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15: The Darke Crusade
| Pending |
| I marked each instance (that I noticed) of the giak plural ending '-im' being used with a singular noun or adjective. However, I ignored each instance when the '-im' ending was used with a noun used as a plural adjective (e.g. drakkarim horsemen). after finishing my read though i realised that in nouns used as adjectives in English the singular form is usually (always?) used (e.g. bank vaults. banks vaults would sound silly). if this rule applies to giak loan words as well, there are a number more erroneous incidences which I did not indicate in the list. [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [This also has implications for most other LW books.] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | [paragraph 8] In the regions to the northeast of Magador and the Maakengorge,=> ? to the northwest of Magador and the Maakengorge [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [so: If so, all GM books need changing. IMHO, 'northeast of Magador' is correct] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | [paragraph 13] promise of Nadziranim power => promise of Nadziran power [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | [paragraph 17] one of Dakushna's Nadziranim sorcerers. => one of Dakushna's Nadziran sorcerers. [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 8: | suggests that he escorts => suggests that he escort (subjunctive mode?) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 16: | a Drakkarim sergeant => a Drakkar sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 17: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 21, 54, 95, 248, 267: | Zagganozod [??] (armour + horse) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 26: | a Drakkarim guard => a Drakkar guard [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 29: | Drakkarim stronghold -> Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 39: | its Drakkarim garrison => its Drakkar garrison [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 42: | The Nadziranim sorcerer => The Nadziran sorcerer [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 46: | large Drakkarim backpack => large Drakkar backpack [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 50: | the Drakkarim escort => the Drakkar escort [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 56: | With your advanced skills it is easy for you to sense immediately that the coin is showing heads [This reference leads to 117 where the coin is revealed as heads, but also to 298 where the coin is mysteriously showing tails] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 57: | Tukodaks ??? (elsewhere 'Tukodak' is used as the plural form) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [so: Tukodaks -> Tukodak guards] |
| (er) | 63: | an élite Drakkarim warrior => an élite Drakkar warrior [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 64: | a Drakkarim guard => a Drakkar guard [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 65: | a Drakkarim encampment => a Drakkar encampment [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 65: | a Drakkarim officer => a Drakkar officer [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 71: | a Drakkarim platoon => a Drakkar platoon [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 77: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 84, 135: | bowhead [Is this OK?] |
| (er) | 90: | a Drakkarim patrol => a Drakkar patrol [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 90: | Drakkarim town => Drakkar town [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 93: | bowfire [Is this OK?] |
| (er) | 101: | a Drakkarim Death Knight Sergeant => a Drakkar Death Knight Sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 105: | a Drakkarim cavalry platoon => a Drakkar cavalry platoon [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 115: | A troop of Drakkarim cavalry are => A troop of Drakkarim cavalry is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 118: | come a regiment => comes a regiment [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 124: | the Drakkarim sergeant => the Drakkar sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 125: | group of Lencians are => group of Lencians is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 125: | A regiment of Lencian Crusaders are => A regiment of Lencian Crusaders is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 129: | timberwolves -> timber wolves |
| (er) | 141: | in future => in the future [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [so: idiosyncratic UK-specific usage. IMHO this is OK] |
| (er) | 143: | power-word battle spell -> battle-spell Power Word [also: Power Word (spell) (er)] |
| (er) | 146: | a Drakkarim guard => a Drakkar guard [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 147: | a Drakkarim Death Knight Sergeant => a Drakkar Death Knight Sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 150: | You're not Drakkarim or Lencian => You're not Drakkar or Lencian [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 161: | a Nadziranim sorcerer => a Nadziran sorcerer [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 163: | who instinctively you recognize => whom instinctively you recognize [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 166: | The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as they => The garrison is thrown into a state of near-panic as it [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 182: | a Drakkarim Death Knight Sergeant => a Drakkar Death Knight Sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 187: | snowslide [Is this OK?] |
| (er) | 189: | the failing light, and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols, forces => the failing light, and the increasing sightings of Drakkarim patrols, force [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 190: | a massive hammer blow => ???massive hammer blows [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 198: | Drakkarim Sergeant => Drakkar Sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 205: | speartips -> spear tips [or, spear-tips] |
