| Fixed |
| All occurrences (or just some?) of on to -> onto | [jb: not all occurrences require a fix] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | ENDURANCE points fall to zero -> ENDURANCE points fall to zero or below
[so: This relates to all other LW/GS/FW books] |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | This process of combat continues until ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points reduced. -> This process of combat continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Lone Wolf are reduced to zero or below, ... If the enemy is dead, Lone Wolf proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Rules for Combat: | at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead. -> at which point that combatant is declared dead. |
| (er) | 12: | agreeing a wager -> agreeing to a wager [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 24: | Fox He -> Fox. He [Keith Sheldon]
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 28: | useful Items -> useful items |
| (er) | 38: | Shouldn't "spear" be capitalized, since it's referring to the Magic Spear taken from Section 134? [AY] |
| (er) | 75: | Sir, requires -> Sir requires [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 76: | these Items -> these items |
| (er) | 79: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (??) | 79: | Helghasts -> Helghast
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 91: | two Items -> two items |
| (er) | 91: | above Items -> above items |
| (er) | 113: | magician's guild -> Magicians' Guild [so: maybe?] |
| (er) | 122: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 126: | jail -> gaol
[jb: The series seems very inconsistent with with this British/American English conflict. The word "jail" is found roughly this many times in the following books: 01gstw:27, 02fotw:1, 05sots:8. The word "gaol": 01hh:1, 02smr:1, 03tcok:1, 03toz:1, 06tkot:1, 07cd:7, 08tjoh:2, 15tdc:10, 18dotd:9, 19wb:2. Should we standardize?] |
| (er) | 150: | marshbird -> marsh-bird [so: or, marsh bird] |
| (er) | 163 [x2]: | said -> says [NM] |
| (er) | 168: | villagers, with -> villagers with [Dewi Morgan, August 2008] |
| (er) | 176: | Hammerdal mountains -> Hammerdal Mountains
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 181: | Useful Items -> useful items |
| (er) | 181: | above Items -> above items |
| (er) | 184: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 187: | following Items -> following items |
| (er) | 195: | Durncrag mountains -> Durncrag Mountains
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 204: | magician's guild -> Magicians' Guild [so: maybe?]
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 217: | says in a cynical voice. -> says in a cynical voice:
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 220: | Section 33: Thugs have a tattoo on the left wrist. Illustration: Tattoo on right wrist. Section 220: Tattoo on left wrist. Therefore, left -> right [as per Mongoose edition] |
| (er) | 228: | to left and right -> to the left and right [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 243: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 261: | first option uses "person" (singular) and the second uses "their (plural) desperate pleas" [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 266: | Quarterstaffs -> Quarterstaves [ik: as in 06tkot] |
| (er) | 268: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 283: | above Items -> above items |
| (er) | 289: | seal -> Seal [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 299: | Hammerdal mountains -> Hammerdal Mountains
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 300: | Wanlo -> wanlo |
| (er) | 302: | whatever Items -> whatever items |
| (er) | 306: | his score reaches zero -> his score reaches zero or below |
| (er) | 306: | points to zero -> points to zero or below |
| (er) | 308: | each dice -> each die [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | 321: | Kai lord -> Kai Lord
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 331: | these Items -> these items |
| (er) | 345: | jet black -> jet-black
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 350: | Durncrag mountains -> Durncrag Mountains
[jb: fix it] |
| (er) | 350: | air, continually -> air continually [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (er) | Illustrations 1-20: | Add period to the end of each caption. |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | This is when ENDURANCE points of either character fall to 0. -> This is when ENDURANCE points of either character falls to 0 or below.
[so: This relates to all other LW/GS/FW books] |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Pick number from Random-> Pick a number from the Random |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | Turn to Combat -> Turn to the Combat |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | to random number -> to the random number |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | when ENDURANCE -> when the ENDURANCE |
| (er) | Combat Rules Summary: | ignored, -> ignored; |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Title Page: | devestation -> devastation |
| (ne) | 4: | comer -> corner [IK] |
| (ne) | 73: | comer -> corner [Solenoid T] |
| (ne) | 117: | ride on, the roof -> ride on the roof [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 181: | It should probably be footnoted here that buying a second backpack will not grant another 8 slots. [Dewi Morgan, August 2008] |
| (ne) | 182: | Turn to 177 -> Turn to 177. |
| (ne) | 224, 242: | realise -> realize |
| (ne) | 266: | Daggers 2 Gold Crown -> Daggers 2 Gold Crowns [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ne) | 303: | fitter -> litter [LeRoy McSwain, Jan 2007] |
| (ft) | 328: | Footnote: Pendant). -> Pendant. (LOT: Or maybe 'The Tracking' -> '(The Tracking' )
[jb: fix it] |
| (ft) | 332: | Should this Helghast be immune to Mindblast as all others are?
[jb: A quick, rough search of the books indicates that this is the only time that Lone Wolf fights a Helghast which is not indicated to be immune to Mindblast. I'm tempted to correct this as errata. Thoughts?] |
| (ne) | 334: | Revert the replacement of "pot-holes" with "potholes" |
| (ft) | 337: | Newsletter #2: You lose all the items in your Backpack but without losing the Backpack itself.
[jb: This is already footnoted, but a reference to which newsletter this clarification was found in would be best.] |
| (ne) | Footnotes: | (Section 94) Rememeber -> (Section 94) Remember
[jb: fix it] |
| (ne) | Footnotes: | Remove the superfluous 'Section' before each section number on the list. |
