| |
24: Rune War
| Pending |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Darklord armies -> Darkland armies |
| (??) | The Story So Far: | well-known [is this correct?] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | exiled prince -> exiled Prince [RW] |
| (er) | The Story So Far, 10: | wise sage -> wise Sage [RW: I assume ??] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | your number of -> your total of |
| (??) | Disciplines: | [Use Magnakai heading illustrations from later books?] |
| (er) | 11: | o'you -> o' you |
| (er) | 21, 49: | wearing Eldenoran -> wearing an Eldenoran |
| (er) | 24, 52 [x2], 160 [x2], 163, 194, 277: | Vorka who -> Vorka that |
| (??) | 24, 84: | face down [is this OK?] |
| (er) | 44: | that explodes it -> shattering it [or similar] |
| (er) | 47: | o'something -> o' something |
| (er) | 61, 289, 334: | If you survive -> If you complete [SO: Or, this mission successfully -> this mission] |
| (er) | 62 [x2], 124 [x2], 219, 329 [x2]: | grill -> grille [??] |
| (er) | 69, 108, 187, 238, 251, 293, 316: | lifeless among -> lifeless amidst |
| (er) | 78: | None...find their -> None...finds its |
| (er) | 81, 223, 232, : | East Quarter -> Eastern Quarter [cf. Northern Quarter, Southern Quarter] |
| (er) | 87, 169, 195, 271, 327: | potion to -> potion time to |
| (er) | 91, 310: | lune -> Lune |
| (er) | 102: | unseaworthy [so: On a river?] |
| (er) | 107: | There's -> There're |
| (er) | 119, 228: | West Quarter -> Western Quarter [cf. Northern Quarter, Southern Quarter] |
| (er) | 126, 194, 304, 340: | Vorka come -> Vorka comes |
| (er) | 147, 276: | THE DUADON COOPERAGE [small CAPS] |
| (er) | 156, 348: | o'Tekaro -> o' Tekaro |
| (??) | 189: | [Should Grand Huntmastery be usable here (see other sections of this book for when you are waiting/working, e.g 194)] |
| (er) | 263: | riders who -> riders that |
| (er) | 270: | file of Vorka are -> file of Vorka is |
| (er) | 297: | How should the "multiply by" paragraph be formatted? It seems odd the way it is. [JB] |
| (er) | 314: | eavesdropping a -> eavesdropping upon a |
| (er) | 340: | armoury whence -> armoury from whence |
| (er) | 343: | [SO: ellipses -> dashes/hyphens] |
| (er) | 343: | d..dungeons -> d-dungeons |
| Pending (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | ...called Mindblast [RW: Mindblast - bold in the original] |
| (ne) | 49, 110: | [SO: The book uses Great Forest here to refer to the Forest of Salony. Does this have any bearing on our decisions in Book 18?] |
| (ft) | 91, 310: | Backpack / Special Item confusion for Tekaro Chalice. |
| (ft) | 256, 349: | Can you take only one of these Vials? |
| Illustration Placements |
| small 1 | Bell Dome spouting (Vorka) Agarashi | [so: 35] |
| small 2 | Banners/Flags | [so: 1] |
| small 3 | Crossed Flintlocks | [so: 197] |
| small 4 | Barrels & coopers' tools | [so: 200, 210] |
| small 5 | GM & sailing boat | [so: 102] |
| small 6 | Two wagons | [so: 27, 45, 72, 76, 86, 119, 164, 203, 247, 263] |
| small 7 | Vials | [so: 140, 221] |
| small 8 | Runes! | [so: 42, 56, 100, 111, 113, 231, 267, 300] |
| small 9 | Dinner | [so: 40, 280] |
| small 10 | Skyship & mountain | [so: 350] |
| small 11 | Camp & refugees? | [so: 1] |
| small 12 | Bridge | [so: 102] |
| Large Illustrations |
| Ensure the image dimensions are correct in the XML. |
| Fixed |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 18, 199 [move on to]; 45, 76, 86, 203, 296, 335 [opens on to]; 80 [hang on to]; 230 [goes on to])
(FIXED: 342 [climbs onto]; 100 [yourself onto]; 24, 84, 343 [down onto]; 99, 121, 153, 216, 234, 318 [out onto]; 124, 155 [hurled onto]; 163 [back onto]; 234, 272, 318 [horse onto]; 234, 272, 318 [ride onto the raft]; 234, 272, 318 [ride...onto a road]) |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | MS5075 -> MS5070 |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | been posed to -> been poised to [RW] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | monastery of the Kai -> Monastery of the Kai |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | the Monastery -> the monastery |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | land-locked -> landlocked |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | agarashi -> Agarashi |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | Guildmaster magicians -> Guildmaster Banedon [??] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | for ever -> forever |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | lorestones -> Lorestones |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | runes of Agarash -> Runes of Agarash |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | kingdom of Siyen -> Kingdom of Siyen [RW] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | knight of Siyen -> Knight of Siyen RW: it was the bestowed title] |
| (er) | The Story So Far [x2]: | millenniums ago -> millennia ago [ik: as in 17tdoi][JB: Fix it] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | that you will find at the front of this book. For ease of use and further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | on the last page of the book [remove] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ie -> i.e. [x2] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | normal weapons and -> normal weapons, and |
| (er) | Kai Name: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | Kai Name: | You can record your personal Kai name on the bookplate which appear on the inside cover of this book. [remove] |
| (er) | Disciplines: | symbols and -> symbols, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | Disciplines: | their COMBAT SKILL is reduced -> their ENDURANCE is reduced |
| (er) | Disciplines: | battle wounds -> battle-wounds |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Old Kingdom battle magic -> Old Kingdom battle-magic |
| (er) | Disciplines: | magi-magic spells -> Old Kingdom Spells |
| (er) | Disciplines: | guild of magicians -> Guild of Magicians |
| (er) | Disciplines: | the sun, the moon, and -> the Sun, the Moon, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | individual (or combinations of) elements that are available, -> individual elements that are available, or combinations thereof, |
| (er) | Disciplines: | new Order -> New Order |
| (er) | Disciplines: | remove or accelerate -> remove, or accelerate |
| (er) | Disciplines: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Disciplines: | dialect and -> dialect, and |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Kai Weapon and any -> Kai Weapon, and any |
| (er) | Disciplines: | For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. -> For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon. [IK][SO: This also affects Books 22-28.] |
| (er) | Equipment: | (see the inside front cover of this book) [remove] |
| (er) | Equipment: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) [x8] |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | new-found -> newfound |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | at the front of the book [remove] |
| (er) | Kai Weapon: | vs. -> versus [on table] |
| (er) | Equipment: | bow -> Bow [x8] |
| (er) | Equipment: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | Equipment: | eg -> e.g. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | on the inside back cover of this book [remove] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | Grand Master) -> Grand master). |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | A summary of Combat Rules appears on the page after the Random Number Table. [remove] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | Only you may [you: bold; under Evasion of combat] [original is in italics] |
| (er) | Rules For Combat: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Lone Wolf is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Levels: | (You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery) -> - You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Grand Mastery [also: itals (ne)] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | Kai Grand Master Sentinels -> Kai Grand Sentinels [x5] |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | suggestion) into the mind of -> suggestion into the mind of) |
| (er) | Improved Disciplines: | 'Improved Grand Master Disciplines' [remove quote marks] |