| (er) | 206: | Gaz rekenarim! => ??? (should this be 'Gaza' or 'Gazim' to agree in number with 'rekenarim'?) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 213: | the Drakkarim commander => the Drakkar commander [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 231: | The Drakkarim garrison => The Drakkar garrison [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 232: | The Drakkarim sergeant => The Drakkar sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 232: | Drakkarim Sergeant => Drakkar Sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 248: | wave of Drakkarim cavalry slam => wave of Drakkarim cavalry slams [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 248: | Their armour, and the sheer weight of their attack, smashes => Their armour, and the sheer weight of their attack, smash [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 248: | against the square and are => against the square and is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 251: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 252: | a Drakkarim guard => a Drakkar guard [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 257: | a Drakkarim machine => a Drakkar machine [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 260: | nighted -> benighted |
| (er) | 260: | Drakkarim patrol => Drakkar patrol [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 262: | Drakkarim cavalry => Drakkar cavalry [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 266: | The Drakkarim sergeant => The Drakkar sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 269: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 270: | +4 -> +3? [JD: Consistent with just being a reminder about the standard bonus?] |
| (er) | 272: | this Drakkarim horde => this Drakkar horde [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 278: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 280: | leap out and seizes him. => leaps out and seizes him. [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 287: | a fortified Drakkarim stronghold => a fortified Drakkar stronghold [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 290: | If you possess Kai-alchemy => (this probably should include 'and wish to use it,' because 'Any attempt to pick this lock could prove fatal.') [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 295: | a Drakkarim sergeant => a Drakkar sergeant [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 296: | You detect they are somewhere => You detect he is somewhere [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 298: | You remove your hand to reveal the citadel of Holmgard stamped on the reverse side of the coin. => (according to ref.56, the coin is showing 'heads') [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 314: | the Drakkarim garrison is => the Drakkar garrison is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 323: | neckchain -> neck chain [or, neck-chain] |
| (er) | 330: | a Drakkarim guard => a Drakkar guard [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 337: | Gaz rekenarim! => ??? (should this be 'Gaza' or 'Gazim' to agree in number with 'rekenarim'?) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 346: | stream of bubbles are => stream of bubbles is [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Grand Huntmastery -> footnote re: meals [DED: It is only in the Equipment section that is says "If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat." I was playing last night and I didn't read this line until after I'd already chosen Grand Huntmastery, and then chosen 2 Meals for my equipment. We could add a footnote here to explain the relevance of Huntmastery to meals] |
| (ne) | 89, 221: | [so: Can we improve these puzzles for partially-sighted readers?] |
| (??) | 156: | and erase any potions of Laumspur and/or Alether. [jfs: Is Laumwort omitted from this list intentionally? Or should it be added there too?][Amarande: Other healing potions aren't mentioned, either, and there are a number of them (e.g., Larnuma, Oxydine, Oede, Kourshah, Baylon's Fungi, Silver Flask, etc.). I think we should trust in Joe here that he said "Laumspur" specifically and not "ENDURANCE restoring Backpack Items."] |
| (ft) | 156: | Also, erase any Meals you may have been carrying in your Backpack, and erase any potions of Laumspur and/or Alether. [jfs: Does this apply to "jars" (as opposed to potions) too? Since jars (obtained in #13) might contain more than one dose of Laumpsur / Alether it is quite unfair to have LoneWolf dispose of them fully if he is carrying these.] [Amarande: I do think it should apply to the Jars, though; IMO the Jars are merely Potions that contain multiple doses in a single Backpack Item slot, they are not intrinsically different from the potions. (As far as I recall there are VERY few cases where Joe specifically indicates a specific potion from among a given 'strain' of potions. E.g., book 3 where only the colored concentrates are usable in certain situations, or book 5 when you can only use a Tincture of Graveweed, not a concentrate. In just about every other case I've seen, Laumspur is Laumspur, etc.)] |
| (ft) | 221: | If you discover that your answer is wrong, or if you cannot solve the puzzle [Sasha Cooper: The text this option leads to shows Lone Wolf giving up - it seems a bit strange not to allow more than one try.] |
| Fixed (Errata) |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 140 [held on to]; 222 [opens on to]; 250 [hangs on to]; 348 [hang on to])
(FIXED: 35, 336 [climb onto]; 35, 314, 336 [leap onto]; 72, 349 [roll...onto]; 92, 132, 205 [yourself...onto]; 111 [over onto]; 118 (Caption) [up onto]; 253 [onto the back]; 258 [crashing onto]; 342 [out onto]) |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | granite and gold, you -> granite and gold you |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | the occupants will have long since brought about their own extinction. Elsewhere, throughout Northern Magnamund, peace reigns victorious [Sasha Cooper: There's a paragraph break after 'their own extinction' in the other novels] [so: This is Errata. I think it should be changed so 'Elsewhere, throughout Northern Magnamund...' is a separate paragraph because it is in the previous books, and it is in the following book, The Legacy of Vashna.] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | north-east -> northeast |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Left-Handed and Old Kingdom Magic -> Left-handed and Old Kingdom magic |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Right-Handed Magic -> Right-handed magic |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Left-Handed Magic -> Left-handed magic |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Akagazad and Kaag -> Akagazad, and Kaag |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Disciplines: | artifacts -> artefacts |
