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17: The Deathlord Of Ixia
| Pending |
| All occurrences (or just some?) of on to -> onto |
| [JD: Is Ixiataaga undead? Do you get the Sommerswerd bonus when in combat against him?] [jb: I always assumed that Ixiataaga was undead - he looks like a reanimated skeleton after all. But then when I went to add a footnote about it, I looked for a reference to back up the footnote. I never found one. This probable misconception about Ixiataaga being undead may need a footnote itself.] |
| [JD: At what point does using the Sommerswerd become permissible again?] |
| (er) | The Story So Far [para18]: | Drakkarim settlements -> Drakkar settlements [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | [paragraph 8] In the regions to the northeast of Magador and the Maakengorge,=> ? to the northwest of Magador and the Maakengorge [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [so: IMHO, 'northeast of Magador' is correct] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increases -> ...increase [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 7: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 14: | a horde of undead warriors leap -> a horde of undead warriors leaps [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007]
[TP: Disagreed. Nouns like 'horde' are often interchangeable between singular and plural forms, depending on whether they are construed as being 'a group treated as one entity' or 'a number of...' (cf. 'some', 'lots': 'some of my friends are coming', not 'is coming').] |
| (er) | 31: | the Drakkarim undead -> the Drakkar undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 31: | Undead Drakkarim Search Party -> Undead Drakkar Search Party [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 34: | undead Drakkarim guards -> undead Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 46: | power-word -> word of power |
| (er) | 50: | A troop of a dozen undead warriors appear -> A troop of a dozen undead warriors appears [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 56, 206: | a million tons of ice, snow, and shale comes rumbling -> a million tons of ice, snow, and shale come rumbling [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 60: | a trio of crackling bolts come -> a trio of crackling bolts comes [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 63: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 64: | The trio of ghastly creatures press -> The trio of ghastly creatures presses [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007]
[TP: definitely disagree. 'Trio', and more especially 'score', are essentially construed as alternative ways of saying 'three' and 'twenty'. 'A trio of performers is here' could pass, but 'a score of' or 'a dozen performers is here' definitely wouldn't.] |
| (er) | 69: | to be Drakkarim in design. -> to be Drakkar in design. [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 114: | the horde falter -> the horde falters [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007]
[TP: Disagreed. (See S14 for details.)] |
| (er) | 140: | Drakkarim settlements -> Drakkar settlements [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 152: | The Drakkarim patrol -> The Drakkar patrol [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 153: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 153: | the Drakkarim undead -> the Drakkar undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 153: | of Drakkarim undead -> of Drakkar undead (two instances) [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 156: | An undead Drakkarim soldier -> An undead Drakkar soldier [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 176: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 176: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 186: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 186: | the Drakkarim undead -> the Drakkar undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 196: | a row of pillars topple -> a row of pillars topples [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 196: | Drakkarim guards -> Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 207: | An undead Drakkarim soldier -> An undead Drakkar soldier [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 209: | A score of undead have -> A score of undead has [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007]
[TP: Disagree (See S64)] |
| (er) | 222: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 222: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 236: | Drakkarim warriors -> Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 236: | Drakkarim undead -> Drakkar undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 243: | Drakkarim Undead -> Drakkar Undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 250: | each one frozen in the action they were -> each one frozen in the action it was [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 258: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 258: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 260: | first line of screeching Drakkarim hurl themselves -> first line of screeching Drakkarim hurls itself [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 260: | Drakkarim bodies -> Drakkar bodies [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 262: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 262: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 266: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 279: | the Drakkarim undead -> the Drakkar undead [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 279: | Undead Drakkarim Search Party -> Undead Drakkar Search Party [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 298: | Drakkarim undead -> Drakkar undead (two instances) [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 301: | The second wave of Lavas come -> The second wave of Lavas comes [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 306: | undead Drakkarim warriors -> undead Drakkar warriors [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 306: | the Drakkarim guards -> the Drakkar guards [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 343: | The Drakkarim patrol -> The Drakkar patrol [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Story So Far, 141, 152, 162, 165, 343, footnotes: | How should the link to TMC properly be encoded (i.e. with bookref tags)? |
| (ne) | 69, 213, 322: | [so: Can we improve this puzzle for partially-sighted readers?] |
| Pending (Footnotes) |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Grand Huntmastery -> footnote re: meals [DED: It is only in the Equipment section that is says "If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat." I was playing last night and I didn't read this line until after I'd already chosen Grand Huntmastery, and then chosen 2 Meals for my equipment. We could add a footnote here to explain the relevance of Huntmastery to meals] |
| (ft) | 243, 336: | Without weapons or equipment you have no choice but to fight this enemy unarmed. (Remember to make the appropriate adjustments to your COMBAT SKILL.) -> [LM: What are the 'appropriate adjustments'? the combat skill loss for unarmed fighting has been eliminated] [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007]
[TP: I'd suggest footnoting this rather than outright eliminating the parentheses.]