| (er) | Grand Master's Wisdom: | northern Magnamund -> Northern Magnamund |
| (er) | 1: | Kai mentoras -> Kai Mentoras |
| (er) | 1: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord |
| (er) | 1 [x2]: | High Mayor -> High-Mayor |
| (er) | 1: | battle dress -> battle-dress |
| (er) | 1: | battle banners -> battle-banners |
| (er) | 1: | battle order -> battle-order |
| (er) | 1: | each...are called -> each...is called |
| (er) | 5: | densely packed -> densely-packed |
| (er) | 5, 166: | the Grochod -> the Grochod Forest |
| (er) | 5: | Deliverance and -> Deliverance, and |
| (er) | 6, 56, 291 [x2]: | bow -> Bow |
| (er) | 6, 56 [x2], 66 [s], 238 [x2], 242, 262, 291, 293: | arrow(s) -> Arrow(s) |
| (er) | 8, 172: | 12 pistol balls -> twelve pistol balls |
| (er) | 9, 138, 185, 211: | birdsong -> bird song |
| (er) | 9: | animal control -> Animal Control |
| (er) | 12: | Animal Control -> Animal Mastery |
| (er) | 13, 37, 43, 63, 78, 88, 95, 194, 235, 255, 275, 306: | now eat -> eat |
| (er) | 14: | sceptically.//'And [Remove paragraph break.] |
| (er) | 17, 40, 71, 82, 120, 148, 170, 208, 209, 236, 246, 256, 263, 270, 280, 297, 323, 324, 345, 350: | sixth sense -> Sixth Sense |
| (er) | 18, 199, 252: | cul-de-sac [foreign] |
| (er) | 18, 199: | fear, 'please -> fear. 'Please |
| (er) | 21: | to untie -> in untying |
| (er) | 23: | queuing -> queueing |
| (er) | 23, 86, 141, 156, 261, 348: | Slovarian plain -> Slovarian Plain |
| (er) | 24, 36, 54, 69, 76, 84, 113,130, 131, 179, 219, 282, 331, 332, 336: | Brotherhood spell -> Brotherhood Spell |
| (er) | 24, 69, 84, 130: | - Net - -> Net [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 24, 84, 277: | deter nor -> deter or |
| (er) | 27, 76, 86, 203, 335: | the city. You recall -> the city.//You recall [as per other sections] |
| (er) | 29: | - Shield - -> Shield [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 29, 48, 151, 217, 264, 277, 342: | Old Kingdom spell -> Old Kingdom Spell |
| (er) | 30, 218, 326: | hay loft -> hay-loft |
| (er) | 31: | Elite -> Élite |
| (er) | 35: | skills, or Bow, -> skills, nor a Bow, or if you have yet to attain the required level of Kai Mastery, |
| (er) | 36: | - Sense Evil - -> Sense Evil [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 38, 320: | mortice -> mortise [??]
[SO: Chambers Dictionary: Mortise is far more common] |
| (er) | 39: | this weapon -> this Weapon |
| (er) | 40, 42, 111, 115, 227, 267, 280, 287, 300: | runes of Agarash -> Runes of Agarash |
| (er) | 40: | sound, then -> sound, and then |
| (er) | 40: | sight, then -> sight, and then |
| (er) | 40 [x3], 280 [x3]: | potion of -> Potion of |
| (er) | 40, 280: | potion of Graveweed tincture -> Tincture of Graveweed |
| (er) | 40, 280: | a potion of Ghilev -> some Ghilev |
| (er) | 40, 280: | none of these potions -> none of these [SO: Ghilev is not a potion] |
| (er) | 43, 138, 149, 174: | riverbank -> river bank |
| (er) | 43: | partially submerged -> partially-submerged |
| (er) | 44, 55, 168: | Bow and -> Bow, and |
| (er) | 48, 151, 217, 342: | - Invisible Fist - -> Invisible Fist [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 48: | crack [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 50: | agarashi -> Agarashi |
| (er) | 50: | officers, 'Return -> officers. 'Return |
| (er) | 50: | assults -> assaults |
| (er) | 50: | rune of Agarash -> Rune of Agarash |
| (er) | 52, 160: | battle cry -> battle-cry |
| (er) | 53: | Farmer's son -> Farmer's Son |
| (er) | 54, 76, 179, 332, 336: | - Mind Charm - -> Mind Charm [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 56: | quiver -> Quiver |
| (er) | 56, 113: | hall, therefore -> hall; therefore |
| (er) | 58, 70, 82, 85, 91, 129, 166, 174, 204, 213, 278: | Kai rank of Grand -> rank of Kai Grand |
| (er) | 61, 289, 334: | Lone Wolf <cite> |
| (er) | 62: | ie -> i.e. [x2] |
| (er) | 65: | care. 'Well -> care.//'Well |
| (er) | 65: | point. 'Look -> point.//'Look |
| (er) | 66: | shields and -> shields, and |
| (er) | 67: | Kai journeyman clothes -> Kai Clothes [so: consistency] |
| (er) | 71: | [SO: Why record the Mace as a Backpack Item (cf. Section 323)?]
