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10: The Dungeons of Torgar
| Pending |
| (er) | 20: | as if his body was -> as if his body were [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 106: | You cannot escape the worst -> You escape the worst [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 179: | a group of knights appears from the largest tent and command you to halt -> and commands you to halt [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 326: | as though his body was -> as though his body were [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 327: | and the reins given -> and the reins are given [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ft) | Equipment: | [JC: In the Mongoose Publishing edition, the starting equipment in this book includes an Alether Potion, should it be footnoted?] |
| (ft) | 11, 210: | [owlfeather: "Do you lose a magic weapon here?"] |
| (ft) | 71, 93, 228: | [so: "It is unclear whether you should turn to 168 if you possess a Jewelled Mace but not the Sommerswerd."] |
| (ft) | 130, 142: | [dv: Maybe it can be footnoted whether the Dagger of Vashna can be used here? And if so, is it destroyed? (Take that Acolytes of Vashna; try resurrecting your master now... ;))] |
| (ft) | 168: | [jc: Should Jewelled Mace grant here +5 CS bonus?] [so: "It is unclear whether a Jewelled Mace should add 5 to your COMBAT SKILL for this combat (cf. Shadow on the Sand Section 253). You should certainly not double all ENDURANCE losses if you use the Jewelled Mace instead of the Sommerswerd."] |
| Fixed |
| (er) | Many: | All occurrences of "<rank> or more" with "<rank> or higher" |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 16, 80, 142, 219, 328 [opens on to]; 63 [hang on to]; 347 [hold on to]; 226, 242 [latch on to])
(FIXED: 20, 188, 326 [leaps onto]; 127 [step onto]; 152, 169 [yourself onto]; 145 [out onto]; 151 [back onto]; 177, 214 [over onto]; 205 [collapse onto]; 214 [bundle you onto]; 287 [you onto]; 296 [onto his stomach]; 309 [up onto]; 327 [helped onto]) |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | The Story So Far, Equipment | Kai monastery -> Kai Monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | gods -> Gods |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Disciplines: | mastery of this skill -> mastery this skill |
| (er) | Equipment: | Weaponmastery with a -> Weaponmastery with |
| (er) | Equipment: | bow -> Bow [so: x9] |
| (er) | Equipment: | arrow -> arrow [so: x7] |
| (er) | Equipment: | combat, therefore -> combat; therefore |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | 6, 79, 142, 179, 200, 219, 306, 328: | Lone Wolf <cite> |
| (er) | 8, 22, 26, 33, 52, 59, 67, 155, 208, 213, 293, 329, 349: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 11, 130, 142, 210: | this weapon -> this Weapon |
| (er) | 22, 36 [x2], 70 [x2], 76, 96, 109, 119, 131 [x2], 147, 149, 164, 195, 272 [x2], 336, 349: | arrow -> Arrow |
| (er) | 22: | volatile mixture of phosphorous and oil -> volatile mixture of phosphorus and oil (?) [dv] [so: Phosphorous is an adjective meaning 'containing trivalent phosphorus'.] |
| (er) | 60, 193: | hornet's nest -> hornets' nest [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 80: | torches that splutter -> torches that sputter [ik/bk] |
| (er) | 115: | the horse's hooves -> the horses' hooves [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 115: | melee -> mêlée |
| (er) | 120: | zig-zags -> zigzags |
| (er) | 121: | bow -> Bow [so: 2nd occurrence only] |
| (er) | 131: | your bow -> your Bow |
| (er) | 131: | quiver -> Quiver [so: maybe?] |
| (er) | 144: | cul-de-sacs -> culs-de-sac [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
[so: Also, <foreign>] |
| (er) | 153, 283, 319: | have a bow -> have a Bow |
| (er) | 155: | more that -> more than |
| (er) | 177, 285: | 177 claims that the Black Key is a Backpack item. 285 (the page immediately after for me) implies in the third option that it's a "Special Item." [Reported here.]
[SO: 177: Backpack Item -> Special Item] [JB: Looks good to me.] |
| (er) | 181, 250: | forego -> forgo |
| (er) | 187: | If you win and the fight last -> If you win and the fight lasts [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 193: | Imposter! -> Impostor! |
| (er) | 209: | swop -> swap |
| (er) | 222: | seen you, he is -> seen you; he is [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 265, 340: | toll of your possessions -> toll on your possessions [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 271: | to their muscular bodies -> to his muscular body [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 298: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | 300: | enemy have -> enemy has |
| (er) | 341: | zig-zag -> zigzags |
| (er) | 344: | arrows -> Arrows |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Magnakai Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Map: | [so: The label for Moggador Forest is partially missing. A fixed version of this image can be found here.]
[SO: Committed the updated map to the SVN repository on Aug 11 2008.] |
| (ft) | Equipment: | [jc: How is the Lantern lighted?] [so: Added: The Lantern is designed to be self-lighting. You will not need a Tinderbox or any other means of creating a flame to light it.] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | anytime -> any time [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Tutelaries lose only 2 points from your COMBAT SKILL -> Tutelaries lose only 2 points from their COMBAT SKILL [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | is not be able -> is not able [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 1: | Firma -> Firina [tw: There is no Firma mentioned anywhere in the books, but Firina, the capital Firalond, looks like a natural place to catch a barge to Talon at.] |
| (ne) | 1: | Firma -> Firina |
| (ne) | 88: | chums -> churns |
| (ft) | 106: | [SO: It is unclear whether a Platinum Amulet should protect you in this situation in lieu of the Discipline of Nexus.] |
| (ne) | 125: | less that twenty -> less than twenty |
| (ne) | 229: | yow -> your |
| (ne) | 296: | (4 Gold Crowns -> (4 Gold Crowns) [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | Footnotes: | [so: The footnote to Section 304 uses the word 'forego'. On the footnotes page, it is spelled 'forgo'.] |
| (ne) | Errata: | (341) Alter zig-zag -> zigzags |
| Rejected |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | is not able -> will not be able [To match the correct wording in Book 8] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Primates with this skill have...and are able -> Primates with this skill will have...and be able [To match Book 8] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Magnakai Wisdom: | a wise choice enables any player to complete the quest => a wise choice enables all players to complete the quest [to agree with the plural 'their' in the following clause] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Map: | [Jan Charvat: The label for Blackshroud is missing [March 22 2007]]
[SO: There's not much we can do about this; there's no room on the map to insert the label, and the font would be noticeably different anyway.] |
| (er) | 1: | ancient quarter -> Ancient Quarter [??] |
| (er) | 136: | bell; but -> bell, but [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 252: | sun-sword -> Sun-sword |
| (er) | 341: | the roar of falling stone -> the roar of falling stones [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 350: | shock wave -> shockwave |
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