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20: The Curse of Naar
| Pending |
| Does Dawn of the Dragons Section 98 have any bearing on the Sommerswerd CS bonus in this adventure? |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | task of teaching a New Order of Kai warriors the skills and proud traditions of your ancestors has been re-established [LM] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | You realized that if you were -> ? You realized that if you are [LM] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Only by doing so -> Only by your doing so [LM] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | armies of darkness -> armies of Darkness [LM] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | toxic gases, corrosive liquids. -> toxic gases, and corrosive liquids.
In the descriptions under Grand Master Disciplines/Kai & Magnakai Disciplines, sometimes the items are separated by a semicolon, other times by a full stop. seems inconsistent. e.g.: 'missile weapons. Master of unarmed combat; no ' [LM] |
| (er) | Equipment: | close combat weapon, such as a sword or an axe. -> close combat Weapon, such as a Sword or an Axe. [LM] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | The range of their detection increases as a Kai Grand Master rises in rank. -> The range of their detection increases as the Kai Grand Master rises in rank. [LM] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | twenty feet of themselves -> ??? twenty feet of himself [LM] |
| (er) | 5: | front rank hurl their spears they retreat to let those behind them come forward to take their -> front rank hurls its spears it retreats to let those behind it come forward to take its [LM] |
| (er) | 8, 56, 71, 84, 124, 159, 171, 232 [x2], 330 [x2]: | backpack -> Backpack |
| (er) | 13: | horde the moment you slay their -> horde the moment you slay its [LM] |
| (er) | 13: | their leader will spur them -> its leader will spur it [LM] |
| (er) | 13: | the undergrowth and when -> (comma either before or after 'and'. for consistency with other similar passages) [LM] |
| (er) | 15, 39, 44, 83, 153, 319, 328: | form, and the sudden cessation of mind contact, throws -> form and the sudden cessation of mind contact throw [LM] |
| (er) | 30, 94, 197: | Avagnids -> Arachnids [IK]
[SO:This seems to be Joe Dever's name for these creatures. Suggest Rejected.] |
| (er) | 33: | be reborn.’ -> be reborn'. (cf. 86) [LM] |
| (er) | 33: | worthy victor.’ -> worthy victor'. (cf. 86) [LM] |
| (er) | 33 [x2], 60, 84 [x2], 86, 90 [x2], 124, 150 [x3], 232: | tome -> Tome [LM: It is a Backpack item in your inventory.] |
| (er) | 41, 265: | be fulfilled; base metal -> be fulfilled, base metal [LM] |
| (er) | 53, 60, 106, 131, 157, 172, 180, 209, 220, 248, 288: | platinum amulet -> Platinum Amulet [LM] |
| (er) | 54, 152: | terrible sound; it -> terrible sound: it [LM] |
| (er) | 55, 231: | are a long line -> is a long line [LM] |
| (er) | 57: | adamanite -> adamantine [??] |
| (er) | 57: | adamanite -> adamantite [ik: cf. article on Wikipedia about adamantite] |
| (er) | 66: | firefall -> fireball [ik: why? maybe Joe really meant 'firefall' as in 'waterfall'] |
| (er) | 79, 207: | incarcerated -> ? interred or entombed [LM] |
| (er) | 82: | formidable Kai-screen [LM: Possible to arrive here from ref.97 through ref.59 where you do not have Kai-screen.]