| (er) | Disciplines: | battle magic -> battle-magic |
| (er) | Disciplines: | venoms and toxins -> venoms, and toxins right [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Disciplines [Kai-screen]: | The strength and capacity of these fortresses increases => increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | Disciplines [Telegnosis]: | Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increases => Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Brotherhood spells -> Brotherhood Spells |
| (er) | 3: | your guide, then suddenly => your guide; then suddenly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 8, 316: | long pause, then a => long pause; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 11 [x2], 18, 121, 140, 175 [x2], 297, 333 [x2], 347: | wintery -> wintry |
| (er) | 11, 27, 175, 333: | draft -> draught |
| (er) | 13: | small secluded cover => small secluded cove (as in parallel sections) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 15, 234, 341: | en route [foreign] |
| (er) | 16: | the cabin, then, as => the cabin; then, as [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 17, 86, 104, 136, 152, 167, 207, 232, 256, 308, 332, 338, 339, 340: | Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell |
| (er) | 17: | mid-air, then it => mid-air; then it [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 19: | 'we must get away => 'We must get away [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] [so: feet, 'we -> feet. 'We] |
| (er) | 19: | him so, then he => him so; then he [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 23: | each craft, then you => each craft; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 25: | to succeed, therefore no => to succeed; therefore no [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 25, 227, 258, 277, 339: | Tozaz forest-> Tozaz Forest |
| (er) | 31: | It is near to exhaustion => He is near to exhaustion (to match 'he' later in sentence) [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 31: | Kai rank of -> rank of Kai |
| (er) | 36, 79: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | 38: | the Arrow, then its => the Arrow; then its [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 38, 72, 148, 185, 349: | suspecting trickery, then slowly => suspecting trickery. Then slowly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 40, 304: | faint click, then the => faint click; then the [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 40, 304: | click [onomatepoeia] |
| (er) | 41: | timberwolf -> timber wolf |
| (er) | 41: | Replaced 'treeline' with 'tree line' [...] [Alter fix of treeline -> tree-line; update Errata entry] |
| (er) | 43: | at worse => at worst??? [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: I agree] |
| (er) | 45: | in agreement then together => in agreement; then together [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 47: | unnatural silence, then suddenly => unnatural silence; then suddenly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 51, 155, 264, 284: | t'is -> 'tis |
| (er) | 51, 279: | the icy-cold waters -> the icy cold waters |
| (er) | 51, 135, 155, 264, 284: | much-needed -> much needed [IK: as per PAMoS] |
| (er) | 67: | complete silence, then he => complete silence; then he [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 70: | rusty cover, then you => rusty cover; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 78: | slabs of rock, veined marble and other temple debris => slabs of rock, veined marble, and other temple debris [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 90: | north east => north-east [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: north east -> northeast as per PAMoS] |
| (er) | 91: | Tunnel Stalker, then you => Tunnel Stalker; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 95, 341: | crusader's => crusaders' [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 102 [x2], 158, 227: | Kai mastery => Kai Mastery [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 104: | evoke => invoke [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: Joe is probably thinking of "evocation", but invoke is a better word here] |
| (er) | 108: | hear splashes, then suddenly => hear splashes; then suddenly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 110: | Elder Magi battle spell -> Elder Magi Battle-spell |
| (er) | 111: | to strike, then, with => to strike; then, with [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 117, 309: | timberline -> timber-line |
| (er) | 123: | approaching footsteps, then through => approaching footsteps; then through [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 125: | city gates, then you => city gates; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 125: | slayed -> slew |
| (er) | 129: | no response, then a => no response; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 129: | Nyras Timberwolves => Nyras timber wolves [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 137: | berates them, then he => berates them; then he [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 137: | to pass, then you => to pass; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 140: | Slovarian plain -> Slovarian Plain |
| (er) | 140: | hard pressed -> hard-pressed [IK: as per PAMoS] |
| (er) | 142, 317: | zig-zagging -> zigzagging |