[TW: Most players will have CS-boosting equipment and/or [Grand] Weaponmastery in the weapon they usually fight with, so this reminder is probably a good idea.] |
| Fixed (Errata) |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | time at the Monastery -> time at the monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | level of the Monastery -> level of the monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | granite and gold, you -> granite and gold you |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Disciplines: | venoms and toxins -> venoms, and toxins right [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | battle magic -> battle-magic |
| (er) | Disciplines [Kai-screen]: | The strength and capacity of these fortresses increases => increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | Disciplines [Telegnosis]: | Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increases => Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | Equipment: | your Monastery -> your monastery |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | 1: | Lord Rimoah, then you -> Lord Rimoah; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 15: | hand-hold -> handhold |
| (er) | 22: | King's greeting, then you -> King's greeting; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 36, 62, 279: | shockwave -> shock wave |
| (er) | 42: | feet first -> feet-first [??] |
| (er) | 46: | the keyhole, then you -> the keyhole; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 67, 190 [x2]: | chaos-creatures -> Chaos-creatures [IK: as elsewhere in this book] |
| (er) | 68: | thrashes wildly, then, amidst -> thrashes wildly; then, amidst [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 74, 81: | zero -> zero or below |
| (er) | 75: | pre-emptive -> preemptive (see Errata for 254) |
| (er) | 83: | north-western -> northwestern |
| (er) | 86: | above it, then you -> above it; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 92: | its feet, then it -> its feet; then it [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (ft) | 123: | This is a Kai-blast; LW should have his EP reduced by 4 (see Improved Disciplines). [Neil McGrory Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 132: | head first -> head-first |
| (er) | 133, 236: | sea water -> seawater |
| (er) | 135: | the tip; the prelude -> the tip, the prelude [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 145: | their misshapen form -> their misshapen forms [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 147: | south-easterly -> southeasterly |
| (er) | 147: | south-westerly -> southwesterly |
| (er) | 148, 175: | attained, above -> attained above |
| (er) | 168, 183: | eye-sockets -> eye sockets |
| (er) | 189: | your directions, then you -> your directions; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 191: | pre-empted -> preempted (see Errata for 254) |
| (er) | 207: | busy cavern; by an -> busy cavern: by an [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 212: | icy chill, then you -> icy chill; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 217: | static electricity, then you -> static electricity; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (ft) | 234: | Should the use of Kai-surge here reduce LW's EP? [Neil McGrory Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 248: | my Lord -> my lord (it is lower case in the other two instances from this ref.248) [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 272: | you own pace -> your own pace [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 284: | the helmsman at the bow of the ship -> the helmsman at the stern of the ship (cf. ref.271 etc.) [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 287: | six round -> six rounds [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | 297: | If you have reached the Kai rank of Sun Thane, -> If you possess the Grand Master Discipline of Kai-alchemy and have reached the rank of Sun Thane, [As reported by "zagzig" here.] [TW: My version of the fix would be: Remove the link from 297 to 273 (and of course rewrite the other choice in 297 to just "Turn to..."). (The first option zigzag proposed, although he mistyped it slightly.)] |
| (er) | 301: | en masse [foreign tags] [orig. is non-itals] |
| (er) | 307: | the door, then you -> the door; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | equipment: | This contains six Arrows, record them on your Weapons List. -> This contains six Arrows; record them on your Weapons List. [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Kai-surge, Psi-surge or Mindblast => Kai-surge, Psi-surge, or Mindblast [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | water, mud, lava and quicksand => water, mud, lava, and quicksand [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines [Sun Lord/Telegnosis]: | Time duration and degree of surface difficulty increases -> Time duration and degree of surface difficulty increase [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (ne) | 4: | 299 -> 299. |