[SO: Maybe, "formidable psychic defences"?] |
| (er) | 90: | To the south you -> To the south, you (to parallel 'and, to the east, you') [LM] |
| (er) | 98: | Sommerswerd, or Skarn-Ska -> Sommerswerd or Skarn-Ska [LM] |
| (er) | 98: | power word -> power-word |
| (er) | 98, 135, 224, 294: | spar -> spur |
| (er) | 99, 225, 313: | too late; you have -> too late: you have [LM] |
| (er) | 105: | The chaos-horde are -> The chaos-horde is [LM] |
| (er) | 105: | the pit and as -> (comma either before or after 'and' for consistency with other similar passages) [LM] |
| (er) | 112, 191, 236, 285: | the interior and the inside -> the interior, and the inside (to emphasise that it is a second clause) [LM] |
| (er) | 121, 211, 282: | --‘For Sommerlund and the Kai!’ and -> --‘For Sommerlund and the Kai!’--and [LM] |
| (er) | 122: | If you possess Kai-alchemy, and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown, turn to 73. [LM: Ought the player to have an option not to spend the endurance point on teleport?] |
| (er) | 127: | who guided you through the Hellswamp and, in so doing, forfeited his life. [LM: It's possible to visit Torgar without having met Sebb Jarel.] |
| (er) | 127: | words; they -> ? words: they [LM] |
| (er) | 155: | scarab -> Scarab [LM] |
| (er) | 160: | Kai--so long as I live, -> Kai, so long as I live, [LM] |
| (er) | 164 [x2]: | dagger -> Dagger [LM] |
| (er) | 176: | darkness -> ? Darkness [LM] |
| (er) | 190: | weapons -> Weapons [LM] |
| (er) | 190: | If you possess a Dagger, -> ?? If you possess a Dagger and wish to use it, [LM: By avoiding using it, you save 2EP and the Dagger] |
| (er) | 193, 211: | add x to your COMBAT SKILL [add: (in addition to all other combat bonuses for this Special Item)] [cf.Section 64] |
| (er) | 200: | psychic disciplines -> psychic Disciplines [??] |
| (er) | 212, 318: | psychic attack; double all -> psychic attack: double all [LM] |
| (er) | 217 [x2], 251 [x2], 298 [x2]: | leap on -> leap onto |
| (??) | 239: | Can we improve this puzzle for partially sighted fans? |
| (er) | 247: | have attained, above that -> have attained above that [LM] |
| (er) | 255: | If you possess Grand Huntmastery, and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown -> ? If you possess Grand Pathsmanship, and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown [LM]
[SO: This is tricky. It definitely should read "Grand Pathsmanship" instead of "Grand Huntmastery", but in Section 85, which leads here, the player has already stated that they do not possess Grand Pathsmanship. This option should be changed and also moved to Section 85 instead. Note that if we move this option to Section 85, the relevant Errata should also be moved!]] |
| (er) | 255 [x2]: | edged weapon -> edged Weapon [LM] |
| (er) | 255: | (e.g. sword or axe) -> (e.g. Sword or Axe [LM] |
| (er) | 258: | reply, 'but the -> reply, 'the [ik: I think the "but" is okay as reply to what Rimoah says in section 27 (the only one leading to 258).] |
| (er) | 260: | quiver -> Quiver(s) [It is possible to carry multiple Quivers cf. Book 8 Section 168] |
| (er) | 261: | edged weapon (e.g. a sword or axe) -> edged Weapon (e.g. a Sword or Axe) [LM] |
| (er) | 261: | non-edged weapon (e.g. a quarterstaff or mace), -> non-edged Weapon (e.g. a Quarterstaff or Mace) [LM] |
| (er) | 280: | skeletal frames and from -> skeletal frames, and from (to emphasise that it is a second clause) [LM] |
| (er) | 294: | power word -> word of power |
| (er) | 301: | crowd are -> crowd is [LM] |
| (er) | 334: | mass of hanging vines rise up and flail -> mass of hanging vines rises up and flails [LM] |
| (er) | 343: | eerie yellow -> ? eerie, yellow [LM] |
| (er) | 346: | host of monstrous creatures burst -> host of monstrous creatures bursts [LM] |
| (er) | 346: | descend -> descends [LM] |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ft) | 260: | [It is possible to carry multiple Quivers cf. Book 8 Section 168] |
| (ft) | 330: | [James Chown: When deleting items in the last three spaces of the backpack, what happens if nothing is there? According to the wording, if nothing is there - nothing gets erased. But was the meaning obscured with the last three backpack items removed?] |
| Illustration Placements |