[SO: Removed "as Backpack Items"] |
| (er) | 72: | clump of Laumspur -> clump of laumspur |
| (er) | 72: | Each potion -> Each Potion of Laumspur |
| (er) | 74: | incredulously. // 'Well, [Remove paragraph break] |
| (er) | 74: | master songbird -> Master Songbird [x2] |
| (er) | 74: | Mastery skills -> Grand Master skills |
| (er) | 74: | doin' I -> doin', I |
| (er) | 75, 136, 154, 182: | Alema / Kaistar -> "Alema" / "Kaistar" [Also: remove itals] |
| (er) | 77, 168, 174: | Kai Pathsmanship -> Magnakai Pathsmanship |
| (er) | 79: | selection you -> selection, you |
| (er) | 80: | ahead. 'Go -> ahead.//'Go |
| (er) | 81, 232: | north-east -> northeast |
| (er) | 81, 232: | newly constructed -> newly-constructed |
| (er) | 81, 232: | ropemakers -> rope-makers |
| (er) | 81, 222, 232, 276, 288: | North Quarter -> Northern Quarter |
| (er) | 87: | the potion -> the Potion of Gallowbrush |
| (er) | 91, 310: | plates and -> plates, and |
| (er) | 93, 314: | battle-flags -> battle-flags |
| (er) | 93, 314: | battle maps -> battle-maps |
| (er) | 96: | Grand Mastery skill -> Grand Master skill |
| (er) | 96: | whisper, 'let -> whisper. 'Let |
| (er) | 97: | shop, then -> shop, and then |
| (er) | 97: | t'is -> 'tis |
| (er) | 98, 169, 250, 263, 270, 344: | clang [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 99, 153, 216: | least busy -> least-busy |
| (er) | 99, 121, 153, 188, 216, 220, 234, 302, 318, 333: | parallel with -> parallel to |
| (er) | 99: | blood-stained -> bloodstained |
| (er) | 102, 229: | battle armour -> battle-armour |
| (er) | 108, 131, 215: | Crack!, -> Crack! |
| (er) | 113, 131, 282: | - Lightning Hand - -> Lightning Hand [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 114: | ominious -> ominous |
| (er) | 115: | fades however -> fades, however, |
| (er) | 115: | Now don't -> Now, don't |
| (er) | 115: | two-storeyed building -> two-storey building |
| (er) | 116: | Kai weapon -> Kai Weapon |
| (er) | 119, 228: | Corvail -> Corvayl [cf. Book 16] |
| (er) | 119, 228: | lampmakers and -> lamp-makers, and |
| (er) | 122, 332: | comrade, 'let's -> comrade. 'Let's |
| (er) | 124, 155: | Hulsta, 'we -> Hulsta. 'We |
| (er) | 128: | interconnnected -> interconnected |
| (er) | 128, 274: | Gallowbrush -> Potion of Gallowbrush |
| (er) | 128, 274: | Mokradon -> Potion of Mokradon |
| (er) | 128, 274: | Volzoc -> Potion of Volzoc |
| (er) | 134: | ends here -> end here |
| (er) | 140 | yellow and -> yellow, and |
| (er) | 143: | Kai -> Magnakai |
| (er) | 145: | battle axe -> battle-axe |
| (er) | 152: | down, then -> down, and then |
| (er) | 156, 348: | he beams -> he says |
| (er) | 156, 348: | Kai clothes -> Kai Clothes |
| (er) | 159: | Crowns and -> Crowns, and |
| (er) | 159: | care. 'That -> care.//'That |
| (er) | 159: | point. 'Look -> point.//'Look |
| (er) | 163: | phosphor bomb -> Phosphor Bomb |
| (er) | 163, 190: | creatures who -> creatures that |
| (er) | 166: | closely packed -> closely-packed |
| (er) | 166: | treeline -> tree-line |
| (er) | 167: | weapons and -> weapons, and |
| (er) | 168: | Kai-alchemy and -> Kai-alchemy, and |
| (er) | 168: | Magi-magic and -> Magi-magic, and |
| (er) | 168, 231: | Bow nor -> Bow, nor |
| (er) | 169: | Volzoc potion -> Potion of Volzoc |
| (er) | 174: | Elementalism and -> Elementalism, and |
| (er) | 175: | leaching -> leeching |
