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09: The Cauldron of Fear
| Pending |
| [Javier: I find it surprising that, after having found the Platinum Amulet in LW #7 you don't get to use it in LW #9 even when exposed to fire (right after getting out of the Cauldron there is one situation..) to prevent the damage. This thread on the forum [1] that suggests that this amulet is "fake" and that you get a real one in the GM series. Maybe it is worthwhile adding a footnote in section 48 (encounter against Zakhan Kimah) and in section 59 (house on fire) that the amulet does *not* protect you against the damage there?] |
| Fixed |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 135 [opens on to]; 211 [hang on to])
(FIXED: 104 [drops onto]; 159 [load...onto]; 168 [leaping onto]; 169, 219, 293 [descend onto]; 210 [backwards onto]; 252 [back onto]; 276 [backwards onto]; 131 [emerge onto]; 123 [turn onto the]) |
| (er) | The Story So Far, Equipment | Kai monastery -> Kai Monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | gods -> Gods |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | by Darklord armies, others -> by Darklord armies; others [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | magician's guild -> Magicians' Guild |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | the koura-tas-kai would each come from the north => the koura-tas-kai would both come from the north [to agree with 'they' later in the sentence] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Disciplines: | mastery of this skill -> mastery this skill |
| (er) | Disciplines: | add only 2 extra points to your COMBAT SKILL. -> add only 2 extra points to your COMBAT SKILL. (Psi-surge and Mindblast cannot be used simultaneously.) |
| (er) | Disciplines: | your list -> your Weaponmastery Checklist [SO: and link to the Action Chart][Dewi Morgan, August 2008] |
| (er) | Equipment [x9]: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | Equipment: | combat, therefore it is strongly -> combat; therefore it is strongly [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Equipment [x7]: | arrow -> arrow |
| (er) | Equipment: | Weaponmastery with a -> Weaponmastery with |
| (er) | Equipment: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | 9, 11, 12, 15, 97, 120, 179 [x2], 184, 216, 229, 237, 314, 338: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 9, 12, 22, 70, 99, 107, 171, 183, 310, 330: | arrow -> Arrow |
| (er) | 11: | or lose 6 ENDURANCE points -> or lose 3 ENDURANCE points for each missed Meal [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 29, 36, 42, 47, 69, 133, 159, 167, 238 [x2]: | Kai mastery -> Kai Mastery |
| (er) | 40: | A long gravel beach lines the west bank, and on the other side, a quarter of a mile away, you see the rolling, treeless plains of Slovia stretching endlessly towards the horizon [in this reference, the gravel beach would be on the east bank because the other side is Slovia to the west][LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 42, 109: | Guildhouse -> Guild-house [so: as per changes in 06TKoT] |
| (er) | 53: | wildly, then -> wildly; then [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 68: | storeroom -> store room |
| (er) | 77: | female, she -> female; she [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 77: | He that gave us life -> Him that gave us life [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
[JB/IK: Him who] |
| (er) | 77: | Should the Crocaryx speech all be in <thought>, or does she actually speak verbally later on in the section? |
| (er) | 115: | Put a tick on your Action Chart beside the item or items that you wish to stake. [Change 'Put a tick' to 'Put tick(s)' or more simply just 'Mark' to agree with the syntax of 'item or items'] [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007]
[IK: On your Action Chart mark the item or items that you wish to stake.] |
| (er) | 120: | headfirst -> head-first [??] |
| (er) | 120 [x2]: | on to -> onto |
| (er) | 142, 323: | Lone Wolf <cite> |
| (er) | 145: | four Gold Crowns -> three Gold Crowns [Tristan <Tristan ristah_au @ yahoo . com . au>] |
| (er) | 146, 245: | camp fires -> campfires |
| (er) | 150: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | 156: | goddess -> Goddess |
| (er) | 167: | savanna -> savannah |
| (er) | 177: | Weapon list -> Weapons List [and link to Action Chart] |
| (er) | 184, 237: | arrows -> Arrows |
| (er) | 204: | plains farmer -> plains farmers [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 256: | He who gave us life -> Him that gave us life [cf. Sect77 Errata above]
[JB/IK: Him who] |
| (er) | 266: | feet first -> feet-first [??] |