| Ensure the Illustration data contains the correct dimensions for the illustration. |
| small 1 | Axe | [so: 6, 68] |
| small 2 | Sword | [so: 50] |
| small 3 | Astral Plane | [so: 60] |
| small 4 | Tome | [so: 84; also, 33, 86, 90, 124, 150, 232] |
| small 5 | Portal Mouth | [so: 23, 98] |
| small 6 | Canoe | [so: 314] |
| small 7 | Nza'Pok Amulet | [so: 139] |
| small 8 | Dragon Amulet | [so: 155] |
| small 9 | Phial | [so: 104, 198] |
| small 10 | Giant Centipede | [so: 2, 73, 217, 251, 298 |
| small 11 | Künae Rings | [so: 311] |
| small 12 | Huan'Zhor's Temple | [so: 270] |
| Fixed (Errata) |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | free-state armies of Magnamund -> Freeland armies of Magnamund [ik: as in 16tlov] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | new-found -> newfound [so: x2] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Grand Master Disciplines, and grasp -> Grand Master Disciplines and grasp |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | artifact -> artefact |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages. [so: remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | venoms & toxins -> venoms and toxins |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | venoms and toxins -> venoms, and toxins right [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | smell & night vision-> smell, and night vision |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | footprints & tracks -> footprints and tracks |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | 500 yds -> 500 yards |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Defence against: hypnosis -> Defence against hypnosis |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | hostile telepathy, & evil spirits -> hostile telepathy, and evil spirits |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | weapons listed opposite and overleaf -> weapons listed below |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | COMBAT SKILL -> ENDURANCE [so: as per Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 24] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Magi-Magic -> Magi-magic |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | battle magic -> battle-magic |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | artifacts -> artefacts |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | [so: the list/illustration of Weapons for Weaponmastery is missing from the book.] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | [Kai-screen] The strength and capacity of these fortresses increases => increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[jb: Fix it] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | [Telegnosis] Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increases => Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase [LeRoy McSwain Feb 2007]
[jb: Fix it] |
| (er) | Grand Master Disciplines: | magi-magic spell -> Magi-magic spells [LM]
[SO: magi-magic spell -> Old Kingdom Spells] |
| (er) | Equipment: | effect that may have -> effect they may have |
| (er) | Equipment: | map of Magnamund -> map of the Planes of Existence [so: (ne) and make link to map] |
| (er) | Equipment: | (see the inside front cover of this book) [so: remove] |
| (er) | Equipment: | safe-keeping -> safekeeping |
| (er) | Equipment: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) [so: all] |
| (er) | Equipment: | bow -> Bow [so: all] |
| (er) | Equipment: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Equipment: | combat, therefore -> combat; therefore |
| (er) | Equipment: | Gold Crowns These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of fifty crowns. [so: add this] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | on the inside back cover of this book [so: remove] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | cmbtrulz: | on the page after the Random Number Table -> in the back of this book |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | levels of Kai Grand Mastery you will -> levels of Kai Grand Mastery, you will [so: in harmony with the imprvdsc pages from books 14-18) |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | who has reached the rank of Sun Prince, -> who has reached the rank of Sun Prince (11 Disciplines), [ik: as for the other ranks] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | ie, -> i.e. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Kai-Ray -> Kai-ray [x2] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | eg, -> e.g. |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | spell, a Kai Grand Thane is able -> spell, Kai Grand Thanes are able [LM/JB] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | of their detection -> of detection [LM] [JB] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | eyes and internal organs -> eyes, and internal organs [LM] |