| (er) | 178: | bellows, 'And -> bellows. 'And |
| (er) | 178: | hers. 'Stay -> hers.//'Stay |
| (er) | 183: | urgently.' The -> urgently.'//The |
| (er) | 186: | Item). -> Item). |
| (er) | 191: | Magnikai -> Magnakai |
| (er) | 195: | Graveweed potion -> Tincture of Graveweed |
| (er) | 196, 239, 276: | north-west -> northwest |
| (er) | 196: | wildberries -> wild berries |
| (er) | 197, 265, 346: | saddlemaker's -> saddle-maker's |
| (er) | 197: | cavalry come -> cavalry comes |
| (er) | 197: | Grant Huntmastery -> Grand Huntmastery |
| (er) | 200: | vats and -> vats, and |
| (er) | 205, 246: | cousin nor -> cousin, nor |
| (er) | 207: | hand lists -> hands lists |
| (er) | 210: | another, 'have -> another. 'Have |
| (er) | 210: | soldiers. 'He's -> soldiers.//'He's |
| (er) | 215: | doomed ceiling -> domed ceiling |
| (er) | 219, 331: | - Levitation - -> Levitation [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 227: | luck, then -> luck, and then |
| (er) | 227: | head, 'So -> head. 'So |
| (er) | 227: | creatures whom -> creatures that |
| (er) | 227: | Flank street -> Flank Street |
| (er) | 227: | 'A barrel made from Sommlending Oak'. -> "A barrel made from Sommlending oak." |
| (er) | 227: | Lyrisian soil. -> Lyrisian soil.' |
| (er) | 229: | jet black -> jet-black |
| (er) | 229: | match you off -> march you off |
| (er) | 232: | wagoneers and -> wagoneers, and |
| (er) | 233: | Well I'll -> Well, I'll |
| (er) | 234, 272, 318: | newly laid -> newly-laid |
| (er) | 237: | Quarterstaffs -> Quarterstaves [ik: as in 02fotw and 06tkot] |
| (er) | 241: | say, 'I -> say. 'I |
| (er) | 242: | back, then -> back, and then |
| (er) | 245: | Illuminatus / Kaistar -> "Illuminatus" / "Kaistar" [also: remove itals] |
| (er) | 245: | Combat bonus -> combat bonus |
| (er) | 246: | 'yes' -> 'Yes' |
| (er) | 246: | 'no' -> 'No' |
| (er) | 247: | neither seem -> neither seems |
| (er) | 248: | click, then -> click; then |
| (er) | 249: | night. -> night? |
| (er) | 249: | T'is -> 'Tis |
| (er) | 249: | for awhile -> for a while [or, awhile] |
| (er) | 250: | squeak [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 255: | back, then -> back, and then |
| (er) | 256, 349: | either the -> the |
| (er) | 257: | gaudily painted -> gaudily-painted |
| (er) | 257: | bootmakers' -> boot-makers' |
| (er) | 258: | Random Number table -> Random Number Table |
| (er) | 258: | scent, then -> scent; then |
| (er) | 259: | soldiers. 'He's -> soldiers.//'He's |
| (er) | 261: | says, 'fighting -> says. 'Fighting |
| (er) | 263, 270: | timber; raw -> timber: raw |
| (er) | 264, 277: | - Power Word - -> Power Word [also: spell (ne)] |
| (er) | 270: | driver, then -> driver, and then |
| (er) | 280: | sight, then -> sight, and then |
| (er) | 280: | rebuke, it's -> rebuke. 'It's |
| (er) | 288: | Lyris and -> Lyris, and |
| (er) | 289, 334: | white hot -> white-hot |
| (er) | 292: | vermin or -> vermin, or |
| (er) | 300: | a a great -> a great |
| (er) | 316: | disorientates -> disorients |
| (er) | 320: | clear, then -> clear, and then |
| (er) | 320, 344: | saddlemaker -> saddle-maker |
| (er) | 320: | three-storeyed shop -> three-storey shop |
| (er) | 321: | Grand Master Senior -> Kai Grand Master Senior |
| (er) | 325: | us!' Coolly -> us!'//Coolly |
| (er) | 325: | elite -> élite |