| (er) | 148: | your blow, then its => your blow; then its [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 148: | their sockets, then stiffly => their sockets; then stiffly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 149: | the group, then dutifully => the group; then dutifully [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 149: | you discover that is -> you discover that it is [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 154: | knight's ENDURANCE to zero -> knight's ENDURANCE to zero or below |
| (er) | 158: | you can, then you => you can; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 162: | flailing wildly, then it => flailing wildly; then it [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 162: | rusty bars, then you => rusty bars; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 165: | Tozaz forest, then, the => Tozaz Forest; then, the [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007 |
| (er) | 176: | your mate Kai skills => your innate Kai skills [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: Errata - inate -> innate] |
| (er) | 180: | quiver => ???Quiver [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 183: | your attack, then suddenly => your attack; then suddenly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 184: | to flight of stone steps => to a flight of stone steps [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 190: | pulses, directly -> pulses directly [Neil McGrory Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 190: | end-over-end, then, with => end-over-end; then, with [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 190: | head first -> head-first |
| (er) | 192: tree line -> tree-line |
| (er) | 193: | smooth, dry and crumbly, => smooth, dry, and crumbly, [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 201: | his death, then a => his death; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 202: | the beach then, shaking => the beach; then, shaking [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 207: | entire arm, then a => entire arm; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 215: | he needs, then, with => he needs; then, with [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 222: | a halt, then, very => a halt; then, very [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 227: | it antlered head => its antlered head [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 227: | through forest => through the forest [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 227: | tree-line, then you => tree line; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 240: | steadily louder, then several => steadily louder; then several [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 245: | to pass, then you => to pass; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 248: | heavy losses, then a => heavy losses; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 257: | Boradon mountains -> Boradon Mountains [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 259: | horse trough, then they => horse trough; then they [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 264: | and stiffen, then, with => and stiffen; then, with [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 270: | arching -> arcing |
| (er) | 274: | be raining, then you => be raining; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 275: | a small cabin hidden among the trees. It comprises four white canvas tents => [should 'cabin' be 'camp' as in parallel sections?] [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: It should be changed to camp] |
| (er) | 279: | a shudder, then suddenly => a shudder; then suddenly [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 288: | of focus, then darkness => of focus; then darkness [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 314: | you further, then the => you further; then the [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 314: | climb them, then you => climb them; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 319: | north-westerly -> northwesterly |
| (er) | 322: | the oars, then together => the oars; then together [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 323: | to pass, then you => to pass; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 325: | 'we must => 'We must [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: urgently, 'we -> urgently. 'We] |
| (er) | 328: | north-west -> northwest |
| (er) | 329: | have seen, then you => have seen; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | peoples of the Free Kingdom -> peoples of the Free Kingdoms [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | weighing plight of -> weighing the plight of [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | [paragraph 5] Your discovery, has inspired => Your discovery has inspired [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | this, the first -> this, the third [jb: check to verify the original wording] [so: the original wording is "set in Book 15 of the Lone Wolf Grand Master series"] [William Mobbs reported Aug 2006] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | adventures. (Books -> adventures (Books [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | levels of Kai Grand Mastery you will -> levels of Kai Grand Mastery, you will |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Guardian -> Kai Grand Guardian |
| (ne) | 23, Errata: | reverse 'river bank -> riverbank' [to preserve consistency of 'river bank' throughout LW series] |
| (ne) | 29: | You check your map and discover it to be a fortified Drakkarim stronghold. => You check your map and discover it to be Konozod, a fortified Drakkarim stronghold. [As in parallel sections] [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | 41: | fright; the => fright, the [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | 67: | stairs to tower door => stairs to the tower door [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | 93: | dose by -> close by [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 121, 297, Footnotes [x2]: | fall to zero -> fall to zero or below |