| (er) | 2 [x2], 73 [x2], 217 [x2], 251 [x2], 298 [x2]: | leap on -> leap onto |
| (er) | 4, 32, 46, 64, 74, 97, 111, 127, 170, 179, 188, 200, 211, 218, 243, 272, 280, 290, 301, 318: | Add a period to the end of the illustration's caption. |
| (er) | 5, 71: | Hulka (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 5, 71, 90, 105: | Khula (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 5, 56, 71: | Lukha (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 6: | cries, 'use -> cries. 'Use |
| (er) | 8, 22, 26, 38, 40, 49, 61, 78, 106, 123, 125, 127, 134, 146, 157, 202, 215, 216, 227, 259, 279, 329, 330, 336: | Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery |
| (er) | 11, 73, 135, 184, 208, 245, 251, 281, 283, 298, 326: | Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell |
| (er) | 11, 326: | - Net - -> Net [spell] |
| (er) | 12, 40 [x2], 52, 108: | force field -> force-field |
| (er) | 13: | cacophany -> cacophony |
| (er) | 14 [x2], 25 [x2], 31 [x2], 66, 95, 102 [x2], 114 [x2], 179, 196, 220, 241 [x2], 250, 270: | reptillians -> reptilians |
| (er) | 15, 39, 44, 83, 96, 153, 319, 328: | Rhunotar (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 15, 39, 44, 83, 153, 232, 311, 319, 328: | Rhunadan (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 15, 39, 44, 83, 153, 289, 319, 328: | Rhunaguin (itals) -> [quote] |
| (er) | 17, 86 [x2], 106, 125, 131, 157, 215, 278, 288, 331: | firestorm -> fire-storm |
| (er) | 17, 25 [x2], 42, 45, 62, 70 [x3], 72 [x2], 93, 106 [x2], 119 [x2], 136 [x2], 140, 148, 149, 157 [x2], 161 [x2], 172, 174, 179, 205, 213, 235, 241 [x2], 250 [x2], 259 [x2], 264 [x2], 270 [x3], 278, 284, 305, 308, 317 [x2], 340 [x2], 344 [x2]: | lavas -> Lavas [ik: Lavas is capitalized throughout 17tdoi] |
| (er) | 18, 28, 320, 343: | ribcage -> rib cage |
| (er) | 19, 78, 111, 120, 216, 222, 246, 291, 316: | Telegnosis and -> Telegnosis, and |
| (er) | 22: | Avavae -> Avarvae |
| (er) | 22, 65, 90, 112, 172, 190, 191, 215, 227, 228, 236, 250, 285, 315, 324, 348: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | 22, 106, 125, 157, 202, 215, 216, 227, 330: | Kai rank of -> rank of Kai |
| (er) | 22, 106, 125, 157, 215, 216, 227: | Guardian, turn -> Guardian or higher, turn |
| (er) | 24: | From beneath -> Beneath |
| (er) | 26, 122, 125, 141, 170, 215, 255, 259, 266, 279, 283, 336: | Crown, turn -> Crown or higher, turn |
| (er) | 27, 60, 64, 77, 185, 209, 220, 223, 250, 307, 350: | Artifact(s) -> Artefact(s) |
| (er) | 28, 189: | slayed -> slain |
| (er) | 28, 70, 142, 179, 264 [x2], 317 [x2], 343, 344: | reptillian -> reptilian |
| (er) | 28, 249, 343: | semi-circular -> semicircular |
| (er) | 28, 249: | Cadak and -> Cadak, and |
| (er) | 33, 60, 84, 86, 90, 124, 232: | pathsmanship -> Pathsmanship |
| (er) | 33: | Kai monastery -> Kai Monastery |
| (er) | 33: | steel and flame -> steel, and flame [LM] |
| (er) | 35: | the Skarn-Ska -> Skarn-Ska |
| (er) | 37: | psi-screen -> Psi-screen |
| (er) | 38: | Mastery and -> Mastery, and |
| (er) | 40: | Knight, turn -> Knight or higher, turn |
| (er) | 41, 265: | one square and one -> one square, and one [LM] |
| (er) | 43, 182, 349: | Old Kingdom spell -> Old Kingdom Spell |
| (er) | 43: | - Shield - -> Shield [spell] |
| (er) | 43, 184: | Grand Discipline -> Grand Master Discipline |
| (er) | 46: | its companion's -> their companion's |
| (er) | 49: | grand mastery -> Grand Mastery |
| (er) | 51, 175, 190, 203 [x2], 222, 244 [x2], 260 [+s], 271 [x3], 291, 291 [+s], 317 [x2], 336 [x3]: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) |
| (er) | 51, 203 [x2], 271, 336: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 52, 108: | abyss, 'Follow -> abyss. 'Follow |