| (er) | 326: | cheese and -> cheese, and |
| (er) | 326: | 12 milk cows -> twelve milk cows |
| (er) | 326 (Illustration Caption XIX): | hay loft -> hay-loft |
| (er) | 327: | Mokradon potion -> Potion of Mokradon |
| (er) | 328: | soothingly, 'I -> soothingly. 'I |
| (er) | 328: | stammers, 'you're -> stammers. 'You're |
| (er) | 328: | Please ma'am -> Please, ma'am |
| (er) | 333: | Backpack Items list -> list of Backpack Items |
| (er) | 339: | head over heels -> head-over-heels |
| (er) | 340: | surroundings, then -> surroundings; then |
| (er) | 343: | Battle Map -> Battle-map |
| (er) | 346: | 13 of -> thirteen of |
| (er) | 348: | forest hear -> forest near |
| (er) | 350: | said the Lone -> said that Lone |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | COMBAT RULES SUMMARY -> Combat Rules Summary [RW] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Combat Skill -> COMBAT SKILL |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | cross reference -> cross-reference |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Kai Disciplines -> Grand Master Disciplines |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random -> Pick a number from the Random [SO, RW] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below. |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | Golden Star <cite> |
| (ne) | The Story So Far [x3]: | . . . <ch.ellips/> |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | Sommmerswerd -> Sommerswerd |
| (ne) | The Game Rules: | Playing Tip: [RW: Bold in original.] |
| (ne) | The Game Rules: | If you have [...] your new Action Chart. [RW: [Bold] in original] |
| (ne) | Kai Name: | [RW: [table] in original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | [RW: All Magnakai/Grandmaster headings are bold in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | (Advanced Curing) [RW:italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | (Advanced Invisibility) [RW: italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | (Advanced Divination) [RW: italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | (Old Kingdom Magic) [RW: italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | (Brotherhood Magic) [RW: italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Discplnes: | [RW: Trail of the Wolf [Link] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | mastered four of [four: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | one of the weapons [one: itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | EQUIPMENT [link] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Shield / Power Word / Invisible Fist / Lightning Hand / Levitation / Mind Charm [spell] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Trail of the Wolf [itals] |
| (ne) | Disciplines: | Fire and -> Fire, and |
| (ne) | Equipment: | map [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | Weapons List [link] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | carry is two [two: itals] |
| (ne) | Equipment: | If you have [...] may be weapons. [RWbold in the original.] |
| (ne) | Kai Weapon [x2]: | Example [RW: bold heading text] |
| (ne) | Kai Weapon: | Equipment - How to Use it [RW: [Bold] heading] |
| (ne) | Kai Weapon: | to use a [b]ow and [a]rrow -> to use a [B]ow and [A]rrow [RW] |