| (ne) | 15: | 323 -> 323. |
| (ne) | 15: | 210 -> 210. |
| (ne) | 20: | the ceiling there is -> the ceiling--there is [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] |
| (ne) | 26: | 267 -> 267. |
| (ne) | 54: | suddenly hesitate your Kai -> suddenly hesitate; your Kai [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] [so: should be: suddenly hesitate--your Kai] |
| (ne) | 77, footnotz: | Grandmasters -> Grand Masters [IK: as in the PAMoS] |
| (ne) | 96: | short-lived they quickly -> short-lived; they quickly [LeRoy McSwain, Mar 2007] [so: should be: short-lived--they quickly] |
| (ne) | 98: | 237 -> 237. |
| (ne) | 100: | center -> centre [ik: appears also in the list of footnotes, but I assume this list is created automagically (?)] |
| (ne) | 286: | 334 -> 334. |
| (ne) | 287: | 32 -> 32. |
| (ne) | 287: | 213 -> 213. |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Disciplines): | mastery of an additional Kai weapon. ... you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have Mastery of. -> mastery of an additional Weapon. ... you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have mastery of. |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Disciplines): | See the Grand Master Rules section of the Rules Handbook for details.-> See the Grand Master Rules section of the Readers' Handbook for details. [and link to: http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook] |
| (ne) | errata: | Changed 'COMBAT SKILL' to 'ENDURANCE' according to Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24. Replaced 'Magi-Magic' with 'Magi-magic' and 'opposite and overleaf' with 'below'. [so: This should be moved from The Game Rules to Grand master Disciplines on the Errata page.] |
| Rejected |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Psi-surge -> hidden loyalty bonus [DED: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Mindblast and/or Psi-surge, you can still benefit from these COMBAT SKILL bonuses in the Grand Master books. Mindblast and Kai-surge cannot be used simultaneously. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Huntmastery -> hidden loyalty bonus footnote [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the discipline of Huntmastery, you can still use this to avoid having to tick off a meal when instructed to eat in in the Grand Master books. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to this as a "hidden loyalty bonus" for players who had completed earlier books. Note that Ixia is an icy desert, so you will not be able to use your basic Kai Discipline of Hunting in this way.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Hidden Loyalty Bonus for Curing -> proposed footnote: [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Healing and/or Curing, you can still restore 1 lost EP for each section without combat in the Grand Master books. Such bonuses are not cumulative - the point from Curing replaces the one from Healing. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Weaponmastery -> new footnote for hidden loyalty bonuses [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Weaponskill and/or Weaponmastery, you can still benefit from these COMBAT SKILL bonuses in the Grand Master books. Such bonuses are not cumulative - bonuses from Weaponmastery replace those for Weaponskill, and bonuses from Grand Weaponmastery replace both of these. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (er) | Equipment: | Does Grand Weaponmastery with Bow give +3 or +5 when picking a number from the RNT? (cf. 14TCoK Section 73)
[JB: +3] |
| (er) | Equipment: | Bows and Arrows - If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow -> "...you may add 5 to any number..." ? [DED: Not sure if this is a typo in the rules or deliberate: I thought the original "+3" bonus for arrows matched the +3CS for Magnakai weaponmastery? And when you progress to higher ranks, the bonus rises to higher values? - actually maybe not, advanced discipline for Mentora gives you an extra +2 on a fired or thrown weapon, whilst advanced discipline for Scion-Kai gives +4 CS in general - so they're not the same thing - however do we want another "hidden loyalty bonus" footnote to say you can still use your Mentora Weaponmastery bonus?] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | a wise choice will enable any player -> a wise choice will enable all players (to agree with 'their' in number) [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 26: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 30: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 67 [ne], 106, 135, 137, 152, 161, 165, 196 [x2], 241, 253, 272, 297, 300 [x2], 343, footnotz [ne]: | Kai rank of -> rank of |
| (ft) | 132, 264, 310: | [jd: add standard Sommerswerd vs. undead footnote]
[so: Unnecessary: Banedon gives any character without the Sommerswerd a Weapon that deals double damage vs. undead.] |
| (er) | 243: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 315: | healing -> Healing |
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