| (er) | 53, 89, 180, 296: | which you keep in your backpack [remove] |
| (er) | 53, 89, 180, 296: | pictures or -> pictures, or |
| (er) | 56, 171: | jet black -> jet-black |
| (er) | 56, 96, 289: | life and your quest for the Moonstone ends -> life and your quest for the Moonstone end [LM] |
| (er) | 57: | lifeforce -> life-force |
| (er) | 57: | Kai rank you have attained above the rank of Grand Guardian -> Kai Mastery you have attained above the rank of Kai Grand Guardian |
| (er) | 61, 125, 215: | Lord, turn -> Lord or higher, turn |
| (er) | 63: | rainswept -> rain-swept |
| (er) | 64 [caption]: | explode from -> shoot from |
| (er) | 70, 344: | ‘Zhula!’ -> 'Zheva!' (cf. ref.86) [LM] |
| (er) | 72, 276, 337: | Grand Mastery skills -> Grand Master skills |
| (er) | 73, 245, 246, 298: | - Teleport - -> Teleport [spell] |
| (er) | 74: | sommersaulting -> somersaulting |
| (er) | 76: | Sun Lord, you -> Sun Lord or higher, you |
| (er) | 76: | corporeal body). -> corporeal body.) [LM] |
| (er) | 78: | Lord, or if -> Lord or higher, or if |
| (er) | 79, 207: | acolytes of Vashna -> Acolytes of Vashna |
| (er) | 79, 207: | The spirit of -> The spirits of |
| (er) | 79: | cener druids -> Cener Druids |
| (er) | 79, 207: | Vashna, Nadziranim -> Vashna, and Nadziranim |
| (er) | 81, 168, 192: | shock-wave -> shock wave |
| (er) | 82, 118, 187, 219: | mind-force -> Mindforce |
| (er) | 84, 86, 90, 232: | throne of power -> Throne of Power [consistency] |
| (er) | 85: | treeline -> tree-line [ik: as in all other books] |
| (er) | 85: | dark, jungle -> dark jungle |
| (er) | 87, 169: | counterspell -> Counterspell [spell] |
| (er) | 89: | permissible). -> permissible.) [LM] |
| (er) | 90: | natural balance and agility prevents -> natural balance and agility prevent [LM] |
| (er) | 97: | Kai screen -> Kai-screen |
| (er) | 98: | - Kai! - -> Kai! [spell] |
| (er) | 99, 225, 313: | take Avarvae -> takes Avarvae |
| (er) | 111, 120, 246: | out-distance -> outdistance |
| (er) | 111, 291: | levitation -> <spell>Levitation</spell> |
| (er) | 116, 201: | ante-chamber -> antechamber |
| (er) | 117: | knees and elbows -> knees, and elbows [LM] |
| (er) | 118: | agonising -> agonizing |
| (er) | 122, 141, 266: | Kai-alchemy but -> Kai-alchemy, but |
| (er) | 123: | Kai agilities -> Kai abilities [ik: Kai abilities is used throughout all of the books] |
| (er) | 127: | Seb Jarel -> Sebb Jarel [LM: cf.10tdot] |
| (er) | 127: | Seb -> Sebb [SO: cf. Book 10 Section 1 et al.] |
| (er) | 127, 259: | Thane, turn -> Thane or higher, turn |
| (er) | 135: | - Lightning Hand -> Lightning Hand [spell] |
| (er) | 135: | power and impact of the spell proves -> power and impact of the spell prove [LM] |
| (er) | 138: | tranquility -> tranquillity [ik: as in 163 and all other books] |
| (er) | 141, 266: | stubbly legs -> stubby legs |
| (er) | 145, 160: | magicians' guild -> Magicians' Guild |
| (er) | 160: | despatches -> dispatches |
| (er) | 160: | dimly-lit -> dimly lit |
| (er) | 160: | discern when precisely -> discern precisely when [LM] |
| (er) | 163: | Kai exorcism -> Kai Exorcism [??] |
| (er) | 167: | Kai Blast attack -> Kai-blast |
| (er) | 170: | Kai-screen but -> Kai-screen, but |
| (er) | 179 [cap]: | reptillians -> reptilians |
| (er) | 182, 349: | - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [spell] |
| (er) | 184: | - Invisible Shield - -> Invisible Shield [spell] |
| (er) | 188, 273, 306, 347: | 'Slay him, Jantoor!' [Remove quotes from thought-speech.] |
| (er) | 188 [Cap]: | Remove quotes from thought-speech. |
| (er) | 189: | blinded and hurled -> blinded, and hurled [LM] |
| (er) | 200, 321: | Bow and -> Bow, and |
| (er) | 200: | mindforce -> Mindforce |
| (er) | 200 [Cap]: | brutal and -> brutal, and |
| (er) | 207: | Cener druids -> Cener Druids |
| (er) | 208: | - Counterspell - -> Counterspell [spell] |
| (er) | 209: | life and your quest comes -> life and your quest come [LM] |
| (er) | 216: | Huntmastery and -> Huntmastery, and |
| (er) | 216: | Lord, and -> Lord or higher, and |
| (er) | 217: | ceiling, then -> ceiling. Then |
| (er) | 218: | pin-points -> pinpoints |
| (er) | 220: | sixth senses warn -> Sixth Sense warns |
| (er) | 222: | pin-point -> pinpoint |
| (er) | 223: | newly acquired -> newly-acquired |
