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4: California Countdown
| Pending |
| (er) | 19, 344: | signposted -> sign-posted [??] |
| (er) | 51, 315 [x2]: | Santa Rosa bridge -> Santa Rosa Bridge [irs: Is there actually a named 'Santa Rosa Bridge', or is it just a bridge over the Santa Rosa Wash?] |
| (er) | 153: | fitment -> fitting [??] [irs: valid, though fitting is much more widely used] |
| (er) | 202, 279: | orthopaedic -> orthopedic [irs: orthopaedic is the predominant British spelling, I think it's fine as it is] |
| (er) | 246 [x2]: | supermart -> Supermart |
| (er) | 250: | unseeingly -> unseeing [or, sightlessly] |
| Small Illustrations |
| Small 1: | Welcome to California sign | |
| Small 2: | Mountains & dam | |
| Small 3: | Pick-up Truck & Outlaws Graffiti | |
| Small 4: | VF-213 Emblem | |
| Small 5: | Fire Extinguisher & Supplies | |
| Small 6: | Army Aircraft | |
| Small 7: | Water Pipe | |
| Small 8: | Atropine; Pill Bottle | |
| Small 9: | CB Radios | |
| Small 10: | Chainsaw; Lions Logo | |
| Small 11: | Binoculars | |
| Small 12: | Code Puzzle | 337 |
| Fixed |
| (er) | Many: | on to -> onto (REJECTED: 9 [press on to]; 102, 170 [hang on to]; 350 [hold on to])
(FIXED: 205, 285 [jump onto]; 291, 306, 349 [climb onto]; 7 [leap onto]; 25, 334 [crash onto]; 290 [it onto]; 63, 223, 329, 348 [down onto]; 201 [smashing onto]; 225 [empty...onto]; 257, 264 265 [out onto]; 16, 312 [back onto]; 62, 211 [loaded...onto]; 76 [load...onto]; 86 [emerge onto]; 185 [out onto]; 327 [drive onto the forecourt]) |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction [x2]: | USSR and -> USSR, and |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction: | cable and -> cable, and |
| (er) | Dateline to Destruction: | Hijack, Assassination and Violent Opposition Consortium. -> Hijack, Assassination, and Violent Opposition Consortium. [LM] |
| (er) | Dateline To Destruction: | destined to be neutralized and dismantled -> slated to be neutralized and dismantled [LM: It wasn't their destiny if they were stolen] |
| (er) | Dateline To Destruction: | declare emergency -> declare an emergency [LM] |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | adventure you -> adventure, you |
| (er) | The Game Rules: | on to -> onto |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | motocycles and -> motorcycles, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | shotguns and -> shotguns, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | reflexes and -> reflexes, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | education and -> education, and |
| (er) | Survival Skills: | tested, therefore -> tested; therefore [LM] |
| (er) | Rules For Close Combat: | This procedure continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Cal Phoenix are reduced to zero, at which point the one whose score is zero is declared dead. If Cal Phoenix is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Cal Phoenix proceeds but with a reduced ENDURANCE point score. -> This procedure continues until the ENDURANCE points of either the enemy or Cal Phoenix are reduced to zero or below, at which point that combatant is declared dead. If Cal Phoenix is dead, the adventure is over. If the enemy is dead, Cal Phoenix proceeds but with his ENDURANCE points possibly reduced. |
| (er) | Equipment: | Canteen and -> Canteen, and |
| (er) | Equipment: | radioactivity) and -> radioactivity), and |
| (er) | 2: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 4, 66, 182, 199, 229, 271: | shockwave -> shock wave |
| (er) | 31: | storerooms -> store rooms |
| (er) | 41, 198: | floorplan -> floor plan |
| (er) | 43: | reopens -> re-opens [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 55, 76, 174, 211: | syphon -> siphon |
| (er) | 68: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 74: | blood stains -> bloodstains |
| (er) | 121: | No!... -> No...! |
| (er) | 160: | doin' boy -> doin', boy |
| (er) | 203, 310: | storeroom -> store room |
| (er) | 215: | clanmen's -> clansmen's |
| (er) | 221: | reopens -> re-opens [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 238: | zig-zags -> zigzags |
| (er) | 243: | Jeager -> Jaeger |
| (er) | 315: | Cuckelbur -> Cucklebur |
| (er) | 315: | reply; 'I'll -> reply. 'I'll |
| (er) | 336: | half-way -> halfway [ik: as in the PAMoS] |
| (er) | 342: | much-needed -> much needed [IK: as per PAMoS] |
| (er) | 342: | schoolbus -> school bus |
| Fixed (Not Errata) |
| (ne) | Title: | Finalise text for Brian Williams fw.inc file [Brian Williams was first noticed by Joe Dever for his work in White Dwarf magazine (circa issue 50) and the Real Life Gamebooks series by Jon Sutherland and Simon Farrell. Brian Williams was Joe's first choice of illustrators to replace Gary Chalk on the Lone Wolf series. Brian also illustrated three of the four books in Joe Dever's Freeway Warrior series.] |
| (ne) | The Story So Far: | DCl -> DC1 |
| (ne) | Rules For Close Combat: | CLOSE COMBAT SKILL [encode as attribute] |
| (ne) | Rules For Close Combat: | [LM: link from <close combat> leads to <numbered sections> not section 1] |
| (ne) | 87: | chums -> churns |
| (ne) | 247: | en masse [foreign tags] |
| (ne) | 287: | nightmare, -> nightmare. |
| (ne) | 290: | Whumph! [onomatopoeia] |
| Rejected |
| (er) | The Story So Far: | rendezvoused -> rendez-voused [also: foreign (er)] |
| (er) | 111: | Strength [Arthur Chu: There is no Strength score in the books. My feeling is that the best solution is to take CCS - 10 and without any Close Combat Weapon bonuses, except the ones explicitly stated in the section.] [Iain: The Stealth skill covers Physical Fitness, I just used this] |
| (er) | 152: | groundsheets -> ground sheets |
| (er) | 242: | backhandedly -> back-handedly |
| (er) | 250: | Fly Agaric [foreign??] [irs: Not foreign, this is the English name (though it may have a foreign base), the latin would be 'Amanita Muscaria'] |
| (er) | 339: | Cucklebur -> Cuckelbur [cf. 315] [irs: It's the other way around, Cucklebur is an actual town in Arizona] |
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