand either side =>??? stand on either side |
| (er) | 76: | bolt holes => bolt-holes |
| (er) | 82: | [LM: no mention of magdi hound's resistance to magic cf. refs. 123 & 61 (charity bonus for helping chaksu?)]
[Add: "Due to the magical powers of their maker, Shasarak, the Magdi have a natural resistance to magic and you must subtract 2 from your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of the combat." as per Sections 61 and 123.] |
| (er) | 86: | towards the Earth ??? (towards the ground or towards Magnamund?)
[so: or, "...the world".] |
| (er) | 145: | some Azawood leaves => ? an Azawood Leaf
[so: The player is told to record them on the Action Chart as "Azawood Leaves", though] |
| (er) | 153: | cut and thrust of your attack has => cut and thrust of your attack have |
| (er) | 159: | mob surge => mob surges? |
| (er) | 194: | and shrubs, further on => and shrubs and, further on |
| (er) | 196: | as if it was => as if it were |
| (er) | 198: | good and ill-wills => good and ill wills |
| (er) | 203: | escort look => escort looks (cf. ref. 287) |
| (er) | 214: | If you have no more food in your Backpack and want to gather supplies before going any further, turn to 32.
If you have enough food to complete your quest, turn to 195.
[LM:what if you only have 1 meal and want to gather supplies?] |
| (er) | 226: | precision, causes => precision cause |
| (er) | 229: | step back, such is =>? step back: such is
[SO: Or, "step back--such is"] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Footnote (Sections 112, 136): | before turning -> before moving on [??] |
| Fixed |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto
(REJECTED: 23, 26, 213 [hang on to], 233 [hold on to] 246, 267, 64 [leads...on to])
(FIXED: 12, 191 [step onto]; 97 [hauls you up onto]; 233 [you tip the contents...onto]) |
| (er) | Title: | adventure of madness, magic and menace => adventure of madness, magic, and menace |
| (er) | The Coming Of Grey Star: | creators of the Earth => ??? (Magnamund)
[so: the Earth -> Magnamund] |
| (er) | The Coming Of Grey Star: | enchantments, magical mists and mage winds |
| (er) | The Coming Of Grey Star: | nameless mountains, untamed forests and lands => nameless mountains, untamed forests, and lands [LM] |
| (er) | The Coming Of Grey Star: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | If at any time your ENDURANCE score fall to zero, you -> If at any time your ENDURANCE score fall to zero or below, you |
| (er) | Powers: | are, is -> are is |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Grey Star are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Grey Star is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Grey Star proceeds but with his ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Grey Star are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Grey Star is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Grey Star proceeds but with his ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | You now have the number of ENDURANCE points lost by Grey Star. To calculate the number lost by the enemy, multiply this by the number of WILLPOWER points that Grey Star elected to use. Now you have the final number of ENDURANCE points lost by both Grey Star and his enemy in this round of combat. (E represents points lost by the enemy; GS represents points lost by Grey Star.) -> GS represents the number of ENDURANCE points lost by Grey Star. To calculate the number lost by the enemy, multiply the number marked 'E' by the number of WILLPOWER points that Grey Star elected to use. Now you have the final number of ENDURANCE points lost by both Grey Star and his enemy in this round of combat.
[LM: I thought former wording is possibly unclear--it sounds like the enemy always loses 3x as much as Grey Star]
[JB: "...multiply this by..." -> "...multiply the number listed for the enemy by..."] |
| (er) | Sage Advice: | A score of zero WILLPOWER points -> A score of zero WILLPOWER points or below |
| (er) | sage: | at all, so be => at all; so be [LM: 'so' is only a conjunction when it is short for 'so that'. in this case, it's an adverb, so the semi-colon is needed] |
| (er) | 1: | Anyone looking into the eyes of a Shianti would see themselves => Anyone looking into the eyes of a Shianti would see himself |
| (er) | 1: | Shadakine country, difficult mountains and unknown wilderness => Shadakine country, difficult mountains, and unknown wilderness |
| (er) | 1: | 'But how,' you => 'But how?' you |
| (er) | 7: | domain of the Earth (???Magnamund)
[so: "the Earth", as in "the dirt"] |
| (er) | 12: | no more that a mile => no more than a mile |
| (er) | 42: | fear, anger and frenzy => fear, anger, and frenzy |
| (er) | 52: | brave companions; Urik's wrinkled => brave companions: Urik's wrinkled |
| (ft) | 61: | [LM: does this ref. require footnote 7 which appears in ref. 20?] |
| (er) | 66: | sinister vision. His face => sinister vision, his face |
| (er) | 66: | long bony claw-like fingers => long, bony, claw-like fingers |
| (er) | 111: | great gift, so they => great gift -- so they |
| (er) | 111: | face of the Earth => face of Magnamund
[so: or, "...the world".] |
| (er) | 113: | not advance, it is => not advance; it is |
| (er) | 126: | sleep now, time for => sleep now; time for |
| (er) | 126: | you rise, take up your Backpack and Staff and make => you rise, take up your Backpack and Staff, and make |