| (er) | 228: | torsoes -> torsos |
| (er) | 243: | Shamath, 'it -> Shamath. 'It |
| (er) | 244: | Quiver, but -> Quiver), but [LM] |
| (er) | 247: | Kai blast -> Kai-blast |
| (er) | 247: | attained, above -> attained above |
| (er) | 248: | Khor, in -> Khor in |
| (er) | 249: | counter-attack -> counterattack |
| (er) | 249, 311: | rib-cage -> rib cage |
| (er) | 250: | gold, orange and crimson -> gold, orange, and crimson [LM] |
| (er) | 250: | armour and weapons -> armour, and weapons [LM] |
| (er) | 251, 283: | - Levitation - -> Levitation [spell] |
| (er) | 251: | rockface, then -> rock-face. Then |
| (er) | 255, 261 [x2]: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | 260: | axes and shields -> axes, and shields [LM] |
| (er) | 262, 346: | slayed -> slew |
| (er) | 265: | one circular, one square and one -> one circular, one square, and one [LM] |
| (er) | 268: | this Special Item -> this Backpack Item (cf. refs.112,191,236,285) [LM] |
| (er) | 272: | the Shamath Potion -> Shamath's Potion |
| (er) | 272 [Cap]: | A colossal chariot speeds forth driven by nine stunning astral beings -> A colossal chariot speeds forth, driven by a stunning astral being. |
| (er) | 275: | Vorndarol, in -> Vorndarol in |
| (er) | 281: | - Vigour - -> Vigour [spell] |
| (er) | 290: | realise -> realize [Illustration caption] |
| (er) | 294: | - Gloar! - -> Gloar! [spell] |
| (er) | 297 [x2], 338 [x2]: | special items -> Special Items |
| (er) | 302: | echos -> echoes |
| (er) | 303: | Random Number Table. -> Random Number Table [LM] |
| (er) | 321: | if your choose -> if you choose [reported by James Chown, Dec 2005] |
| (er) | 325: | life and your quest ends -> life and your quest end [LM] |
| (er) | 331: | sixth senses detect -> Sixth Sense detects |
| (er) | 335: | Kai-shield -> Kai-screen |
| (er) | 337: | Grand Mastery skills save you -> Grand Mastery saves you [LM] |
| (er) | 341: | hands, 'it -> hands. 'It |
| (er) | 343: | Helgor, in -> Helgor in |
| (er) | 343: | divination -> Divination [LM] |
| (er) | 346: | blinded and hurled -> blinded, and hurled [LM] |
| (er) | 347: | korlinium scabbard -> Korlinium Scabbard |
| (er) | 350: | [Remove quotes from thought-speech.] |
| (er) | 350: | spiraling -> spiralling [ik: as in all other books] |
| (er) | 350: | safe keeping -> safekeeping |
| (er) | 350: | Farewell Lone Wolf -> Farewell, Lone Wolf |
| (er) | 350: | to rank of -> to the rank of |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | cross reference -> cross-reference |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | top of chart -> top of the chart |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai -> Grand Master |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | fall to 0 -> falls to 0 or below |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Title Page: | your elvil alter-ego -> your evil alter-ego [LM] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | may appear; although there -> may appear, although there [LM] |
| (ft) | The Game Rules: | [The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the Readers' Handbook for details.] [and link to: http://www.projectaon.org/en/ReadersHandbook/] |
| (ft) | Grand Master Disciplines: | [The rules of the books in the Magnakai series (6-12) and the fact that the 'rank of Kai Grand Defender . . . means you are skilled in two . . . weapons' imply that for each book that you complete of the Grand Master series (13-20), you will gain mastery of an additional Weapon. For example, if you complete The Plague Lords of Ruel and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next book, you can choose an additional Weapon from the list to have mastery of.] |
| (ne) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Supreme Master; by acquiring -> Supreme Master, by acquiring [LM] |
| (ft) | Grand Master Disciplines: | Grand Weaponmastery [LM: Do we need the footnote here about adding a weapon for each rank earned?] |
