| Fixed (Errata) |
| jail/jailer -> gaol/gaoler |
| (er) | The Coming of Grey Star: | web of enchantments, magical mists and mage winds => (either) web of enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds (or) web of enchantments, magical mists and mage winds, (depending on whether it's a series or an appositive) [LM] |
| (er) | The Coming of Grey Star: | nameless mountains, untamed forests and lands => nameless mountains, untamed forests, and lands [LM] |
| (er) | The Coming of Grey Star: | new found -> newfound |
| (er) | The Coming of Grey Star: | the Earth -> Magnamund [so: this has already been partially corrected to "the Magnamund", but the superfluous definite article should be removed.] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | If at any time your ENDURANCE score falls to zero, you -> If at any time your ENDURANCE score falls to zero or below, you |
| (er) | Powers: | are, is -> are is |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | You now have the number of ENDURANCE points lost by Grey Star. To calculate the number lost by the enemy, multiply this by the number of WILLPOWER points that Grey Star elected to use. Now you have the final number of ENDURANCE points lost by both Grey Star and his enemy in this round of combat. (E represents points lost by the enemy; GS represents points lost by Grey Star.) -> GS represents the number of ENDURANCE points lost by Grey Star. To calculate the number lost by the enemy, multiply the number marked 'E' by the number of WILLPOWER points that Grey Star elected to use. Now you have the final number of ENDURANCE points lost by both Grey Star and his enemy in this round of combat.
[LM: I thought former wording is possibly unclear--it sounds like the enemy always loses 3x as much as Grey Star]
[JB: "...multiply this by..." -> "...multiply the number listed for the enemy by..."] |
| (er) | Sage Advice: | A score of zero WILLPOWER points -> A WILLPOWER score of zero or below |
| (er) | Sage: | at all, so be => at all; so be [LM] |
| (er) | 4, 31, 44, 73, 148, 176, 215, 255, 276, 280, 287, 295, 340: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 195, 249 [opens on to]; 219, [moves on to]) (FIXED: 287, 340 [jump onto]; 73, 176, 280 [step onto]; 4 [vault onto]; 31 [smashes onto]; 44 [falls onto]; 148 [heaves itself onto]; 215 [wagon onto]; 255 [turns over onto]; 276 [throw herself onto]; 295 [slump forwards onto]) |
| (er) | 17: | head first -> head-first[??] |
| (er) | 18: | leadership; a => leadership: a [LM] |
| (er) | 21: | camp fire -> campfire |
| (er) | 53: | who he then forces => whom he then forces [LM] [JB: Fix] |
| (er) | 56: | The noise and confusion about you makes => The noise and confusion about you make [LM] [JB: Fix] |
| (er) | 66: | their mercy; a quality => their mercy: a quality [LM] |
| (er) | 68: | You came across => You come across [LM] |
| (er) | 74: | Shan, its easy => Shan; it's easy [LM] |
| (er) | 74: | says, weakly; 'I'll never => says, weakly. 'I'll never [LM] |
| (er) | 88: | arches -> arcs [??] |
| (er) | 110: | no longer lost. => no longer lost, [LM] |
| (er) | 127: | excited mob roar their approval => excited mob roars its approval [LM] |
| (er) | 150: | If your WILLPOWER total has now fallen to zero or lower -> If your WILLPOWER total has now fallen to zero or below |
| (er) | 165: | zero or less -> zero or below |
| (er) | 187: | A tortuous scream => A tortured scream [LM] |
| (er) | 238: | then another, then Shan => then another; then Shan [LM] |
| (er) | 260: | The fearful creature (? technically correct, but I wonder if it ought not be 'fearsome creature') [LM] |
| (er) | 289: | There is no option for exactly 15 WILLPOWER. [TW]
[SO: more than 15 -> 15 or more] |
| (er) | 294: | There is no option for exactly 10 ENDURANCE. [TW]
[SO: greater than 10 -> 10 or more] |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | The Game Rules, Footnotes [x2]: | score falls to zero, you -> score falls to zero or below, you |
| (ne) | Equipment: | Wizard's Staff--Carried => Wizard's Staff--carried (all others in list are lower case) [LM] |
| (ne) | 41: | At the far tend => At the far end [LM] |
| (ne) | 42: | futile battle; for the => futile battle, for the [LM] |
| (ne) | 77: | 'Beware,' Warns Shan => 'Beware,' warns Shan [LM] |
| (ft) | 86: | You repeat your prophecy to Shan (you didn't necessarily use Prophecy) [LM]
[It is possible to arrive here without having used the Power of Prophecy.] |
| (ne) | 87: | 125 -> 125. |
| (ne) | 131: | fuming -> turning [as reported by Kayvohn via the Contact Portal] |
| (ne) | 215: | fair north => far north [LM] |
| (ne) | 230: | Realization of your terrible plight come => Realization of your terrible plight comes [LM] |
| (ne) | Footnotes: | The bonus to your WILLPOWER score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your WILLPOWER score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero. -> The bonus to your WILLPOWER score provided by the Magic Talisman is added to your WILLPOWER score only once and does not prevent your score from falling to zero or below. |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 15): | your current ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER scores by 1.5. I.e. you may add...score, -> your current ENDURANCE and WILLPOWER scores by 1.5 (i.e. you may add...score), |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 193): | but make a note that you instead are now wearing the ointment -> but make a note that you are now wearing the ointment instead |
| (ne) | Footnote (Section 259): | your opponents loss of ENDURANCE -> your opponent's loss of ENDURANCE |
| (ne) | Footnote #31: | as your COMBAT SKILL for this combat. => as your COMBAT SKILL for this combat? [LM] |
| (ne) | Footnote #31: | to us it => to use it [LM] |
| (ne) | Errata: | new found with new-found -> new found with newfound |
| (ne) | Errata: | both Items -> both items |