| (er) | 140: | your shoulder: you hiss => your shoulder; you hiss |
| (er) | 140: | your ears; a moaning => your ears: a moaning |
| (er) | 149: | trader's city of Suhn => traders' city of Suhn |
| (er) | 157: | the air, => the air;
[so: Or, "the air."] |
| (er) | 157: | say, 'feed -> say. 'Feed |
| (er) | 158: | men, women and children => men, women, and children |
| (er) | 173: | game, wild berries and Lianor => game, wild berries, and Lianor |
| (er) | 194 [x2]: | north-west -> northwest |
| (er) | 210: | Earth, Wind, Fire and Water => Earth, Wind, Fire, and Water |
| (er) | 204: | men, women and children => men, women, and children |
| (er) | 208: | army, disguised as civilians, lie => army, disguised as civilians, lies (cf. ref. 139) |
| (er) | 211: | Shadaki; riven => Shadaki, riven |
| (er) | 211: | nation and => nation, and |
| (er) | 213: | to tremble, it is => to tremble; it is |
| (er) | 221: | you, Urik and Hugi => you, Urik, and Hugi |
| (er) | 222: | you, Urik and Sado => you, Urik, and Sado |
| (er) | 230: | Earth, Air, Fire and Water => Earth, Air, Fire, and Water |
| (er) | 231: | man, dressed in rags jumps => man, dressed in rags, jumps |
| (er) | 242: | to shake, it is => to shake; it is |
| (er) | 250: | Warward, Kiro => Warward, Kiro, |
| (er) | 250: | battle tonight, aid us => battle tonight; aid us |
| (er) | 253: | that your are => that you are |
| (er) | 257: | long tail, enable him => long tail enable him |
| (er) | 257: | by a poisonous Quoku, the flying amphibians => by poisonous Quoku, the flying amphibians |
| (er) | 267: | north, east and west. => north, east, and west. |
| (er) | 272: | shadow. A Kleasą => shadow, a Kleasą |
| (er) | 275: | you, Urik and the fighters => you, Urik, and the fighters |
| (er) | 275: | men, women and children => men, women, and children |
| (er) | 288: | If you do not possess this skill, or do not wish to use it => If you do not possess either of these skills, or do not wish to use them (cf. 237 and 215) |
| (er) | 290: | Earth, Air, Wind and Water => Earth, Air, Wind, and Water |
| (er) | 292: | Jewel => jewel |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Game Rules, Footnotes [x2]: | score falls to zero, you -> score falls to zero or below, you |
| (ne) | Powers: | however difficult may => however difficult, may |
| (ne) | 1: | Mountains of Mom -> Mountains of Morn [David Ratliff, Jan 4 2007] |
| (ne) | 26: | hail => hall |
| (ne) | 44: | Sitting up, link -> Sitting up, Urik [Thomas Frost, Jan 1 2007] [Michael Kelly, Jan 27 2007][x2] |
| (ne) | 60: | scarlet breeches immediately you => scarlet breeches. Immediately you |
| (ne) | 60: | 'Shah I kill him now?' => 'Shall I kill him now?' |
| (ne) | 60: | ancient people who Once lived -> ancient people who once lived [Kayvohn] |
| (ne) | 78: | Urik let out a yell => Urik lets out a yell |
| (ne) | 109: | you; forcing => you, forcing |
| (ne) | 118: | the bolt penetrate => the bolt penetrates |
| (ne) | 127: | next phase; you are => next phase, you are |
| (ne) | 155: | visibly shake => visibly shaken |
| (ne) | 155: | last you use => last you used |
| (ne) | 155: | quickly frying => quickly trying |
| (ne) | 158: | fails dead => falls dead |
| (ne) | 167: | cuffing => cutting |
| (ne) | 191: | bricks and stones fail into => bricks and stones fall into |
| (ne) | 191: | can act; the strain => can act, the strain |
| (ne) | 210: | aims outstretched => arms outstretched |
| (ne) | 277: | Samu's fail => Samu's fall |
| (ne) | 277: | waist but; already weakened => waist but, already weakened |
| (ne) | 282: | point; use => point, use |
| (ne) | 287: | by Sado, he has => by Sado; he has |
| (ne) | 293: | 187 -> 187. |
| (ne) | 294: | current; and => current, and |
| (ne) | 294: | but; unheeding => but, unheeding |
| (ne) | 299: | fills you nostrils => fills your nostrils |
| (ne) | 309: | cuffing through it => cutting through it |
| (ne) | Errata: | Delete the entry for Section 248 that appears between the entries for 280 and 286. Reported by Marc Cassel, Nov 2006. |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 162): | points. (cf. Section 120) -> points (cf. Section 120). |
| Rejected |
| (er) | Powers: | difficult actions; to discover => difficult actions, to discover [LM] |
| (er) | Powers: | your quest, so choose => your quest; so choose [LM: 'so' is only a conjunction when it is short for 'so that'. in this case, it's an adverb, so the semi-colon is needed] |
| (er) | Powers: | another's mind or cause them => another's mind or cause him (or) others' minds or cause them [LM]
[JB: The use of the third person plural pronoun as a gender-neutral singular pronoun is controversial but increasingly accepted.] |
| (er) | 1: | there's more! => there's more?! |
| (er) | 125: | Emerging into the air, gasping for breath and choking => Emerging into the air, gasping for breath, and choking |
| (er) | 165: | the song of strange birds; the scurrying of furred rodents disturbed by your passing; and the steady hum of insects. => the song of strange birds, the scurrying of furred rodents disturbed by your passing, and the steady hum of insects. |
| (er) | 195: | bird sings, no flower => bird sings; no flower |
| (er) | 200: | tortuous journey => ??? torturous journey |
| (er) | 215: | shock wave -> shockwave |
Errata
|
|