| (ne) | Rules For Combat: | then the result of the first round of combat: -> then the result of the first round of combat is: [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | The range and numbers of insects so affected increases -> The range and number of insects so affected increase [LM] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Time duration and degree of surface difficulty increases -> Time duration and degree of surface difficulty increase [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | The range and duration of effect of this spell increases -> The range and duration of effect of this spell increase [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | The power and range of this skill increases -> The power and range of this skill increase [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | [A Kai Sun Lord using Kai-blast determines the damage inflicted on an enemy by picking two numbers from the Random Number Table. These numbers should be added together (a '0' = 1) and the resultant total equals the damage inflicted.] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Kai-surge, Psi-surge or Mindblast => Kai-surge, Psi-surge, or Mindblast [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | water, mud, lava and quicksand => water, mud, lava, and quicksand [LM] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | duration and degree of surface difficulty increases => duration and degree of surface difficulty increase [LM] |
| (ft) | Improved Disciplines: | [The Strength spell is, in practice, also used in armed combat contrary to what is indicated here.] |
| (ft) | 10: | This is the answer to the puzzle in Section 239. |
| (ft) | 10, 57, 239, 297, 338: | Footnote numbers wrong [LM]
[SO: The Disciplines footnote was not placed properly. These should all be fixed.] |
| (ne) | 11, 36, 80, 137, 159, 182, 203, 326, 349: | clunk! [onomatopoeia] |
| (ne) | 15, 28, 39, 41, 44, 57, 83, 96, 100, 128, 153, 188, 228, 232, 249, 265, 273, 289, 306, 311, 319, 328, 343, 347: | Künae [encode properly] |
| (ne) | 27: | ‘tis true -> ‘'tis true [LM] |
| (ne) | 45: | Turn to l6l. -> Turn to 161. [LM] |
| (ne) | 47, 48, 63, 86, 112, 155, 191, 210, 218, 236, 243, 248, 269, 275, 281, 285, 303, 343, 348: | Lone Wolf [cite] |
| (ne) | 54: | the cacophony the chamber -> the cacophony-the chamber (cf. ref.267) [LM] |
| (ft) | 57: | This is the answer to the puzzle in Sections 297 and 338. |
| (ne) | 63: | your kai powers -> ? your Kai powers [LM] |
| (ne) | 79: | any other; and when -> any other, and when [LM] |
| (ne) | 79: | Kraagenskűl [encode correctly] |
| (ne) | 80: | later; the -> later, the [LM] |
| (ne) | 90: | waistdeep -> waist-deep [ik: as in all other books] |
| (ne) | 90: | If you wish to explore the causeway, turn to 67. If you decide to investigate the ridge, turn to 202. -> If you wish to explore the causeway, turn to 67.
If you decide to investigate the ridge, turn to 202. [LM]
[SO: Also: Fix broken links.] |
| (ne) | 92: | COMBAT SKIll -> COMBAT SKILL [LM] |
| (ne) | 98: | <spell>Kai</spell>! -> <spell>Kai!</spell> [LM] |
| (ne) | 116: | chance I to move -> chance to move [LM] |
| (ne) | 116: | the floor; and your -> the floor, and your [LM] |
| (ne) | 120: | 177 -> 177. |
| (ne) | 157: | Grand Guardian, turn to 72. -> Grand Guardian, turn to 72. [LM] |
| (ne) | 160: | you will have the opportunity [will: itals] |
| (ne) | 164: | Weapons List [link] [+ other occurrences] |
| (ne) | 187: | however; you -> however, you [LM] |
| (ne) | 192: | blood-stained -> bloodstained [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (ne) | 208: | or higher, add 1 -> or higher, add 1 [LM] |
| (er) | 208: | If your total is now 6 or less, turn to 169. -> If your total is now 6 or less, turn to 169. [LM]
[SO: Broken link fixed.] |
| (ne) | 220: | Huan'zhor, the master -> Huan'zhor, the master [LM] |
| (ne) | 222, 271, 291: | orphaned section 271; 222 and 297 are only reachable via 271. [LM]
[SO: If we add an option to use a Bow in Section 216, we can point to 271 and prevent these sections being orphaned. We would also need to slightly reword the final option in 216.] |
| (ne) | 234: | side-step -> sidestep [linebreak] |
| (ne) | 239: | correct order; you will -> correct order, you will [LM] |
| (ft) | 239, 297, 338: | Standard puzzle footnote. |
| (ne) | 253: | Gates of Darkness an exit -> Gates of Darkness--an exit [LM] |
| (ne) | 254: | COMBAT SKill 52 -> COMBAT SKILL 52 [LM] |
| (ne) | 263: | rough shelter; using your -> rough shelter, using your [LM] |