| (er) | 316: | You must deduct 4 points from your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of the fight, as you are without a Weapon. -> Make the proper adjustments to your COMBAT SKILL for the duration of this fight, as you are without a Weapon. [Jan Charvát: Kai Tutelaries deduct only 2 points from COMBAT SKILL when fighting bare-handed.] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Magnakai Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | and be able -> and are able [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 1: | town and is defenders -> town and its defenders [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 5: | [so: Add Spyglass to the bottom of the list of items (as reported here.] |
| (ne) | 11: | from you Action Chart -> from your Action Chart [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 12 [ftn]: | bow -> Bow |
| (ne) | 12 [ftn]: | arrow -> Arrow |
| (ne) | 13: | these Items -> these items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ft) | 54: | [so: Add that this refers to all Special Items, Backpack Items and Weapons (cf. Section 177) as reported here.] |
| (ne) | 91: | Items on the -> items of the [so: x2] [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 94: | these Items -> these items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 113: | number of Items -> number of items |
| (ne) | 115: | forfeit the Item (or Items) -> forfeit the item (or items) [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 121: | teeming -> teeming throng. [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 155: | Items -> items [so: x2] [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 172: | manner of Items -> manner of items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 190: | these Items -> these items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 201: | second Item -> second item [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 201: | first Item -> first item [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 201: | stolen Item -> stolen item [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 235: | stolen the Items -> stolen the items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 253, footnotz: | Golds Crowns -> Gold Crowns |
| (ne) | 265: | these Items -> these items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 282: | these Items -> these items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | 289: | this Item -> this item |
| (ft) | 316: | The normal penalty for entering a combat without a weapon is -4 COMBAT SKILL points. Remember that Tutelaries (Kai Lords with mastery of five Magnakai Disciplines) only suffer a penalty of -2 COMBAT SKILL points for entering combat unarmed. |
| (ne) | 329: | number of Items -> number of items [so: And remove Errata entry] |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Sections 11 and 175): | the Zaaryx -> Zaaryx [or, the ruins of Zaaryx] |
| (ne) | Footnotes (Section 12): | arrow...bow -> Arrow...Bow |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 115): | To turn to the section of your choice, there are several methods. One is to turn to the Numbered Sections list and choose the appropriate section from the list. If you have chosen the correct answer to the Khmar's riddle, the footnotes for that section will tell you so. -> The section corresponding to the correct answer to Khmar's riddle will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 204): | To turn to the section of your choice, there are several methods. One is to turn to the Numbered Sections list and choose the appropriate section from the list. If you have chosen the correct answer to the Khmar's riddle, the footnotes for that section will tell you so. -> The section corresponding to the correct answer to Khmar's riddle will have a footnote confirming that it is indeed correct. |
| (ne) | Errata: | Remove superfluous 'Section' before each section number on the list. |
| (ne) | Errata [x5]: | all Items -> all items |
| (ne) | Errata: | of Items -> of items |
| Rejected |
| (er) | All occurrences of "<rank> or more" with "<rank> or higher" |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | is not be able -> will not be able [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 1: | east quarter -> East Quarter |
| (er) | 2 [x2], 30 [x2], 55, 59, 70 [x2], 128, 159, 179 [x2], 198, 210, 219, 258 [x2], 350 [x2]: | West Gate -> west gate |
| (er) | 27, 295: | sun-sword -> Sun-sword |
| (er) | 100 [x2], 164, 177, 192, 212, 227, 242, 278, 319 [x2], 344 [x2]: | South Gate -> south gate |
| (er) | 108 [x2], 159 [x2], 168: | North Gate -> north gate |
| (er) | 146: | Chah mountain -> Chah Mountain [??]
[JB: It could refer to the "Chah Mtns" on the map, but there is no such thing as "Chah Mountain" (note the singular) as far as I know, so I vote for leaving it as is.] |
| (er) | 170 [x2], 174 [x2], 259, 312: | South Gatehouse -> south gatehouse |
| (er) | 256: | "fulfil our our duty" -> "fulfil our duty" [NM] |
| (ne) | 350 (Footnote): | South Gate Guard -> South Gate guards
[JB: Cf. King's Guard in Flight from the Dark section 6.] |
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