| (ne) | Kai Weapon: | Weapons, Bows and Arrows, Backpack Items, Special Items, Kai Weapon, Food, Potion of Laumspur [RW: Italic headings in the original] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | [RW: Various nested lists] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | Example [RW: [Bold] in the original] |
| (ne) | Levels: | No. of Grand Master Disciplines acquired [RW: italics in the original.] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | infra-vision -> infravision [linebreak] |
| (ne) | Improved Disciplines: | Mind Charm [spell] |
| (ne) | 5, 102, 166, 227: | map [link] |
| (ne) | 10, 350 [x3]: | Cloud-dancer [itals] |
| (ne) | 18, 40, 65, 115, 127, 129, 156, 183, 196, 199, 261, 280, 303, 318, 325, 328, 343, 348: | Ellipsis [Encode] |
| (ne) | 39: | Weapons List [link] |
| (ft) | 40: | This is the answer to the puzzle in 297. |
| (ne) | 63: | matchwood -> matchwood. |
| (ne) | 72, 164, 344: | south-east -> southeast |
| (ne) | 108, 131, 215, 342: | Crack! [onomatopoeia] |
| (ft) | 148, 158, 297: | Standard puzzle footnote |
| (ne) | 158: | True / Hawk [itals] |
| (ne) | 200: | a barrel made from Sommlending oak [itals] |
| (ft) | 221: | This is the answer to the puzzle in 158. |
| (ne) | 226: | vou -> you |
| (ne) | 261: | That flag -> 'That Flag |
| (ne) | 264, 277: | Gloar! [spell] |
| (ft) | 280: | This is the answer to the puzzle in 148. |
| (ne) | 286: | DANGER - ABANDONED SHAFT - DO NOT ENTER [small CAPS] |
| (ne) | 344: | This is the tunnel -> 'This is the tunnel |
| (ne) | 350: | fêted [encode] |
| Large Illustrations |
| I | 12 | Three Eldenoran soldiers share a meal of cold cooked meat and ale. |
| II | 34 | An impressive collection of Siyenese bows and Lourdenian swords catches your eye. |
| III | 44 | You look down and see a patrol of Eldenoran guardsmen rushing through the door. |
| IV | 50 | 'My loyal commanders,' says Vandyan, spreading his arms wide. |
| V | 80 | Whirling his spiked ball and chain around his head, the Sinistrari rider gets ready to strike you down. |
| VI | 115 | Hulsta and Delissa are honoured to meet you. |
| VII | 120 | Before you lies a magnificent chamber hewn from polished obsidian. |
| VIII | 143 | An Eldenoran soldier calls out for you to come and join him and his two companions at their campfire. |
| IX | 156 | The Slovian prisoner invites you to cut through the rope wound around his wrists. |
| X | 178 | Two units of armoured riders descend from the hillocks to block your path. |
| XI | 199 | You see an old woman holding a lantern in one hand and a carving knife in the other. |
| XII | 214 | The scaly head of a large black serpent rears up before your face. |
| XIII | 223 | The Ogron raises his great warhammer and takes a swipe at your head. |
| XIV | 228 | Wagons piled high with timber and iron ore pour through the city's West Gate. |
| XV | 260 | Two Eldenoran warriors stand at the approach to the drawbridge. |
| XVI | 277 | Three Vorka race up the stairs towards you clacking their fanged jaws. |
| XVII | 299 | The Vorka advances towards you with its nostrils flared wide. |
| XVIII | 314 | Eldenoran officers are poring over battle maps around a large table. |
| XIX | 326 | The farmer's eldest son climbs the ladder up to the hay loft. |
| XX | 338 | Hulsta carefully unfurls the yellowed parchment of an ancient scroll. |
| Rejected |