| (ne) | 286: | far wail of the chamber -> far wall of the chamber [LM] |
| (ne) | 291: | the. mire -> the mire [LM] |
| (ne) | 294: | Dragon-gate -> dragon-gate [ik: as everywhere else in this book] |
| (ne) | 294: | Gloar! -> Gloar! [LM] |
| (ne) | 303: | 0-10 -> 0=10 [LM] |
| (ne) | 310: | Sommerswerd = +8; Skarn-Ska +5 -> Sommerswerd = +8; Skarn-Ska = +5 (OR) Sommerswerd = +8, Skarn-Ska +5 [LM]
[SO The former is as originally printed.] |
| (ne) | 311: | mid-air; lending -> mid-air, lending [LM] |
| (ne) | 312: | 1ose -> lose [IK] |
| (ne) | 316: | 177 -> 177. |
| (ne) | 324: | lower; deduct -> lower, deduct [LM] |
| (ne) | 333: | Lower -> lower [LM] |
| (ne) | 336: | his armour; you are -> his armour, you are [LM] |
| (ne) | 345: | COMBAT SKIII -> COMBAT SKILL [LM] |
| (ne) | 346: | Despair; where -> Despair, where [LM] |
| Rejected |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | god-like -> godlike [so: maybe?][ik: no, it is always foo-like for all values of foo] |
| (ft) | The Game Rules: | [Note that this list now includes the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard. These items are restored to the list of permissible items from the Kai and Magnakai series again in this book after being omitted beginning in The Captives of Kaag. Presumably, therefore, it should be permissible to leave the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard in safekeeping at the monastery during the previous books and retrieve them at the outset of this adventure.] [ik: I think this footnote only applies to book 17 where the Silver Bracers and Korlinium Scabbard re-appeared. Therefore I have not added this footnote for now.] |
| (er) | Equipment: | your monastery -> your Monastery |
| (er) | Equipment: | 3 points -> 5 points [ik: where?] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | a wise choice will enable any player -> a wise choice will enable all players (to agree with 'their' in number) [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | any player to complete the quest, no matter how weak their -> all players to complete the quest, no matter how weak their [LM] |
| (er) | 8, 38, 49, 123: | Thane or higher -> Thane, or higher |
| (er) | 11, 36, 80, 137, 159, 182, 203, 326, 349: | audible clunk! Moments -> ? audible clunk!. Moments [LM] |
| (er) | 14, 31, 90, 102, 114, 217: | on to -> onto |
| (er) | 21, 59: | Crown or higher -> Crown, or higher |
| (er) | 33, 263: | tracking -> Tracking |
| (er) | 37, 42, 57, 133, 140, 179, 205, 259, 263: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 79, 207: | Liganim minions -> Ligan minions [LM]
[JB: Liganim is always plural in the books.] |
| (er) | 90, 311, 322: | feet-first [Is this OK?][ik: yes, all adverbs] |
| (er) | 106: | If you do not possess these skills, or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, -> If you do not possess these skills, [LM]
[SO: The first option (which was broken) requires the rank of Kai Grand Guardian.] |
| (er) | 108, 110, 168, 192: | head-first [Is this OK?][ik: yes, all adverbs] |
| (er) | 134, 202, 330: | Guardian or higher -> Guardian, or higher |
| (er) | 140: | hunting -> Hunting |
| (er) | 143, 257: | healing -> Healing |
| (er) | 182, 349: | shock wave -> shockwave [+ other occurrences] |
| (er) | 212: | face-first [Is this OK?][ik: yes, is adverb] |
| (er) | 234: | backhanded -> back-handed [ik: we settled for "backhanded"] |
| (er) | 250: | in the roof -> in a roof [LM]
[SO: This is a bit confusing, but "the roof" is the cavern roof, not the roof of a building.] |
| (er) | 254: | Sommerswerd = +8; Skarn-Ska = +5 -> ??? Sommerswerd-+8; Skarn-Ska-+5 [LM]
[SO: This seems OK to me] |
| (er) | 300: | 4 or less -> 4 or lower [ik: objection; "or less" and "or lower" both occur throughout all books with the former occurring about 4 times as often as the latter] |
| (er) | 308: | 4 or less -> 4 or lower [ik: objection; see above] |
| (er) | 308: | 5 or more -> 5 or higher [ik: objection; "or more" and "or higher" both occur throughout all books with the former occurring about twice as often as the latter] |
| (er) | 335: | 2 or less -> 2 or lower [ik: objection; see above] |
| (er) | 335: | 8 or more -> 8 or higher [ik: objection; see above] |
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