| (ne) | 162: | brisk pace: After a => brisk pace. After a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | 171: | . it is a landmark => . It is a landmark [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ft) | 190, 312: | [Should use of Kai-surge cost 1EP? Currently the use in these sections is 'free'][Neil McGrory Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 204: | and. he => and he [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | 260: | gaolers' -> gaolers [Neil McGrory, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 335: | With a shriek; the => With a shriek, the [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (ne) | Errata: | Replaced 'COMBAT SKILL is reduced to 8 points or less' with 'ENDURANCE is reduced to 8 points or less' since it is highly unlikely that your COMBAT SKILL will ever be reduced to such a low level and later published books also make this change. -> Changed 'COMBAT SKILL' to 'ENDURANCE' according to Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24. |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Disciplines): | mastery of an additional Kai weapon. ... you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have Mastery of. -> mastery of an additional Weapon. ... you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have mastery of. |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Disciplines): | See the Grand Master Rules section of the Rules Handbook for details.-> See the Grand Master Rules section of the Readers' Handbook for details. [and link to: http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook] |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 5, 40): | Link back to riddle source sections (i.e. add '...in Section xxx' to the end of each footnote). |
| (ne) | Footnote (Sections 121, 297): | fall to zero -> fall to zero or below |
| Rejected |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Psi-surge -> hidden loyalty bonus [DED: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Mindblast and/or Psi-surge, you can still benefit from these COMBAT SKILL bonuses in the Grand Master books. Mindblast and Kai-surge cannot be used simultaneously. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Huntmastery -> hidden loyalty bonus footnote [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the discipline of Huntmastery, you can still use this to avoid having to tick off a meal when instructed to eat in in the Grand Master books. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to this as a "hidden loyalty bonus" for players who had completed earlier books. Note that Ixia is an icy desert, so you will not be able to use your basic Kai Discipline of Hunting in this way.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Hidden Loyalty Bonus for Curing -> proposed footnote: [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Healing and/or Curing, you can still restore 1 lost EP for each section without combat in the Grand Master books. Such bonuses are not cumulative - the point from Curing replaces the one from Healing. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (ft) | Disciplines: | Weaponmastery -> new footnote for hidden loyalty bonuses [DED: Suggested footnote: If you have successfully completed previous Lone Wolf Kai or Magnakai adventures, where you possessed the disciplines of Weaponskill and/or Weaponmastery, you can still benefit from these COMBAT SKILL bonuses in the Grand Master books. Such bonuses are not cumulative - bonuses from Weaponmastery replace those for Weaponskill, and bonuses from Grand Weaponmastery replace both of these. In Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.28, Joe Dever referred to these as "hidden loyalty bonuses" for players who had completed earlier books.]
[SO: See the Readers' Handbook |
| (er) | Equipment: | Does Grand Weaponmastery with Bow give +3 or +5 when picking a number from the RNT? (cf. 14TCoK Section 73) |
| (er) | Equipment: | Bows and Arrows - If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow -> "...you may add 5 to any number..." ? [DED: Not sure if this is a typo in the rules or deliberate: I thought the original "+3" bonus for arrows matched the +3CS for Magnakai weaponmastery? And when you progress to higher ranks, the bonus rises to higher values? - actually maybe not, advanced discipline for Mentora gives you an extra +2 on a fired or thrown weapon, whilst advanced discipline for Scion-Kai gives +4 CS in general - so they're not the same thing - however do we want another "hidden loyalty bonus" footnote to say you can still use your Mentora Weaponmastery bonus?] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | a wise choice will enable any player -> a wise choice will enable all players (to agree with 'their' in number) [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 1: | old friend, then you -> old friend; then you [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 21: | few words, then they => few words; then they [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 22, 31, 66, 107, 159, 279, 317: | Grand Guardian or higher, -> Grand Guardian, or higher, |
| (er) | 36, 233: | his breath, then he => his breath; then he [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 60, 257: | mudflats -> mud-flats |
| (er) | 61: | his men, then you => his men; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 93: | of bowfire, then two -> of bowfire; then two [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 147: | backfire -> back-fire |
| (er) | 158, 192, 289: | Kai rank of -> rank of |
| (er) | 227: | minutes pass, then a => minutes pass; then a [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 241: | an Arrow, then you => an Arrow; then you [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 272: | Tukodaks -> Tukodak [so: in line with Sect57] |
| (er) | 296: | someone is nearby. You can tell that they are => someone is nearby. You can tell that he is [(or) => someone is nearby who is] [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007] |
| (er) | 322: | you ship the oars => you unship (?) the oars (dictionary.com defines 'ship' as 'To place (an oar) in a resting position inside a boat without removing it from the oarlock.') [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[so: Disagree; another definition is "to place (an oar) in proper position for rowing"] |
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