| (er) | Disciplines: | Why aren't Psi-surge bonuses mentioned when Mindblast is as an alternative to Kai-surge? [RW]
[SO: Space reasons. Also, the Readers' Handbook contains such material.] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | Combat Record [RW: italics in the original] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | Combat Ratio [RW: [Bold] in the original] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | Example [RW: [Bold] in the original] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | E represents [RW: E - italics] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | GM represents [RW: GM - italics] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | A summary of... [RW: [Bold] in the original] |
| (ne) | Rules for Combat: | Evasion of combat [RW: [Bold] in the original] |
| (ft) | Rules for Combat: | It is not necessarily the case that the Grand Master will lose any EP during the combat. |
| (er) | 5, 166, 310: | tracking -> Tracking |
| (er) | 8, 15, 118, 172: | Magnakai healing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 10, 80, 227, 350: | rendezvous -> rendez-vous [foreign] |
| (er) | 15, 70: | 10 feet -> ten feet |
| (er) | 22, 170, 248: | click [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 22, 67, 208, 284, 337: | 20 feet -> twenty feet |
| (er) | 25, 179: | reeve-sergeant -> Reeve-sergeant [ik: as everywhere in 23mh] [SO: Suggest reject; no specific name used (e.g. Reeve-sergeant Blah)][JB: Rejected] |
| (er) | 27, 45, 76, 86, 203, 263, 270, 296, 335: | South Gate -> south gate [263, 270: x2] |
| (er) | 27, 45, 76, 86, 203, 296, 335: | South Gate square -> South Gate Square |
| (er) | 30, 133, 218: | 30 feet -> thirty feet |
| (er) | 43, 99, 124, 153, 216: | healing -> Healing |
| (er) | 45, 76, 86, 203, 296, 335: | thud [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 52, 160, 299: | or less -> or fewer |
| (er) | 53: | Kai curing -> Magnakai Curing |
| (er) | 57, 144: | rockfall -> rock-fall |
| (er) | 80, 313: | 20 yards -> twenty yards |
| (er) | 81, 207, 232, 263, 270: | East Gate -> east gate |
| (er) | 97, 197, 226 [x2], 290 [x2]: | North Gate -> north gate |
| (er) | 102: | bank and -> bank, and |
| (??) | 111: | head-first [Is this OK?]
[JB: Yes] |
| (er) | 118: | 15 feet -> fifteen feet |
| (er) | 119, 228, 263, 270: | West Gate -> west gate |
| (er) | 119, 228, 254: | West Gate square -> West Gate Square |
| (er) | 137: | 3 feet -> three feet |
| (er) | 144: | 100 yards -> one hundred yards |
| (er) | 149, 285, 319: | camouflage -> Camouflage |
| (er) | 166, 204, 213, 278: | Sentinel or -> Sentinel, or |
| (er) | 174: | Superior or -> Superior, or |
| (er) | 196 [x2]: | 10 miles -> ten miles |
| (er) | 197, 330: | dispatched -> despatched [Rejected: cf. PAMoS] |
| (er) | 226: | Alive'. -> Alive.' |
| (er) | 239: | 30 miles -> thirty miles |
| (er) | 268: | thuds [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 298: | 50 feet -> fifty feet |
| (??) | 307: | feet-first [Is this OK?][[<<][JB: Yes] |
| (er) | 322: | 5 feet -> five feet |
| (er) | 337: | clicks [onomatopoeia] |
| (er) | 350: | 50 miles -> fifty miles |
| (ne) | 350: | Gold Rain [This is an unfortunate name fo the poor Kai Lord!] |
| (ne) | Combat Rules Summary: | E indicates loss of [RW: E - italics] |
| (er) | Ill XIV: | West Gate -> west gate |
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